rectone Posted July 18, 2006 Share Posted July 18, 2006 suggestions please? yo i like dat shit alot...but fix dat does letters....at da bottom...other dan dat u iight...and ill name Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelser Posted July 18, 2006 Share Posted July 18, 2006 safe eeeeee, seen your stuff in the cov thread. heavy. big up.:p Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eeeeee Posted July 18, 2006 Share Posted July 18, 2006 charz pal ^u^ , I'm gona post more as they happen PEACE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quadra666 Posted July 18, 2006 Share Posted July 18, 2006 maybe ur right...i do have alot off styles...ill try to pic one....which one do u like...dis i gona be hard okay.... honestly man, fuck this forum, and stop posting every sketch u make. just keep sketching and sketchin, fuck what everyone thinks. think about this, u have already heard the best advice u are going to get: "stay simple, keep practicing and it will come to you in time" take a look at all your sketches and decide yourself which style looks the best. do you honestly give a fuck what me, or anyone else on this forum says? probably not, because i deinfitely dont. accept the advice you have already been given and go sketch. then, occasionally when u think u have come up with a new one that is reallllll nice, post it and see what ppl think, besides that, dont post every single thing u draw, theres not really a point to it, ya know? .... i mean, thats what im doin anyways. i mostly dont give a fuck about these peoples opinions. occasionally though, i make a cool sketch and i want to see if anyone else thinks its tight, so i post it. u dont have to listen to me, im just tellin you my whole approach.... u already know the basics, and if u know anything about graphic design/art in general, then u can crit your own work just as well as any asshole on this stupid forum :) peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eeeeee Posted July 19, 2006 Share Posted July 19, 2006 thought I'd post that one cause the a looks like its got a dick Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eeeeee Posted July 19, 2006 Share Posted July 19, 2006 looking back through... more crits plz I rilly like these rabbits :smiles: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arse one Posted July 19, 2006 Share Posted July 19, 2006 that I looks like a dick Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quadra666 Posted July 19, 2006 Share Posted July 19, 2006 that I looks like a dick lol i was just thinking the same thing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eeeeee Posted July 19, 2006 Share Posted July 19, 2006 hahaha phallic thoughts Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbs Scum Posted July 19, 2006 Share Posted July 19, 2006 i sent you a pm jelser Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Filoe Posted July 19, 2006 Share Posted July 19, 2006 haha thanks 4 comment boiz, yeh i kno my m8z always c me making stickers in class, they all say is that a limp dick ? i jus laugh im to much of an idiot 2 fink of a new sticker style Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Filoe Posted July 19, 2006 Share Posted July 19, 2006 in the mean time ppl gimmie crits on my latest work i did wen i got bored in my maths class http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g146/Filoe/Photo-0093.jpg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelser Posted July 19, 2006 Share Posted July 19, 2006 in the mean time ppl gimmie crits on my latest work i did wen i got bored in my maths class http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g146/Filoe/Photo-0093.jpg nice one fella, im always bored in maths too, thats probably why i got a D.:D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelser Posted July 19, 2006 Share Posted July 19, 2006 To Melbs; what i meant by flowing was a combination of angles and curvy lines so the over all piece looks balanced. your piece was too anglular and looked to simple and boring. this IKES piece i did to me "flows". you can use it/.:scrambled: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbs Scum Posted July 19, 2006 Share Posted July 19, 2006 i pm'ed u about how to give me that. dw about it, you beat me to it. looks fresh by the way. thanks a lot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cretin Posted July 19, 2006 Share Posted July 19, 2006 just somethin new i came up wit... only serious critz from descent writers PLEASE... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 Sorry, I haven't been for a couple days... I was doing battles and stuff over at bs... Here's my battle entries if you haven't seen em over there... Totem- Berzerker- I got some sick new ideas for Phaze sketches too, so I'll sketch em out and get them up ASAP Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gonegonegone Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 the "t" in that top one looks like a "d" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FazeOne Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 some quick stuff... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 faze stick to one style. it seems like ur tryna mix a dead letter wit a throw. that C looks like a throw and rest looks like a dead letter. match ur shit up. partyrobot, ur shit has flow but i wanna see how u would do if u stick to simples. i cant recognize the first letter. it looks like a P, S and a backwords E. try some simples then i'll try to give u critz phaze i like where ur going with ur style but u still need some work on them letters. i second what iruleeverything said and for the 2nd pic, ur P is straight but u gotta work on the rest of them letters. try to make ur letters poportional Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rectone Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 looking back through... I rilly like these rabbits :smiles: yo dat shit is dope...but where did u get da stickers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rectone Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 some new stuff..trying to stay simple Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 some new stuff..trying to stay simple ur gettin better rect, but u still got some work to do. loose the bottom part of ur R taht sticks out and spots like that. make it even more simple and remember about to balancin out and same width Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Maker Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 eat a bowl a bowl of dog doo...it will heip help you.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theyungin Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 some new stuff..trying to stay simple your e overlaps the R and the T doesnt overlap the C = weirdness try a STRAIGHT UP block letters, with nothing fancy, not even a fill or maybe a solid color Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ntfhdub01 Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 Rect you also blocked the one different than the rest. Not sure if that was done on purpose. The whole block in general could use some work. Not bad though! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 oh yeah and ur 3d is kinda off Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ntfhdub01 Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rectone Posted July 21, 2006 Share Posted July 21, 2006 yo thanks for alll da critz...yall....il work on my 3d more... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cretin Posted July 21, 2006 Share Posted July 21, 2006 just somethin new i came up wit... only serious critz from descent writers PLEASE... critz..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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