Craz-E Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 critz bump Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
life WDS Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 CRAZE, wats up wit those letters man? not bad but they look anorexic. and ur A is skinnier than the other letters. do the same thing, but i wanna see wat it look like if u make the letters fatter, and equal size Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
den Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 hey den man your seriously gonna hear this 100 times, but simple letters are where youve gotta start, check out that NYEVE piece up earlier on this page, or the last one i just posted, should hopefully give you an idea of what i mean by simples well, those are pertty simple, i mean, i dont know, i think they are....but if you mean REALLLY simple when you say simple then i guess yeah, they could be more simple Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 craz e--listen to life, make those letters fatter. you've got the right idea though. also, don't say "bump critz." the word "bump" is so over used on here. den --go simple, real simple. don't try to put fill in there yet, just work on letter structure. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Craz-E Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 i dont think bump is too bad man. its just i was looking for your bit earl considering u gave me the advice. ill go fatter next time. agreed the a is a little skinny. i think i was worried i wouldnt fit the next 2 letters at that point. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 can i get critz on this.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FATE52262 Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 well im on this page ima ask, anyone got any crits for me on that DIRE peice i just posted up, aside from not using lined paper, oh and freak, shit looks real nice, id like to see it colored though, cause the stuff behind it makes it look confusing for me, so if you dont wanna go through the coloring just like go over your lines with a thicker black, it would make it easier to see, but yeah thats all i got, nice work man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 dire...the d and the e are kinda shaky...i mean the d is really bigger..and the hole in it should be bigger...the bottom of the e is not always the smae thickness.....umm it would look better if all the letters were capitals..and if it was a lil more spaced out...and yea like said before try computer paper instead..and just do a cup of pen sketches... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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life WDS Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 freak thats shits clean, ur 3D is a bit off tho, and u made sum of the 3D bigger than other parts, but hey its only 3D, the piece itself is good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blart.BOS Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 new throw, says sank Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 thanks life and dire..sank make the a and the n a lil wider...just a suggestion Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaos Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 hey kaos heres your piece, sorry bout the coloring, my first time wit paint pens, although i think it turned out really well, to my standards at least, and joewindsor ill have yours up as soon as i can dude i think i ill have urs up by today Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
life WDS Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 SANK not really feelin the S and N but thats jus me, maybe try and uppercase N? the A and K are pretty good tho, keep workin on it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nbamlbballer Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 what u talkin bout man that "s" up there in the sank is pretty dope, props man i like Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
life WDS Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 what u talkin bout man that "s" up there in the sank is pretty dope, props man i like relax home boy, the S aint really my cup of tea, thats jus my opinion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lykeomgz Posted April 14, 2007 Share Posted April 14, 2007 simples... different stages. the 2nd one got a little crooked. i took a break and came back to it and it came out crooked. w/e. oh and on the second one im trying to figure out the 3d look. as you can tell i suck though. crits would be appreeshd Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal.method Posted April 14, 2007 Share Posted April 14, 2007 why would you pick eurf..i dislik the borf name..and that just remind me of it...why in gods name did you pick EURF Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vertigo Posted April 14, 2007 Share Posted April 14, 2007 Kay man. I'll stop writin' Dfekt. Sweet name by the way. suks I didn't think of it first. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Craz-E Posted April 14, 2007 Share Posted April 14, 2007 fatter... knew i would ran out of room. going slow but probably will do some 3d crit and crit or just ignore that handstyle on the side. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arc crew Posted April 14, 2007 Share Posted April 14, 2007 I Write "SELF" and i am still kinda toy? But what hits me is "S". Can anyone post up a character sheet or something that can get me going going?? thanks ARC 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaos Posted April 14, 2007 Share Posted April 14, 2007 http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v516/hillbilly159/Picture070.jpg heres that piece for Fate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louise2wease Posted April 14, 2007 Share Posted April 14, 2007 sarcasm doesnt show too well on the internet. but if you read what i said before how it was "toy-shit" and not even graf, then you would know im obviously just playing when I say I'm gonna be painting my bad man. def didnt catch the sarcasm. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louise2wease Posted April 14, 2007 Share Posted April 14, 2007 here's that craze trade man. sorry the coloring is messed. fucked it up a bit. fucked up the attempt at highlights or whatever those are called too... sorry man. i'll do another if you want. new letters cuz i got bored of wease and weaze... like louise without the L so its kind of wease... ish. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
porchmonkey Posted April 14, 2007 Share Posted April 14, 2007 http://webmail.aol.com/25045/aim/en-us/Mail/get-attachment.aspx?uid=1.16719985&folder=Inbox&partId=1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
porchmonkey Posted April 14, 2007 Share Posted April 14, 2007 IMG]http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g242/teddygrizzam/bitch.jpg[/img] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
porchmonkey Posted April 14, 2007 Share Posted April 14, 2007 wtf i cant post a fuckin pic how do i do it <a href="http://photobucket.com" target="_blank"><img src="http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g242/teddygrizzam/bitch.jpg" border="0" alt="Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket"></a> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louise2wease Posted April 14, 2007 Share Posted April 14, 2007 looks pretty good... try to get a more clear picture if you want some real crits. no one can tell what you're doing wrong or right if they can't see it well enough. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louise2wease Posted April 14, 2007 Share Posted April 14, 2007 edit that one where it has the [img ] thing jsut throw a [ in front of it real quick. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
porchmonkey Posted April 14, 2007 Share Posted April 14, 2007 bos2 nUCCA Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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