why write? Posted March 29, 2004 Author Share Posted March 29, 2004 eat a snackpack. http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/Mar29491.jpg'> new and hopefully improved....where my critics at? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted April 25, 2004 Author Share Posted April 25, 2004 nnnnewwwwwwww stickers: http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/IMG0025.jpg'> http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/Apr16570.jpg'> sketch: http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/IMG0049.jpg'> finished: http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/IMG0052.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KIRS Posted April 25, 2004 Share Posted April 25, 2004 g nice shit SEIH U GETTIN NICE:scream: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueStreaks Posted April 25, 2004 Share Posted April 25, 2004 some of the picture's are blury,probably just my computer,but the one's I can see I like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Konk Rock Posted April 25, 2004 Share Posted April 25, 2004 drop the books and pick up some paint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted April 25, 2004 Author Share Posted April 25, 2004 thanks for feedback...more is welcome at all times Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spellbound Posted April 25, 2004 Share Posted April 25, 2004 yo... simplify your color schemes. your throw is looking better but... hmmm....hard to explain. don't add those extra lines at the end of your main lines. make your I simpler...just a round dot like you have on top...and then sort of a hot dog shape underneath...don't add those curves. work on cleanliness. just do black and white...and fill your three d with all black. that's my advice.. keep it up... looking better. peace Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted April 25, 2004 Author Share Posted April 25, 2004 thanks for the feedback, ill try out your tips on the throw....anyone got any advice for my piece? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ethreadzny2 Posted April 25, 2004 Share Posted April 25, 2004 the throwies look nice.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Goe Posted April 26, 2004 Share Posted April 26, 2004 i quit...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted April 27, 2004 Author Share Posted April 27, 2004 Originally posted by Dr.Goe i quit...... why? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gang_starr Posted April 27, 2004 Share Posted April 27, 2004 Re: nnnnewwwwwwww Originally posted by why write? hott....stick with that style ....keep simple! i like! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted April 27, 2004 Author Share Posted April 27, 2004 heres some more flicks, some were done at school really quick so they may be a bit sloppy... http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/IMG0081.jpg'> http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/IMG0080.jpg'> http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/IMG0071.jpg'> http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/IMG0076.jpg'> http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/IMG0073.jpg'> http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/IMG0070.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Propaganda Posted April 27, 2004 Share Posted April 27, 2004 Originally posted by why write? heres some more flicks, some were done at school really quick so they may be a bit sloppy... I like this one dude. Give it some simple color now and rework this same outline for a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted April 27, 2004 Author Share Posted April 27, 2004 iight thanks, when you say re-work do you mean re-advise it and make it better and better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Propaganda Posted April 27, 2004 Share Posted April 27, 2004 Na. Just keep drawing that same outline bunch of times. Keep use to feel of the letters. Eventually becomes neater, fancier, and bit more advance down the road. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted April 28, 2004 Author Share Posted April 28, 2004 sounds good to me..... all sketches are up for criticism from anyone :crazy: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted April 28, 2004 Author Share Posted April 28, 2004 sketchin everyday till my hair gets gray... http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/IMG0092.jpg'> please critique Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VandeLust Posted April 28, 2004 Share Posted April 28, 2004 The Only Crit I Got Is That Your Coloring Looks Kinda Rushed And Sloppy Slow It Down Some Make It Come Out Cleaner Looking. Other Then That Your Lettering Looks Fine To Meh. - Lust -:king: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YAES Posted April 28, 2004 Share Posted April 28, 2004 Originally posted by DorkstaR you have very beautiful feet... ;) :krunk: thats good! hahahahhahahhaha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted April 28, 2004 Author Share Posted April 28, 2004 i know you love my feet! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted April 29, 2004 Author Share Posted April 29, 2004 Originally posted by why write? sketchin everyday till my hair gets gray... http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/IMG0092.jpg'> please critique bumpin it up for criticism Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAID:one Posted April 29, 2004 Share Posted April 29, 2004 now all you need is some buff and a roller. Nice block busters but if you want critisizm on your letters.........I'd say start expanding on this... http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/IMG0049.jpg'> And this... http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/Apr16570.jpg'> change it up a little each time you sketch it. keep what you like and toss what you think is wak. develope that shit over time. I can see that you've got the bumbs out of your letters and now have some bar consistancy in your stucture. keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timemachine Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 i doont like them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted May 1, 2004 Author Share Posted May 1, 2004 why dont you like them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANK Posted May 2, 2004 Share Posted May 2, 2004 um practice your blocks they are weak they are sloppy sloppy but not bad lettering just slopy so practice umm this is what im talking about: http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/Jan31156.jpg'> um that looks like shit this one is alot better http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/IMG0092.jpg'> thought you cant draw straight lines very well and i dont liek the 3d witht he lines n it n shit and the 3d is off practice drwing cubes till you do them perfect... every thing is a good direction i like some of your letters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted May 3, 2004 Author Share Posted May 3, 2004 http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/IMG0025.jpg'> can someone give me some advice on my throws? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BANK Posted May 4, 2004 Share Posted May 4, 2004 i loke those.. the post office is our friend they give us tons of free stickers i love it..um shadows could be better i liek the one on the right um mess with teh shit i like the I umm i liek though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted May 4, 2004 Share Posted May 4, 2004 Well its hard to give advice on throwies cuz u just really learn it on ur own. Especially in NYC where every block is bombed! It not bad but still needs work. S make the top Phatter E top Phatter I lose the Thing at the bottom H is Ok;) http://img36.photobucket.com/albums/v109/ElMaSKillaH/IMG0025a.jpg'> I tried 2 make it so its close to ur style! Hope it will help a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted May 4, 2004 Author Share Posted May 4, 2004 ^ thanks for the help...i appreciate it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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