Aerosol_Soldier Posted October 14, 2005 Share Posted October 14, 2005 unfinished...yea Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metropolitanmayhem Posted October 14, 2005 Share Posted October 14, 2005 runci man your stuff is coming along well can you piece that? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runci Posted October 14, 2005 Share Posted October 14, 2005 eem probably but.. not maybe the same fill.. im hopin to paint this soon.. its a simpler version of the other 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hokus Posted October 14, 2005 Share Posted October 14, 2005 word, looks real good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted October 14, 2005 Share Posted October 14, 2005 ye this one looks nicer...i like simpler stuff. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Spemz Posted October 14, 2005 Share Posted October 14, 2005 Its not a trick question, yeah im back Bitch... this is my early re-entry i guess in to graffiti, the most decent thing ive done without biting anything in like a year. Im hoping yall can help me with some creative ideas to do this with - fills 3d background wise... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
factotum Posted October 15, 2005 Share Posted October 15, 2005 Originally posted by factotum@Oct 7 2005, 10:09 PM sorry about the digital pic what should i work on? or scrap it and start simpler? Quoted post im a tool for reposting, i know.. id just like a little opinion on this, tear me down if you want... that shitty hand at the top is already deaded Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1991 champ Posted October 15, 2005 Share Posted October 15, 2005 you gotta thicken and pull that head of your S to fill in some space in between it and the T...sit back and blur your eyes and look at the "outside" shape, not always the inside shit...just looking... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morg-kcor Posted October 15, 2005 Share Posted October 15, 2005 ^^^ what hes trying to say is pay more attention to the overall shape rather than do it letter by letter, FLOW MOTHER FUCKA!!!!! the only letter i would try to leave alone is the T try to hide the left side less next time and try to keep consistent like you did on the T how the lateral bars are thin but consistent and the vertical lines are thicker Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
REC Posted October 15, 2005 Share Posted October 15, 2005 can i get no feedback on my pieces on page 118?? :gaga: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted October 15, 2005 Share Posted October 15, 2005 yo rec....i cant read it ...the letters arent structured well..work on taht..and the color scheme is kinda of not nice....just a matter of practice...i guess..and as some would say str8 letter then evolve. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prevail00 Posted October 17, 2005 Share Posted October 17, 2005 im a toy i got a question "my buddies" name is noah and he writes 'WBTA?' stands for who who bulit the ark? is it clever and orignal or just stupid and gay? give me some advise Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geist Posted October 17, 2005 Share Posted October 17, 2005 Originally posted by prevail00@Oct 17 2005, 12:59 AM im a toy i got a question "my buddies" name is noah and he writes 'WBTA?' stands for who who bulit the ark? is it clever and orignal or just stupid and gay? give me some advise Quoted post It's from George Clinton and the Parliament Funkadelics Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prevail00 Posted October 17, 2005 Share Posted October 17, 2005 wow that sure helped ??? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol_Soldier Posted October 17, 2005 Share Posted October 17, 2005 hey, need some advice on the above sketches: should i stick to this, or change and try to get more flow? :huh2: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metropolitanmayhem Posted October 18, 2005 Share Posted October 18, 2005 spemz i like that halloween sketch put a fat drop shadow on it and maybe for the fill a orange to light orange fade or something Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ecro Posted October 18, 2005 Share Posted October 18, 2005 Stencil Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NUK_IF_YOU_BUK Posted October 18, 2005 Share Posted October 18, 2005 Originally posted by Aerosol_Soldier@Oct 13 2005, 07:55 PM just a bomb i drew a second ago... tryed to make it look as visible as possible, cause pen dont show up good. comments/criticism if u got it Quoted post if your gonna write "sakn" you might as well write "fdhasgdf" pick letters you can draw farely well, and create a fuckin name that actually looks decent. your a toy so who cares if the name makes no sence at all, worry about that shit when you got letter structure and style down. overall, your shit looks ehh but keep practicing and try to draw straighter, simpler