REMIK Posted December 20, 2005 Share Posted December 20, 2005 im pretty sure thats wat u meant by anaser rite? ne way theres tinny letters everywhere, or wat seem to look like letters heres one of my pieces Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 20, 2005 Share Posted December 20, 2005 nice socks haha see what u mean by the letters nice sketch btw Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 20, 2005 Share Posted December 20, 2005 look odd socks btw !!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
REMIK Posted December 20, 2005 Share Posted December 20, 2005 can i get some comments and crits on the sketch and not my socks :rolleyes: everytime i posted that sketch people comment on the sox lol, y do my socks look odd? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 20, 2005 Share Posted December 20, 2005 Originally posted by REMIK@Dec 20 2005, 06:24 PM lol, y do my socks look odd? Quoted post one toes grey and one toes white lol and the sketch i wouldnt say is brilliant work on more proportion mate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idigheavymetal Posted December 20, 2005 Share Posted December 20, 2005 feedback wanted, although everything here is fairly old. Hack NPC memphis Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hitch14 Posted December 20, 2005 Share Posted December 20, 2005 Hack I like them, the last one with the what I'm assuming are brass knuckles is cool. keep it up. Alright now my sketch I just did this really quick b/c I wanted to try and get some different looking letters b/c mine are always the same. So what are your opinons on it? What should I work on. Don't mind the crappy coloring or w/e cuz as i said I did it quickly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 20, 2005 Share Posted December 20, 2005 like the first one of i dig and same i not feeling this one bit mate just not really at all to my liking take time with your new style of letters they will come thru alot stronger trust me! time+ effort= good work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackFlux Posted December 20, 2005 Share Posted December 20, 2005 @REMIK, I really like your sketch, though I think you need to tone it down a little. Its too busy and add some color. Still waaaay better than anything I can do. Props! @idigheavymetal, good shit homie (the 2nd and 3rd sketchs), add some shades to it. @Hitch14, good start, but clean up your lines, especially the "S." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jank Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 remik, not personally feelin the wiggly bits on the R and the K, but the overall piece is nice... could look good ainted reallyreally big lol. idigheaevymetal not bad at all. i like the look of the second one but fuk nos i cant read it... i see alot of Ns... the last one is arite but fix the rlly little bit on the K and one side of the A is a little too wavy for my liking.. just my personal thoughts tho, feel free to ignore! hitch i said sumit on pg new outline...comments? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hitch14 Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 Alright I just drew this one up, tried some new letters because my are normally really blocky. SOO what do you guys think, any advice or cirticiism is appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FourTwenty Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 Just another unfinished sketch... This time, i'm looking for any tips for my drawings to look cleaner, sharper, etc. Critique please. thank you. (oh and sorry for the photo size, =\) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KrEM1 Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 ^^speech less^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edogg Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 im trying to learn about shading for characters and what not, heres a quickie attempt, any ideas or crits or tips would be nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hitch14 Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 COMMENTS ON LETTERS OR ANYTHING CRITICISM PLEASE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edogg Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 they dont look particularly bad, assuming you havent been writing long, just keep working on them but sty simple till you get a style youre comfortable with. the top of the 'm' kinda looks like an ass keep your letters the same width the whole way through. the e gets fatter at the end and the s is just doing some crazy shit. when you're stying simple, remember that consistensy goes a long way. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
REMIK Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 black flux - the squigly shit aint mine, the red one thats colored is mine lol the one thats not colored isnt mine i was quoting someone the red one is mine, ne comments on that? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elorock Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 you all just need a lot of practice..except mister420 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nERdoNeR Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 heres my sig. all i have for now ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zEr0 Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 Hey guyZ.. I'm n00b in here... :) I've started painting year ago.. So you can see my sketchez here... http://graffiti.site.ge/pics.html But yhe last one.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jank Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 edogg i love that penguin. u managed the shadin completely. the eyes loook an odd shape to me, but its hot! again, its OK hitch... the bit on the bottom right of the A doesnt work the top of the S is too big for the bottom, i dont like the fat bits on the bottom of the M legs. keep tryin man, its gettin there zero that one looks arite, i think its let down where letter like the R are too fat for the others, like the Z is quite skinny...keep the letter width constant. any thoughts on mine above?^^^^^^^^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 jank mate looking good zero im going with jank on this constant same width throughout man nice hand there by nerd same your letters go from fat to thin like your S and your A i dont see why . best letter there is the E mate keep them like that edogg that penguin is fresh u hit the spot with that man try this site mate dunno exaclty if they do shading but theres alot of character sketching help from here http://saveloomis.org/ 420 id say maybe get your final black outline from letters sharper all over that could make it look a bit cleaner in my eyes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
urbal Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 I need some pointers on my shit. The fuckin 'T' is always hurtin. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edogg Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 i actually kinda like the 'o' on that one, and the t would look fine if there wasnt that little nubbin think on the right. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
urbal Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 I like everything but the T. T's are irritating sometimes. It's appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edogg Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 if you think about it thouguh, they have a lkot of potential. its just a line crossing another line, look at it as a challege instead of a chore. experimant with all sorts or shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FourTwenty Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 critique please, and im looking for advice to make it look cleaner, sharper, wtc. thank you. oh and if you are looking for the letters, it says Pivot. Originally posted by FourTwenty@Dec 21 2005, 12:20 AM Just another unfinished sketch... This time, i'm looking for any tips for my drawings to look cleaner, sharper, etc. Critique please. thank you. (oh and sorry for the photo size, =\) Quoted post Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FourTwenty Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 Originally posted by FourTwenty@Dec 21 2005, 12:20 AM Just another unfinished sketch... This time, i'm looking for any tips for my drawings to look cleaner, sharper, etc. Critique please. thank you. (oh and sorry for the photo size, =\) Quoted post Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edogg Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 i think it looks fine. theres not a whlie lot that othger people can tell you, with a sketch like that you just gotta keep improving on your own. looks clean, looks nice, i like it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 little bit from me for today not too keen on it all myself but thort id post it any way Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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