wordisborn212 Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 FEEDBACK CRITS PLEASE :) :huh: hyper im not being close minded and i appreciate your crits and feedback but i dont understand why u said go simpler. the only thing i thought that going simpler wud be better with was the red one with the yellow force-field. can u specify? thanks alot. dont take it the wrong way cuz i apreciate ur input :huh: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enigmatic Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 what the hell? dood smaller font please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wordisborn212 Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 ^^i like the BLITS but the S is a little fucked up and maybe the ITS shud be seperated a little, their kinda cramped Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypergraphia Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 hyper im not being close minded and i appreciate your crits and feedback but i dont understand why u said go simpler. the only thing i thought that going simpler wud be better with was the red one with the yellow force-field. can u specify? thanks alot. dont take it the wrong way cuz i apreciate ur input[/size] :huh: dont take it the wrong way but your letter structure is not good at all in all 4 pictures you posted and letter structure is key. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maviK_ Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 ho2 can you not understand what go simpler means.. you write fantom you say? FANTOM do those letters not that shit.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 jees: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wordisborn212 Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 ho2 can you not understand what go simpler means.. you write fantom you say? FANTOM do those letters not that shit.. :D oh gee thanks for telling me to write my own fuckin name (idk if you can sense the sarcasm) and dmi whats the point of doing straight ass microsoft word letters in graf? not original or impressive. this is graf not sign-making, if u cant do what ur trying to do u shudnt start doing kindergarden letters. idk why everyone in the forums says to go do SIMPLES, ok "go simpler"--=good advice, but when it gets SO simple that theres no style in it that shits dead and its letters not graf, DRAW the LETTERS don't WRITE THEM, theres a diference and thats what sets graf apart from shit you see on billboards and store-fronts :o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 thats true and all. but what ive come to learn is that starting with the letters on your keyboard, and slowly working your way up adding extensions n shit is how its done. idc what you do. i kinda am doing what ur doin. im trying bending the simples into dif letters now and stuff. idk have fun man. pce. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maviK_ Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 hahahahaha impressive? the more you do your simple letters the more you develop style.. u dont just pick up a pencil and some prismas your mom bought u and do a full color burner in your school notebook.. you gotta actually start with simple letters and learn how they work.. heres an example of why YOU need to go simpler.. last time i checked, F's didnt look like T's with a tumor coming out the side..N's arent supposed to look like wack K's and your A isnt supposed to have some extentionc oming out of the side the best letter there is your T i dont even wana get into your other sketches.. graff is supposed to be readable.. and graffiti is writing.. do this if you kno whats write for you FANTOM over and over again then you can start to do little changes... not trying to be a dick, but you are completely unknowables about what graffiti is it seems.. mark ecko must have not givin you a good enuff explanation good day son! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 mark ecko must have not givin you a good enuff explanation good day son! that was harsh. anyways, do what he says, i mean ive been doing that and i have seen results. from the time i started doing graff to the time now, ive improved. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
life WDS Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 merry x mas, and happy holidays bois..smoke suttin, new shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enigmatic Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 what the hell? dood smaller font please. omg thats the dopest isht ive EVER seen in my life bumpasoraous rex. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypergraphia Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 :D oh gee thanks for telling me to write my own fuckin name (idk if you can sense the sarcasm) and dmi whats the point of doing straight ass microsoft word letters in graf? not original or impressive. this is graf not sign-making, if u cant do what ur trying to do u shudnt start doing kindergarden letters. idk why everyone in the forums says to go do SIMPLES, ok "go simpler"--=good advice, but when it gets SO simple that theres no style in it that shits dead and its letters not graf, DRAW the LETTERS don't WRITE THEM, theres a diference and thats what sets graf apart from shit you see on billboards and store-fronts :o alright ill break it down for you letter structure is the most important thing in graff when youre doing keyboard letters youre focusing on the letters - you "remember" how theyre built and you learn how to do straight lines. but the most important thing keyboard letters give you is somewhere to start if you do keyboard letters, it looks good and you cant screw them up. after you can do them with your eyes closed you start to bend them, make em wider in some places and by that you learn how to keep them flowing (in style), even when you change them. i started like this, everybody i know started like this, and it really helps its the basics and if you want to get better in a year and not in ten then i suggest you do simples PEACE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 merry x mas, and happy holidays bois..smoke suttin, new shit dope throwy mate. