noridna Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 rews that shit is hard Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noridna Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 LERN the lines are clean but structure is off. diggin that layered look though. I'm in the same boat as you, just gotta draw every chance you get and one day it'll click. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 massgraff, it's fine if you don't like how i critique, no offense, but at least i don't say "dope" or "that's good" to everything that's posted here. i'm honest with my critiques, and that honesty helps people to grow and improve. isn't that the whole reason this thread is here? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReSoN OnEr Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 rews that shit is hard thanks man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 got high and overtweeked the fill a bit, especially the bottom part. It's gonna get erased... erased... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RES4 Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 this is my first post. what do you think? this is pretty bad. cant believe youve been writing for two years zero structure. zero flow. i was going to say something good about it but i couldnt see anything. im not trying to hate im just trying to make you realise. once you stop thinking your amazing youll get so much better. trust me i was the same at the start Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeeekedUp Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 LERN the lines are clean but structure is off. diggin that layered look though. I'm in the same boat as you, just gotta draw every chance you get and one day it'll click. yeahhh paper everydayy haha keepin it simple till i get it all downn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sharpies Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 yeahhh paper everydayy haha keepin it simple till i get it all downn Was logged in different acc* haha my bad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sharpies Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 rews! diggin that style man lovin those chars too haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 fuck i wish i had teh skills/supplies to do shit like this. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oM3Kz8zmKFU&feature=related Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sharpies Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 This dude that was in my grade that i went to school sketched this pretty sure it took him about a month Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 got high and overtweeked the fill a bit, especially the bottom part. It's gonna get erased... erased... bottom of the page bump Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 massgraff, it's fine if you don't like how i critique, no offense, but at least i don't say "dope" or "that's good" to everything that's posted here. i'm honest with my critiques, and that honesty helps people to grow and improve. isn't that the whole reason this thread is here? your right... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noridna Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 "this is pretty bad. cant believe youve been writing for two years zero structure. zero flow. i was going to say something good about it but i couldnt see anything. im not trying to hate im just trying to make you realise. once you stop thinking your amazing youll get so much better. trust me i was the same at the start" naw it's not that bad. show me where I said I was amazing though? constructive criticism is one thing but I didn't come here for a lecture. not trying to start beef but unless you got something useful to say then save your smart ass remarks for someone else. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noridna Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 fuck i wish i had teh skills/supplies to do shit like this. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oM3Kz8zmKFU&feature=related that dude's a pro. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sech Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReSoN OnEr Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 rews! diggin that style man lovin those chars too haha lol thanks man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 no crits or comments on my newest? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
painthatifitintblack Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 pretty clean kele, i'd loose the orange electric bolt things though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 so, change the forcefield? cool, i can accept that. Anything on the letter structure? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 redeyed, i feel like you went all out on the e's and k, but kept it more simple on the k. i guess that's more a stylistic thing as opposed to a structure thing, your e's could've been a bit more consistent, however if you intended to make them different from each other then make them REALLY different. for the most part i don't think it's a particularly bad idea, i think you should work on it and tweak it a bit though. and i like that 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sech Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 Why do a c straight letter with a wildstyle piece? There is no balance in that piece, wilds are all about balance and proportion. The split in the S is kinda weird, and the H doesn't match the SE well at all. Looks like you were inspired by site in the new sketch thread. Not sayin bitin, just inspiration. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 kele the letters are good..feelin the 3d as well..also like was said the orange bursts looked wierd. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sech Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 why do a c straight letter with a wildstyle piece? There is no balance in that piece, wilds are all about balance and proportion. The split in the S is kinda weird, and teh H doesn't match teh SE well at all. Looks like you were inspired by site in tne new sketch thread. Not sayin bitin, just inspiration. thanks ,back to sketchin now. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 thanks freak, much appreciated. :D The K does need more tweeking then? Maybe just a serif like the one on the bottom of the first E? I decided to bring back the K so as not to bitch out on a challenge. Thanks to everyone that gave me shit (freak especially). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AWZK Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 been a minute..what do you think Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AWZK Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 the ts are a little lame Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_doodoo Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 diggin the cruiser Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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