H!GH Posted January 15, 2006 Share Posted January 15, 2006 Some comment, feedback, would b nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted January 15, 2006 Share Posted January 15, 2006 personally i dont like the colors, i dont think it makes the letters pop out, but i think your letters are good and i really like the simplicity of them Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted January 15, 2006 Share Posted January 15, 2006 High make them letters a bit thinner not much but just a bit and that should do the trick also take up my offer of trying a biro to draw there mych better and dont use coours yet theres no need just basic oulines and simples yeah if you do colour use one coulour fills and outlines simples Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melo -btk Posted January 15, 2006 Share Posted January 15, 2006 the handstyle (high) is garbage. no disrespect but some motivation for ya Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted January 15, 2006 Share Posted January 15, 2006 can i get some feedback on the last thing i posted on page 141??, i want to know what i did wrong, or what is bad with it so i can fix it, say what i did right if yo want but id rather the bad Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted January 15, 2006 Share Posted January 15, 2006 wernt really feeling any of them viles to be blatent think you need to gt some more proportion in them letters and maybe try summat a bit simpler like light proportionate bubble letters ! think it might suit your style Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Politics&Bullshit Posted January 15, 2006 Share Posted January 15, 2006 high- your shit is madd....out there. i like that you do your own thing, and if you continue to be creative, but take on a LIL' MORE STRUCTURE, you should be able to create a style all your own (if thats what your tryna do). other than that work on coloring, and makin' those letters POP. - POLITICS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted January 15, 2006 Share Posted January 15, 2006 summat like this just a little sketch exchange do me a vare if you feel like it some time peace out! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xdontsleepx Posted January 15, 2006 Share Posted January 15, 2006 getting bored with my current name so i was messing around with new letters and stuff. tell me what you think. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xdontsleepx Posted January 15, 2006 Share Posted January 15, 2006 hand Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imatagstar Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 thats ugs Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 Vare One, not sure i understand, more proportion to what? I know the V is a little off but i think the rest are all matched in size Also yeah Ill hit you up with a Vare one i na couple of days xdontsleepx- Dont know much about throwies, but to me it looks good sorry i cant be more help, also dont know much about handies either, i dont get what a good handy is and what a bad one is, can someone elxplain that to me? (they all looks the same to me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
d3faultu53r Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 that high handtyle is an acquired? taste and i like it, the only thing im not diggin is how the g and h go together i think it should be seperated heres a sketch i thought was pretty good considering my experience with markers it says -C ordered some trias too so cant wait to get em fuck i hate headaches Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zEr0 Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 what do u think about my last posted??? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest R@ndomH3ro Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 Please help Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest R@ndomH3ro Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 Anybody? Tell me what you think? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snow-man Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 Fuck the 3d and concentrate on straight letters make the hole in the R bigger...Just keep it way more simple man... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EnoEzaf Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 critique it please...and i already know i gotta make the sizes equal cause the f is way too big compared to the a and e (and it says faze) this one also ssays faze...its a little older... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maza Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 yeah man, thats pretty cool, on the second one, theres a lot of wobblely lines, tryy flow a bit more, and the first ones a sick style, just like you said, get the letters same sizee. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 prefer the second faze to the first stick with the second rec3 proportion is your key keep it straight and keep it simple zero the shades in the corners are ok but i cnt read what it seys it just looks like a bunch of nits n bobs put together make it so i can read it next time which by the way also means GO SIMPLER have a look on freightsrus.com and check back two pages and you will see a list of simple artists check there werk for inspiration only! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EnoEzaf Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 what do you mean theres a lot of wobbly lines? are you talking abotu my hand is too shaky, i cant help that...im not tryign to be an asshole but theres not much i can do to make liens perfectly straight im not gunna like use a ruler...thanks though peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EnoEzaf Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 what do you mean theres a lot of wobbly lines? are you talking abotu my hand is too shaky, i cant help that...im not tryign to be an asshole but theres not much i can do to make liens perfectly straight im not gunna like use a ruler...thanks though peace On another note, i notice alot of you guys are having torubles with developing your letter structure...well i dont want to be the deusche bag to tell you all this but you have to think outsaide the box on a little hated word writers call "biting" bascially when i first started i didnt no any morals to graff at all and i bit a ton of shit to attempt to gian respect and it turned out bd but now that i make my own structure i still am biting peices of letters but i dont bite it from the same thign i got it from for example my name is faze and i bit my f of a j with some extensions that was 1000x better than any peice i could think of so officially im stil biting but in my opinion it aint hurting hnothign cause im still changing it aroudn and it loks nothign liek a j anymore..then i just work the rest of the letters aroudn for hours till i get somethign to match the styling of the f...hope that helps someone Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EnoEzaf Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 Originally posted by i need a better name@Dec 28 2005, 04:40 PM Quoted post this shit is fuckin fire man...your other stuff is def coming alogn but this looks fresh as fuck to me...if you take it all apart and seperate it i bet itll look toy but it looks hott now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 heres a thinng i did fer a battle alil 2 wild style....i no Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 liking the i needadifferntname freak proportions a bit wrong but im liking the top one with wide 3d nice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EnoEzaf Posted January 17, 2006 Share Posted January 17, 2006 freak its good and all but its also liek the definition of toy wildstyle...you have way too many extension type arrow type tings without realising where to put them...i see 14 extensions in the top one all along the outside...it just looks rediculous...the style isnt cool enough to get extensions yet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EKSOxo Posted January 17, 2006 Share Posted January 17, 2006 FIX THAT Z AND E A BIT AND U GOT SOMETHING HOT!!! dope shit man retweek that and post that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melo -btk Posted January 17, 2006 Share Posted January 17, 2006 a product of a paper and pencil in the bathroom while pooping Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flavicon Posted January 17, 2006 Share Posted January 17, 2006 Thats when I do all my best work ^^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EKSOxo Posted January 17, 2006 Share Posted January 17, 2006 should have wiped ya ass with it! nah thats the best i seen from u so far go take another dump! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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