urbal Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 The v looks a little small but I like it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 thats my trouble either i start or finish to small or too big !!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nERdoNeR Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 hows my shit? any tips ?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
INSOM Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 everything looks sick nerdoner...i just think the wild style type one is a bit uneven...thats all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
INSOM Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 any opinions? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trav-o s Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 oh, and nerdoner, that jump is sweet :chicken: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
givitugetit Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 Originally posted by FourTwenty+Dec 21 2005, 02:32 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (FourTwenty - Dec 21 2005, 02:32 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'>critique please, and im looking for advice to make it look cleaner, sharper, wtc. thank you. oh and if you are looking for the letters, it says Pivot. <!--QuoteBegin-FourTwenty@Dec 21 2005, 12:20 AM Just another unfinished sketch... This time, i'm looking for any tips for my drawings to look cleaner, sharper, etc. Critique please. thank you. (oh and sorry for the photo size, =\) Quoted post Quoted post [/b] wat does that shit say?newayz that sum sik shit right der!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
givitugetit Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 ahh pivot if u want it to look cleaner it could use a slight darker outline so therez more definition in the letters.it could use more contrast but still the sickest thing on this page... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 yeaaaa nerd fresh man that second one got me dribbling insom first picks a bit blury mate but looks k second one the fill kinda overtakes the letters like one of my old ones i done a while back trav o this seys false icons right ? just pull that L outt more its hididng behind the A or the A is pushed further over to much but good over all on proportion part from the middle of the S keep hitting the books boys!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
givitugetit Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 didn't shell the whole thing either.i would of used another color too bring more life into the piece...some shine is a neccessity to every piece also... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
REMIK Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 the cheap way to do a one liner :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
givitugetit Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 Originally posted by trav-o s@Dec 21 2005, 04:10 PM oh, and nerdoner, that jump is sweet :chicken: Quoted post not feeling it brah,sorry... ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
givitugetit Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 wtf is going on??????sorry guyz,this is called the pivot pg.,nuff said Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edogg Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 pivot, if you want it to pop more, use less depressing colors. something bright could really help that peice cuz all it is not is greys and forest green. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edogg Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 Originally posted by vare_one@Dec 21 2005, 10:36 AM edogg that penguin is fresh u hit the spot with that man try this site mate dunno exaclty if they do shading but theres alot of character sketching help from here http://saveloomis.org/ Quoted post heres what i ended up with when i checked out that site Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 what he sed would werk i reckon go for some full on blues man baby blues lime greens shit like that should make it go blam!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 yeah edogg them looking fresh mate hope it helped heres summat from last week i just found again was only a mess around so no need to crititise if u dnt want to and this one for the FILL not the letters. and this one ive just drew up for both !! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HEAZ Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 vare, prefer the first one and second, keep working and improving on them styles, the second one is slightly unclear. Remik, like the throwup there. Trav-os, much better than your first attempt get rid of that L hiding behing letters, alsodraw guidelines to straighten your letters out, and get rid of the arrow on the E Seems to be a hell of alot writers on this compared to last time i checked........... some stuff to come from me soon ............... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 werd i think a few heds have decided its where they need to be to get things moving again! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KrEM1 Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 glosk s.e. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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KrEM1 Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 so wat n e tips or feed bac??^^on these pieces?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KrEM1 Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 sore mf Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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HEAZ Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 NiCe KrEm 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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HEAZ Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 blurred camera :hatred: could you give feedback please to all above Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 that last twist id say is sweet own opinion thats all could do better on the T thru bar by keepn it same size all the way thru. your sketches id say work on width proportion likingya hands but again keep working them and keep them up to date with your sketch n paint progress im not feeling the glosk sketch my opinion again last two letters are the best in there thats my critz peaz ! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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