Melo -btk Posted November 30, 2005 Share Posted November 30, 2005 Originally posted by MAR@Nov 29 2005, 08:09 PM ? Quoted post hehe mar we meet again ... i like that throwie, keep workin on it heres my contribution, school + boredom + markers in backpack = Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vacuum cleaner Posted November 30, 2005 Share Posted November 30, 2005 melo, your throws are lookin' nice, but you've still gotta work on your piecework. Those arrows come out of nowhere, and they basically have no purpose... but, it's still alright looking. Just keep at it, and maybe try to fatten the m up a bit more. The M is what really irks me in the colored piece. Mar, the throw is looking nice. haha, rawr... my advice would be to fatten it up. Give it some cookies or something. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jank Posted November 30, 2005 Share Posted November 30, 2005 flux, the one wit the arrows is bad. espesh the U...its very disprooportioned. the 'black' one could get good but make the letterts the same width throughout, like see the B and bits of the K are v. skinny. i like the 3d stuff, espesh that S. its veryvery nice. keep drawing man:) melo i like the piece. the E is v. nice. the M is too skinny in the middle and disproportioned.... work on it. the O is too fat incomparison. just my thoughts...feel free to ignore them, but i need feedback on this? trying too hard? or in the right direction? where specifgically dus it need changing? cheers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HEAZ Posted November 30, 2005 Share Posted November 30, 2005 like it jank, just tidy up some of the shading it is coming into your letters making them look slightly scruffy, but otherwise very nice!! :king: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jank Posted November 30, 2005 Share Posted November 30, 2005 ye cheers i wasnt worryin a bout the way the sketch looks just the letters....like how they wud look painted..cheers. nice simple.... the O is slightly wierd but its nice still...start to work out a bit cos thats near perfect for block letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HEAZ Posted November 30, 2005 Share Posted November 30, 2005 ok.... cheers mate i will have another go at it................. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackFlux Posted November 30, 2005 Share Posted November 30, 2005 @jank, thanks for the feedback. Sometimes I really get caught up because I am one of those guys that like to jump head first. Though, I know sometimes you have to get your feet wet. Right now I am just sketching as much as possible. My only beef I got with your piece is where letters intersect. Oh and I can’t read the letter between the N and the E. What is that a T? I think you did a variation of that in color, right? The color joint was fiya. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cRXgti Posted November 30, 2005 Share Posted November 30, 2005 gb. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toxus Posted November 30, 2005 Share Posted November 30, 2005 ms-paint^^ ^first go at 3d graff i will update soon... any comments? thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted November 30, 2005 Share Posted November 30, 2005 a few from me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melo -btk Posted November 30, 2005 Share Posted November 30, 2005 thanks vacuum and jank.. btw jank you're definatly going in the right direction, cant wait to see it painted! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackFlux Posted December 1, 2005 Share Posted December 1, 2005 @vare_one, I'm feeling all of them (no homo) except the third one. flux without the F Flux without the X Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
canucmee Posted December 1, 2005 Share Posted December 1, 2005 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cRXgti Posted December 1, 2005 Share Posted December 1, 2005 added some photopoop Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the toy shoppe Posted December 1, 2005 Share Posted December 1, 2005 some canvases i did over the weekeend... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 1, 2005 Share Posted December 1, 2005 cheers for the feed back flux im heading in the direction i want finally and it looks like u are aswell crx that photoshop is dope man really feeling them drip type characters toy shoppe them canvases are cool man keep them up as its getting real cold haha canucmee im feeling it man good stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 1, 2005 Share Posted December 1, 2005 few new ones from me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EKSOxo Posted December 1, 2005 Share Posted December 1, 2005 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeRcHSSC Posted December 1, 2005 Share Posted December 1, 2005 Yo Ekso nice shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 2, 2005 Share Posted December 2, 2005 think this belongs here and no its not mine Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shirkone Posted December 2, 2005 Share Posted December 2, 2005 Originally posted by cRXgti@Dec 1 2005, 06:31 AM ^^^This is wonderful, I like them characters very much :D Also, those ROTN sketches are looking hella good, keep it up! ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toxus Posted December 2, 2005 Share Posted December 2, 2005 couldent be botherd to make the colouring neat and 3d :innocent: Any comments? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 2, 2005 Share Posted December 2, 2005 only comment to make is take time to neaten up really it makes difference Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vacuum cleaner Posted December 2, 2005 Share Posted December 2, 2005 Toxus- and for the other lazy kids in here-- You're only going to get negative feedback if you know your ish is sloppy. I bet you're in grade school, if that's the case... it's friday, you probably haven't got any homework or anything... sit down, listen to some chill music and go at it. Post what you've got when you're done... I guarantee it'll be better than a sloppy highlighter fill that bled over the lines... GO. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 2, 2005 Share Posted December 2, 2005 have been trying few joints to see which werks but i not sure on which works and what doesnt and where i think im gong wrong this is the first ive tried Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xeptone Posted December 2, 2005 Share Posted December 2, 2005 ha! my shit does not belong in here.. but clearly I can see yours does.. last time I checked.. going back to simples didn't mean someone's a toy, you douchebag. I think you need to go back to block letters to get some basic formation, and styles going. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 2, 2005 Share Posted December 2, 2005 proportion is the key xept theres not proportion in that at all take critism kindly i do! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xeptone Posted December 2, 2005 Share Posted December 2, 2005 no shit.. there's no proportion because it was a quick simple.. normally i have top to bottom proportion.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 2, 2005 Share Posted December 2, 2005 call that simple? id hate to see your wildsteez!! :shook: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xeptone Posted December 2, 2005 Share Posted December 2, 2005 that is a simple douchebag.. you wanna see a wild hold on while i sketch one out.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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