jeno Posted January 7, 2005 Share Posted January 7, 2005 i got a few sketches here. ill probably post some small time bombs later whe i get a chance to flick them. first one says zaku and the second one says fate. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joker Posted January 7, 2005 Share Posted January 7, 2005 Originally posted by runci@Dec 20 2004, 08:29 AM here are sum new styles... dont write either of them... never the pics r blurry but am waitin to get ma scanner fixed.. runci... Quoted post I'm not one to quote images, because it's retarded but in this case we're on a new page and I need the image to make my point. I think if you tighten up your letters and really play one off the other... you'll have something. I also think you're doing yourself some harm by making your lines all jagged and broke like that. Smoother lines add flow, especially with this kind of style. The arrows... the normal purpose of arrows is to push away other writers work. You want to sepreate yourself from them so the "motion" of the arrow is pushing the next guy away. Having arrows come inward is self destructive. Seems silly, I know but think about it. When you're trying to pull off the Rorshach (or however you spell it) mirrored image thing... take it all the way. Start with your center letter and work your way out. Whatever you do on the left side, mirror it on the right. For example, your right side E could be backwards to look like a 3. Writers will know it's not a three because of the obvious mirrored pattern you have in your piece. They'll recognize that it's a backwards E. You could also have your arrows coming off the side bars of the V. You could have two arrows coming down the bars and out to each side. I wouldn't even sweat the arrows up top. Too much and not needed. The bottom ones will hold the weight of your piece. Just some thoughts... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfamousOne Posted January 7, 2005 Share Posted January 7, 2005 u know there are like 50 other nevers right... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runci Posted January 7, 2005 Share Posted January 7, 2005 im back my pc has been fuked for the last couple of months... Joker: thanks for the advice.. the lines are jagged because when i resized the pic it got fuked.. anyway the advice was well apreciated... InfamousOne: i dont write never...its just a word runci Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runci Posted January 7, 2005 Share Posted January 7, 2005 heres a real quikie keng Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AerosolTerrorist Posted January 7, 2005 Share Posted January 7, 2005 Joker,I've got to say that is the most help I've seen anyone give on this site,and It's actually good advice..yeah runci.dont space your letters that far out man.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fatcappycap Posted January 7, 2005 Share Posted January 7, 2005 i know its not good so let me have it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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teamtbh Posted January 8, 2005 Share Posted January 8, 2005 much cheers for the feedback lads - well appreciated i still want get some decent letters though... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Get stabbed in Dade Posted January 8, 2005 Share Posted January 8, 2005 a bomb is a quick simple, very non descript, a fill is a throw with a fill and a throw without a fill is a hollow Quoted post [ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teamtbh Posted January 8, 2005 Share Posted January 8, 2005 one thing - some of the things at the start arent stickers, theyre posters [ like the pirate, who is about 1.5 metres tall ] i use this heavy duty spray-mount stuff : which is fat cos its so pace to put up a poster with it - broad daylight suddenly becomes a viable option, useful when i live in this shitty little village and have to get bus to find spots. i'm really appreciating all the feedback gents Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runci Posted January 8, 2005 Share Posted January 8, 2005 2 simple sketches... all feedback appreciated and another one runci Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joker Posted January 8, 2005 Share Posted January 8, 2005 Originally posted by runci@Jan 7 2005, 07:09 AM Joker: thanks for the advice.. the lines are jagged because when i resized the pic it got fuked.. anyway the advice was well apreciated... Quoted post I didn't mean the quality of the image, I meant the quality of your line work. In that piece you've chosen to go with a jagged style outline instead of a smooth flowing outline. What I was saying is that it would come off cleaner and fresher if the lines were smooth. In a sense, I was really talking to everyone with my post to you. I just used your outline as an example. Because it was easier to critique than many others posted up. My advice was meant to reach most of the toys in this thread. It is advice all of you cold use. Avon... the simple style piece, the color one... really work that style till the letters feed off one another. Make them fit together like pieces of a puzzle. Perfectly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BuffaloSoulja1234 Posted January 9, 2005 Share Posted January 9, 2005 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AerosolTerrorist Posted January 9, 2005 Share Posted January 9, 2005 Avon,you can have something going,not saying there real good or anything,,just that you have a common sense of letters,you might of herd this alot,but try to do smoething simpler...and DONT do thos arrows those are there for no reason ..what writer are you pushing away??..you get me do smething simpler and post Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runci Posted January 9, 2005 Share Posted January 9, 2005 got new pens n here is a few sketches with them.. keng keng comk what name do u think is better comk/keng.. im thinkin comk comments all welcome. runci Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AerosolTerrorist Posted January 9, 2005 Share Posted January 9, 2005 Whatever one you feel more comfortable writing,the last COMK aint bad..especialy because you dont have arrows for no reason keep at it man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runci Posted January 9, 2005 Share Posted January 9, 2005 fanks man, im still young (grand old age of 13) so ive got a gd many years left in me.. when i see my stuff on the internet the arrows look like shit so im droppin them and goin as simple as i can... anyway fanks for the comment runci Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runci Posted January 9, 2005 Share Posted January 9, 2005 really simple the pics a bit blurry but its from my fone. runci Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AerosolTerrorist Posted January 9, 2005 Share Posted January 9, 2005 Thats better,ha yeah i feel you im only 15 so i get ya..keep doing what your doin Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inoz Posted January 9, 2005 Share Posted January 9, 2005 yea just decided to post some shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AerosolTerrorist Posted January 9, 2005 Share Posted January 9, 2005 Work on straight letters,...style will develop soon...nuthin more to say ^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inoz Posted January 10, 2005 Share Posted January 10, 2005 I know that one sucks it not my best work just something i decided to post Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AerosolTerrorist Posted January 10, 2005 Share Posted January 10, 2005 Noone cares if its your best or not,if you think it sucks why did you post it?...this is a TOYS thread dont give any excuses,just post and we'll give you constructive criticism aight?.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phameousONE Posted January 10, 2005 Share Posted January 10, 2005 what you think? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phameousONE Posted January 10, 2005 Share Posted January 10, 2005 .. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted January 10, 2005 Share Posted January 10, 2005 myself i would not say that shit is toy but heres one for ya go paint that up n let us see the finished art Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fatcappycap Posted January 10, 2005 Share Posted January 10, 2005 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fatcappycap Posted January 10, 2005 Share Posted January 10, 2005 ^^^^^^^couldnt get them to show up^^^^^^^ -avon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AerosolTerrorist Posted January 10, 2005 Share Posted January 10, 2005 Phameous one....umm those are lookin ok,not that bad,but one question could you paint that??..and theres really no letters in there,just interlocking lines,you know?..only a few writers out there can make that style look hott,but who knows maybe you could be one of them someday,another question do you got any flicks where they are just simple letters?..or just something to see how your structure is? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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