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 feeling the top throwie never seen u post that one.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wordisborn212 Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 last time i checked, F's didnt look like T's with a tumor coming out the side..N's arent supposed to look like wack K's and your A isnt supposed to have some extentionc oming out of the side the best letter there is your T i dont even wana get into your other sketches.. graff is supposed to be readable.. and graffiti is writing.. ""graff is supposed to be readable...":rolleyes::nope: i shudnt even have to elaborate on how wrong that is but i guess u dont think wildstyle is graffiti?:o idk i guess that when u do your sketches or paintings your kindergarten teacher looks over your shoulder and gives you gold stars when you do a boring ass typewriter letter Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wordisborn212 Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 alright ill break it down for you letter structure is the most important thing in graff when youre doing keyboard letters youre focusing on the letters - you "remember" how theyre built and you learn how to do straight lines. but the most important thing keyboard letters give you is somewhere to start if you do keyboard letters, it looks good and you cant screw them up. after you can do them with your eyes closed you start to bend them, make em wider in some places and by that you learn how to keep them flowing (in style), even when you change them. i started like this, everybody i know started like this, and it really helps its the basics and if you want to get better in a year and not in ten then i suggest you do simples PEACE thanks 4 the helpful crits, seems like no1 knows how to give polite crits or suggestions anymore. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 eh words hope ya understand, btw if i was rude my bad ok lads, heres a new one. bout 45 min. partly bcuz my MOTHERFUCKING N didnt wanna look like an N. oh this is also my sketch where i did it lenthwise in my book. crits pleaseizzle. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maviK_ Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 nah man ur startin to do to much those E's dont look like E's Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 bump/new. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lykeomgz Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 jees: what ever happend to that girl. gave up? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wordisborn212 Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 bump/new. u werent rude. and forget whoisthis those E's r sick and original, i like the chimese type of style know what im sayin? and the thros nice too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blart.BOS Posted December 25, 2007 Share Posted December 25, 2007 what ever happend to that girl. gave up? i heard she bombin with cope 2 every day Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bambu Posted December 25, 2007 Share Posted December 25, 2007 u werent rude. and forget whoisthis those E's r sick and original, i like the chimese type of style know what im sayin? and the thros nice too WORDISBORN!!!! relax, take your crits, and bite your tongue. i first showed up here posting rediculous peices. thinking my shit looked "cool." well it wasn't. and everybody told me so. and i did what you did and i talked shit back, cuz i didn't wanna face the facts. my shit was ugly, and i needed to do simples.... well guess what wordisborn... Your shit is ugly. and you need to do simples. they're not boring. they help. and they give you a chance to do stuff that you look over when you try to straight burn a page up (i.e. cracks, highlight, dropshadow, etc.) if someone says your shits ugly and doesnt give crits. fuckem. but if people are giving you critisizm and you just dont wanna hear it, post on mindgem. they're a lot "nicer" over there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bambu Posted December 25, 2007 Share Posted December 25, 2007 bump/new. and define.. not bad.. i too am not diggin the E's. i'd say loose one of those two spines of the E that poke out the top, and keep tweakin the top arm of the E. its a little much. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 25, 2007 Share Posted December 25, 2007 alright thanks. christmas in like 5 hrs. :D :D :D :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arrrrrrrrrrgh Posted December 25, 2007 Share Posted December 25, 2007 all you guys in this thread are douches Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 25, 2007 Share Posted December 25, 2007 all you guys in this thread are douches Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJ Ren Posted December 25, 2007 Share Posted December 25, 2007 daniel powerpuff...you got style. sloppy scribbles.. yey merry crimbo bump this!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JakeBaumer44 Posted December 25, 2007 Share Posted December 25, 2007 Yo Wordisborn: ur shit looks like a dogs excretion, five days old thats been baking in the hot sun, after being ran over by a tractor trailer. Stop frontin dawg. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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