Port-A-John Enthusiest Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 who me? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haz 13 Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 i dont like copying into ohter people or example....i think that if u keep praticing enought it would flow on itself Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune1 Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 im not saying to copy people's graffiti, im saying look at a word proccessor like word perfect, or open office and try to replicate the fonts. you can keep tryin your own thing, but it will get better faster if you practice with established fonts. trust us Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 Listen to rune. He gives solid advice. Do simples, copy fonts, keep proportions right, etc. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
viseversa101 Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 sumthin i just finished...good for a signature Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashing young and bold Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 yada yada yada. too much talk. post flicks. give short constructive criticism. take it or leave it. sloppy quick shits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 take more time on your shits. Don't be so sloppy. *edit - checked out 2 pages back - Tone down the extensions a little bit and let the letters stand on their own for now. I like where you are headed, keep refining and progressing and it will look dope pretty soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashing young and bold Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 2 pages back are some i spent some time on. they're clean if you wanna go back and check em out? i just need to be in the mood to spend more than 3 minutes on a sketch. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
viseversa101 Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 i was gona say the same thing dash, i alreadychecked em..the black 1 should have a dif color outline imo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashing young and bold Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 i actually thought the blue outline was pretty fresh haha. but i dunno, to each his own right? and to everyone else it's been said countless times. simples simples simples. you need to get a feel for letters and understand their structure before you can have decent style. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 I think the blue outline is fresh. More crits on the last page with my post. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 Just in general: a lot of you guys don't need to worry about fills yet. Don't waste your markers. Practice your letter form until you got it solid. Or totally disregard this. That's fine too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo123 Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noone57 Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 something simple from me for a start...... the second one is kinda fucked up 'cause of the scanner, the shading is all messed up a few comments and tips would be alright Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 Let tha living die. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
viseversa101 Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 dope phere, thicker outline on ur letters wuld make it pop Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bitefight Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 that pher is to dope Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mind617 Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 you look like an old fart freek...dope letters though. freakys still wet behind the ears, talkin bout old, lest u prob older hahaha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 i just wouldn't connect the h and e extention on that pher i think... but i can dig those letters and scheme Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 i agree about the connection. also, the left extension on the P and the far right extension on the leg of the R don't fit right. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 something simple from me for a start...... http://i41.tinypic.com/2dqm9s.jpg[/img http://i43.tinypic.com/o8uses.jpg[/img the second one is kinda fucked up 'cause of the scanner, the shading is all messed up a few comments and tips would be alright Keyboard simples....learn them...draw them...never stop loving them. That Pher is fucking dope. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 thanx for tha feedback.. but yeah im still tryin to get tha hang of connections and extensions.. imma keep tryin different ones tho. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo123 Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 alright im gettin no feedback ya its not the best but i think i have the proportion im using bars and its spaced right i think i need to know what else i need to do besides practice more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 in somewhat of a chronological order? . i know it needs more arrowz but? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 silo, you got plenty of feedback on that piece. do another with what you have leaned from the last. sending you a link that might help. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 Some simples. That last one's kinda shoddy, but whatevs. Part of learning. Critiques, please. Thanks, guys. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 the top one is where its at man * on your sig, just do regular letters, like you usually write, but more deliberate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BuffSuckazOffKillin5085 Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 Just lookin 4 comments :P Good ? Bad! Let me know what's up and what to do next :D ?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 BuffSuckazOffKillin5085: that looks fucking terrible man. trash all of those letters and focus on simples. and maybe trash the name too, but keep it as long that you keep on paper. and no arrowz. on another note. VIRTUE: amazing improvements man. just keep doing that and you'd be on your way. and i'm really diggin those sodem Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PoisenvilleKid Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 http://img177.imageshack.us/i/20100420065.jpg/ http://img265.imageshack.us/i/20100420066u.jpg/ The colours look awefukl cuz I used flash but there it is, my first colour sketches. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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