letters. when i first started out i printed out a sheet of all differentr types of fonts that all said my name. then i just copied them over and over, and as you get better you can add style and whatnot. dont try to go wildstyle either, it ends up in failure. o yeah whats a "bomb" :yuck: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted October 18, 2005 Share Posted October 18, 2005 Originally posted by freakeenyc@Sep 26 2005, 12:21 AM ive been working real hard since i last posted..so hopefully something is decent..and/or salvageable...btw...i dont write freaky nemore...i just cant find a decent name..and im used to those letters.....and ive been trying to keep it simple..and i need help with filling in..and such. positive..usefull feedback would be appreciated.....negative/useless feedback...just makes u a douchefuck... :hatred: thanks. Quoted post i didnt get any feedback..so reposted this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jank Posted October 18, 2005 Share Posted October 18, 2005 freak, heres wot i think: 2nd last is horrible. the simple ones are all good, clean. good. i personally really like that "efk1er" one..... i think it works really well. i would take that last one u posted and work on it, slowly start to try nu things..if they dont work, then go back... keep trying now. keep sketchin lots an it will keep gettin better. that 1st one looks like an interestin style...not to my personal taste, but eh, if u like it.... i dont think iv said nethin helpful yet, and i cant b bothered to keep goin. keep at it man, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackFlux Posted October 19, 2005 Share Posted October 19, 2005 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted October 19, 2005 Share Posted October 19, 2005 Originally posted by freakeenyc+Oct 18 2005, 03:29 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (freakeenyc - Oct 18 2005, 03:29 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'><!--QuoteBegin-freakeenyc@Sep 26 2005, 12:21 AM ive been working real hard since i last posted..so hopefully something is decent..and/or salvageable...btw...i dont write freaky nemore...i just cant find a decent name..and im used to those letters.....and ive been trying to keep it simple..and i need help with filling in..and such. positive..usefull feedback would be appreciated.....negative/useless feedback...just makes u a douchefuck... :hatred: thanks. Quoted post i didnt get any feedback..so reposted this. Quoted post [/b] thanks a bunch jank..thats actually the most fruitful feedback ive gotten in a while. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Blind Posted October 19, 2005 Share Posted October 19, 2005 hey guys, im not sure where to post a pic of my painted piece, since im new to these forums so i guessed i wil just post it here. let me know how u like it? comments? shot :king: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scribbler Posted October 19, 2005 Share Posted October 19, 2005 Originally posted by scribbler@Oct 3 2005, 12:08 PM I worked with CAcash for a while and now i'm back in the toys thread again. Anyway here's my progress: This is what my pieces looked like before I started with CA: Now my pieces look like this: comments, help, constructive critism, etc please... Quoted post Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Blind Posted October 19, 2005 Share Posted October 19, 2005 i think the 1st pic u posted was awsome! keep it up man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jank Posted October 19, 2005 Share Posted October 19, 2005 scribbler, the nu ones are much better. i love that third one. keep workin in those letters, and it will start to come. I guess "CA" told u to leave that 1st one for a while ye? i like em, keep at it:) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Blind Posted October 19, 2005 Share Posted October 19, 2005 what you guys think about my piece? comments plzzz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jank Posted October 19, 2005 Share Posted October 19, 2005 blindboii... make the letters better, like more like what they should be... so for example, the B: the white bits"the 2 holes of the B) are in the wrong place. the D is the best. i like it alot. uv painted it well, espesh the 3d. keep at it, work on the letters, and keep doin wot u want :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jank Posted October 19, 2005 Share Posted October 19, 2005 flux, i love the computer one and the bottome sketch. maybe change the smalle bit of the F? io dont like that little flik thing.... also there is sumit alil off with the top of the F...i think its that slanted bit on the let..i dno.... i actually quite like it tho lol...keep it up... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Blind Posted October 19, 2005 Share Posted October 19, 2005 shot dude Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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