FATE52262 Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 so then what do you want me to do a piece of? that or w/e you usually write (idk what that is so be sure to let me know) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joewinmor Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 Oh i have been writing ensignia so just write that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FATE52262 Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 alright ill try to have that up in a few days Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaos Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 this should take me awhile too, so just pm me whenever you finish it, theres no rush in all this, so you write kaos i take it? no i write dire and brisk but either is cool Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FATE52262 Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 alright then which one you want me to do? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaos Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 any im not picky Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 random freestyle add on thing me and my boy did middle thing with the skull/dead can was gonna just break off into patterns not done yet im gonna fill the entire page Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cox093 Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 i just started last week so any tips would be great. Thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 i just started last week so any tips would be great. Thanks Okay... here's my repetitive response #145: Do your letters like this: Keep doing that until you have filled up a notebook with it, then post again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lykeomgz Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 QUOTE] trying other things out. still lame but w/e. critz/crack jokes. oh and i know its complete crap. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 lyke - see my post above. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ALERT NZ Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 OK LISTEN UPTHIS IS IN CAPITALS SO THAT YOU AY TAKE NOTICE OF THIS. START WITH SIMPLES!!! THEY ARE THE BASICS AND YOU NEED TO PRACTICE THEM, LEARN THEM LIKE YOUR ABC'S. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cox093 Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 so u mean just like block letters? thanks, Jon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Craz-E Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 Earl: first, I don't do walls and fuck people's shit up. We don't have any legal walls around here. I'm young but not too young to know better. I have respect and Im not just an asshole kid. Since I started Ive been looking at graf, watching videos, reading this site. I am dedicated to getting good. I still dont know what you mean by the monkey pencil grip. Like the thicker lines for the ears and one eye. Is the motion with roadrunner more simple? What are your opinions on that. I know the M is real shitty. no comment on the handstyle neither? thanks man i appreciate it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a-zone Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 Earl: first, I don't do walls and fuck people's shit up. We don't have any legal walls around here. I'm young but not too young to know better. I have respect and Im not just an asshole kid. Since I started Ive been looking at graf, watching videos, reading this site. I am dedicated to getting good. I still dont know what you mean by the monkey pencil grip. Like the thicker lines for the ears and one eye. Is the motion with roadrunner more simple? What are your opinions on that. I know the M is real shitty. no comment on the handstyle neither? thanks man i appreciate it FRIST OF GARFF IS AOUT GETTING UR NAME OUT THERE BY ANY MEANS POSSIBLE DOING NOTHING BUT PAPER IS WORTHLESS ..........WE GARFFERS WELL SOME HAVE RESPECT TOWARDS PEOPLE WE DONT GO OUT AND HIT CHURCHES,SCHOOLS AND SHIT LIKE DAT WE DO PLACES WE KNOW ARE GOOD TO HIT AND HAVE UR NAME VISILE TO EVRYONE... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
REVER Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 QUOTE] trying other things out. still lame but w/e. critz/crack jokes. oh and i know its complete crap. diggin the first one..i guess its a throw..but yeah..love the color..fresh E...keep at it..i should do the same eh.? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
life WDS Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 SUME that shit is dope man, post some more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 a-zone --was that message a joke or did you eat a bucket of lead paint as a kid? craz E --what i meant by the monkey grip pencil technique, it just looks like you're putting too much pressure in your pencil. you need to lighten up a little and try to keep a sharp point on that thing. also, keep your lines straight and consistent. pay attention to that stuff, and work with the simples. look at your posts, and notice how the lines and letters aren't really consistent. definitely keep looking at graff, and pay close attention to the details. that shit will inspire your own work. like we all keep saying, work on your simples and tighten up on the control of your pencil. even i have to go back to working on simples, so never give up man. keep on going at it. one thing you've got going for you right now, is that you are young. put some hard work into it, and let time take it's toll. good luck man. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louise2wease Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 CRAZE... do you want to do an exchange? or anyone else... i think i'm getting a little better at least... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louise2wease Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 i am finally done with this one... i think. 1: 2: 3: I might add a background of some sort... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louise2wease Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 and here's the rest of the shit i've done in the last week[ish] Mo'Trinity is my friend mitchell's artist name i spose? he makes music... idk what to call him. turned into this after a couple other tries and i'm still fucking around with it: turned into this: messing around with some throwies i spose... we started singing "i don't want to know your name, i just want bang bang bang" in french class today... so i started doodling-ish... by the end of the day it was this: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 That BANG piece is a great start. Keep that up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 yea i agree the letters are nice..but the b seems a lil wierd but still works...i also like the thick outline.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 WEASE-- keep doing that black and silver block one. change up your colors, then start to work with the direction of the color i the 3D. i don't know how to put it. look at the 3D in some pieces. you'll see how people accent it with different shit. work on that piece up there a few more times, then start playing with it. does that make any sense? also, good to see you're attempting throwies. what is BANG? and why do you want it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vertigo Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 Crits if possible. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 vertigo --are you having fun doing this? if so, keep at it. the nyeve piece is the best one of the three (if you ask me). the first one doesn't work though. the characters below don't work. the miniscule holes in the e and p don't work. the colors are kind of off. you might want to add a darker green outline on the whole 3D --kind of like the red outline on the nyeve. the second one needs to be cleaned up. i'd do that with just pencil and ink a few more times. try and clean it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louise2wease Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 thanks for the crits. some of the shit you said Earl was a little confusing, but i think i understand. we'll see in my next shit. uhmmmmm i forgot what i was going to say... oh right, about the bang thing, uhh i wrote above it about why i wrote bang... it was inspired by this glorious song: Bang Bang Bang by Group X I just want bang, bang, bang! I don't want relationship! I just want bang, bang, bang! I don't want to know your name. I just want bang, bang, bang! I don't want to meet you mom. I just want bang, bang, bang! Beish, you drive me insane when you give me that bang, bang, bang! Ok, Annie, listen. I don't want to make sex, eat chocolate, look at animals, take walk. No. You come home and you say, “Hashmeer touch me down there, I like that.' I don't think so Annie, don't have time, want to drink, cigarette, you know. You know what I need Annie? I'll tell you what. I just want bang, bang, bang! I don't want to talk to you. I just want bang, bang, bang! I don't want to know your name I just want bang, bang, bang! I don't want relationship. I just want bang, bang, bang! Beish, you drive me insane when you give me that bang, bang, bang! Oh, Hashmeer, Hashmeer, you look so good in that hat. Why don't you give me lots of kiss? WROOONG!! I don't think so Annie. You want me to do things to you like the sun and the moon, idiot! I don't have time. I have too many women. All I got time for you know what is? I just want bang, bang, bang! I don't want to talk to you. I just want bang, bang, bang! I don't want to know your name I just want bang, bang, bang! Beish, you drive me insane when you give me that bang, bang, bang! Beish, beish, beish, beish When you give me that bang, bang, bang Bang, bang, bang Shiggity bang, bang, bang! Shwat? bang, bang, bang! I don't want relationship. I just want bang, bang, bang! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louise2wease Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 does he really look like a clown?! my friend kyle keeps teasing me cuz it's supposed to be muppet-ish and vampire-ish don't worry, i was just fucking around, like it wasn't an actual character i was doing or anything, i know that it's pretty terrible. just want to know if you think it looks like a clown. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Craz-E Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 Tried this quick for the simple idea. Is this how it should be? going to do 3d if this is right but crit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Craz-E Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 shit that pic was way too light (was avoiding the monkey grip) now i gotta darken it. aah Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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