Vivre Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 Toy....... only problem is letter structure.. i like everything else Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 EVOTS --i think the piece is real nice, it's just the T is too covered up. you need to bring that T out more in this one, because it kind of looks like an L. seriously though, these are constructive crits, this shit is real nice for a toy thread post. post more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 knim, i like your style. you just need to get a better eraser and clean that piece up a little. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
movementsmagazine Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 bump this is sweet. im digging the K Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 only problem is letter structure.. i like everything else the letter structure is fine just make the s more noticable and make the bottom l's bar not so long Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knim_One Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 knim, i like your style. you just need to get a better eraser and clean that piece up a little. im still gonna color it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DEMIKTHASICK Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 What about my sketch I know i fucked up on the 3d on the C i was going to fast and my markers suck Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Q666 Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 Toy....... this is dope except for the fucked up T Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SE-Rythm Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 im a newb of all newbs. wanna get into the scene, never write or paint before, but I do make sticka by hand with exo knife. Makin sticka is my art lol any advice is welcome. first of all lose the mr wiggles letters second dont write doodle. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vacuum cleaner Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 doodle is king status. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ferley Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 yo i was just wondering were to get blackbooks... like the thick ones because ive been lookin around and shit in craft store and on the internet and i cant find em... so plz help me out Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 any art supply store usually has black books. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DEMIKTHASICK Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ferley Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 would micheals or that joanne shit have em? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DEMIKTHASICK Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SupaCola Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 Sum new shizzle... Just got into all dis shit and i only started beginnin of this year really so excuse any toy mistakes, i got kinda excited wit ma new prismas lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DEMIKTHASICK Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 Loose the star Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 yeah, the star isn't awful, but it's not needed. you just started this year? good work man, keep posting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DEMIKTHASICK Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 If that star was another arrow it would look bad ass Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted March 31, 2007 Share Posted March 31, 2007 fuck i hate my tag.... i need alota help i used to decent at handstyles then just concentrated on other shit and i sucked even worse Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DEMIKTHASICK Posted April 1, 2007 Share Posted April 1, 2007 Hahahahahahahah rofl Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stanly_parker Posted April 1, 2007 Share Posted April 1, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blart.BOS Posted April 1, 2007 Share Posted April 1, 2007 dank? i say do simples, you got a good idea, but you don't have structure crits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
movementsmagazine Posted April 1, 2007 Share Posted April 1, 2007 Hahahahahahahah rofl i really hate you seriously shut up you're not good at graffiti, nor do you have the potential most "toys" have don't laugh at someone because they aren't as good as other people the kid is trying, he has more heart than you, and a hell of alot more potential your shit is trash and you know that. cola for the handstyle, try to make it more simple/legible. do regular letters close by, but make them tall and skinny, or just give them a subtley small slant or something. the freshest handstyles are the more simpler ones that everyone can discern Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
movementsmagazine Posted April 1, 2007 Share Posted April 1, 2007 dank? i say do simples, you got a good idea, but you don't have structure crits make the top right part of the K a little thicker and make sure the letter sizes are all in proportion. the K seems a bit skinnier than all the others. good stuff though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tragk Posted April 1, 2007 Share Posted April 1, 2007 need help any advice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ijustgattaflowYO Posted April 1, 2007 Share Posted April 1, 2007 dig the first one. i just think it would look cleaner without the color inside and stuff. i think if the inside of the letters were just white, and the dropshadow and outline where the same. id would look nice. better than what i can do though...so but what do i know. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 1, 2007 Share Posted April 1, 2007 TRAGK --i like the first one, but the silver stuff in the second one doesn't work so well for me. for some reason, it takes away from the letter structure. i definitely like what you're doing, keep posting. COLA --i think handstyles are more like penmanship. someone gave me this big ass ring bound black book for my birthday one year. i've sat down with that thing and filled numerous pages with stupid handstyles. i recommend you do the same. just fucking noodle away on a bunch of paper, and eventually you'll start to find a style you like. repetition my friend. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 1, 2007 Share Posted April 1, 2007 hey DANK --stop reading magazines about CEO's. i bet that dude on the cover has "white devil" tattooed across the back of his neck. i like the colors in the piece, but you do need to structure letters better, and lighten up on the extended 3D. if you had broken the 3D off, and not had it stretched all the way back to the point of perspective--it might have looked better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blart.BOS Posted April 1, 2007 Share Posted April 1, 2007 need help any advice personally, i think these don't have good structure and lots of unnecessary extensions that don't flow Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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