UncleDonny Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forsteviewonderseyesonly Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 not toy at all fresh a seven color fill can't hide bad letter structure... 'cheap' your starting out simple, that's good. i'd personally make that 'e' more of a straight letter type of 'e' and replace the 'a' with a capital one. bang your 3-d out a little more too, there's a lot of negative space in that 'c'. 'enigma' it's good to see you're progressing, keep it up. fix your 3-d, take the little heart thing out of the 'm', and make the 'n' more traditional and it'll look a lot better. 'kirby' make the 'c' look like more of a 'c'. 'naris' the hand is straight cause it's simple, it'll definately look a lot better painted. but try making it more proportional 'cnue & duse' post some shit, it's alwasy nice to see your works 'steve wonder' shit's whack as fuck... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UncleDonny Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 'cheap' your starting out simple, that's good. i'd personally make that 'e' more of a straight letter type of 'e' and replace the 'a' with a capital one. bang your 3-d out a little more too, there's a lot of negative space in that 'c'. QUOTE] thanx 4 the tips. yea def alot of neg space on the c.....tough to do drawing so big but ill work on it. jus tryin 2 keep it simple. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JakeBaumer44 Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 'steve wonder' shit's whack as fuck... i disagree by the way. He is one person here with nice letter structure. Yo Naris here are some sample tags. Try and mix up your letter more, make it flow better. i know they are pretty similar but i couldnt think of any other way to do it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UncleDonny Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 i need tips on the hand make ur letters narrower and try fucking around with some extensions or something. also those sketches are creative. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OLSE Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 the second from last is the best. do it with a capital I and make the S more "tight" and it would look snazzy at least the way i see it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JakeBaumer44 Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 they arent for me, they are ideas for naris. guess it still helps though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maviK_ Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 cheap whats up not bad good job keepin it simple, i've been sein ur hands and shit around try doin just dope simple bubble letters i think it would look good w/ ur name and some drop shadow Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OLSE Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 fat uncolored simplezzzz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maviK_ Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 hey here is a sketch i did for satire, idk i was bored and wanted to mess around w/ the letters so here it is.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defone123 Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 that second verbs is fresh. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJ Ren Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 thanks for the crits...ill keep those things in mind Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UncleDonny Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 cheap whats up not bad good job keepin it simple, i've been sein ur hands and shit around try doin just dope simple bubble letters i think it would look good w/ ur name and some drop shadow thanx man been tryin 2 spend more time drawing so i come off cleaner when i paint. but we should get up sometime. ill try and actually follow through with a rendezvouz next time i ask if u wana paint. pce. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justRAM Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 odv not done Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maviK_ Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 yea i should be around, if i see u around the city maybe we can go out and paint Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Flowsmith Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 chee !! BUMP this Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypergraphia Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 thanks for the help everybody Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stanly_parker Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 how is this.. u think it would be better without the extensions? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnneh7 Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 fuck man. i dunno if any of you remember the throws i posted in here, but the way my A and S connected is tons like askews new throw. for those of you that remember heres his throw im too lazy to dig mine up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypergraphia Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 if its just the connection i dont think you should change your throw Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forsteviewonderseyesonly Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 that askew is fresh as fuck but i doubt it's his throwie not many people use their piece letters as their throwies why don't you post a picture of your throwie? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forsteviewonderseyesonly Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 i disagree by the way. He is one person here with nice letter structure. that was a joke, if you didnt notice i was the one who posted that about my own shit. thanks though, i never get recognition for my shit so i felt left out and gave myself some feedback. haha 'dank' take all of the extentions out. 'serz, segz whatever' that's tight, keep it up and clean it up. 'satire' fix the 's' up and take that pointy thing out of the 't' and it's straight. 'naris' the 3rd and 5th hands are pretty tight. 'knim' it's nice to see you want to do something creative, but like everyone tells anyone else, work on making your simples fresh before you try to progress beyond your level. 'olser' more proportional and make it skinnier. it looks like a bad air brush artist's letters honestly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sole-One Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 i like that mare sketch^ update i dont suggest venturing into 3d before u get down 2d letter structure Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 ^ agreed. new throwy. planning to paint this weekend. hopefulyl i can get a b4 and after photo. crits. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maviK_ Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 idk man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypergraphia Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 define i think that you had better throws update something quick hand Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 i like the red one A LOT. space out the I and S a little bit more. and work on your handstyle a lot. just have your pen flow, be all messy, maybe try script and then evolving from their. yo maybe u wanna do a little exchange? black and white with a keyline? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XOIzBettuh Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 fuck man. i dunno if any of you remember the throws i posted in here, but the way my A and S connected is tons like askews new throw. for those of you that remember heres his throw im too lazy to dig mine up. I remember that one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forsteviewonderseyesonly Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypergraphia Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 yo maybe u wanna do a little exchange? black and white with a keyline? ill post yours today or tomorrow... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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