why write? Posted October 4, 2004 Author Share Posted October 4, 2004 great advice, thanks a lot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted October 4, 2004 Share Posted October 4, 2004 YOU CAN DO IT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TuffKid Posted October 4, 2004 Share Posted October 4, 2004 damn guy you suck... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sexidol Posted October 5, 2004 Share Posted October 5, 2004 practice....practice...practice...i didn't see one, that i like.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mef_one Posted October 5, 2004 Share Posted October 5, 2004 i dont like your peicin styles just keep workin on those throws in my opinion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anz Posted October 6, 2004 Share Posted October 6, 2004 Originally posted by why write? another sketch, thx for the feedback, what is a topic? http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/Aug21599.jpg'> i think this would be a nice fatass train, or a nice quick bomb... if it had a bottum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TuffKid Posted October 8, 2004 Share Posted October 8, 2004 dummy why dont your do something in the center of the paper instead of always doing shit in the corner..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
end2end Posted October 8, 2004 Share Posted October 8, 2004 Don't know how long u been writing for? But if you are in the early stages, you're deffinately startin' out the best way, just keepin' your letters simple and not adding any arrows or mad letter connections and shit to confuse matters! Just try and perfect all your letters in the simplest form before moving on. Keep up the good work! :spin2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted October 9, 2004 Author Share Posted October 9, 2004 Originally posted by TuffKid@Oct 8 2004, 03:42 PM dummy why dont your do something in the center of the paper instead of always doing shit in the corner..... Quoted post cause i like the corner, whats wrong with the bottom of the page? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sexidol Posted October 9, 2004 Share Posted October 9, 2004 yo man...to get good...take some of this people advice...couse you need it....and what a fuck is wrong with bottom of the paper is that that you can't see your whole letters...so like i said before get to work...practice...practice...practice...when you get tired smoke a blunt and continue...i don't know where do you live but those trains you are posting ain't fun...get some graff shots and post that shit...but the way i see it i'm talking to the toy...so before you get crazy with that black book of yours it's gona take time to become a king... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted October 13, 2004 Author Share Posted October 13, 2004 well heres something not at the bottom of the paper.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted October 13, 2004 Author Share Posted October 13, 2004 i duno..just posting almost everything i do hoping for some feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAID:one Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 just keep on keepin' on. I definitley see improvements although slight ones. They'll add up with each sketch though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WitE TrAsH Posted October 14, 2004 Share Posted October 14, 2004 Keep your hand steady and try different styles. You keep trying the same style with different words. You never know, you might have an easier time skecthing a different style. Experiment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted October 16, 2004 Author Share Posted October 16, 2004 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WitE TrAsH Posted October 17, 2004 Share Posted October 17, 2004 Originally posted by why write?@Oct 16 2004, 04:42 PM Quoted post Im feeling this one a little. Better than your other stuff, but there are only small differences. You need to incorperate another style. Either try meshing your letters together, or use arrows or something. Don't really know how to explain what I'm trying to say. Whatever.. hopefully you get the jist of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WitE TrAsH Posted October 17, 2004 Share Posted October 17, 2004 Oh yeah, and I noticed that your letter are skinny in the middle. Like the go from wide at the top and bottom and like all of a sudden get skinny in the middle. Why don't you either try making the entire letter thick, or skinny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted October 20, 2004 Author Share Posted October 20, 2004 thanks for the feedback..heres some more. a lot of my styles may seem similar, it is because im stumped and i dont know where to advance from here... any criticism? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hokus Posted October 21, 2004 Share Posted October 21, 2004 2nd one is pretty cool..and the last one i like.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WitE TrAsH Posted October 21, 2004 Share Posted October 21, 2004 There straight. The second looks a little weird, maybe its your camera or something. But I think the ones you do without fill look better for some reason... Maybe thats just me though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted October 21, 2004 Author Share Posted October 21, 2004 yeah my camera is shitty but i aint gonna use that as an excuse, im doing the best i could...thanks for the feedback, heres one more.. more soon to come, maybe tonight or tommorow not sure yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anz Posted October 21, 2004 Share Posted October 21, 2004 all you shit looks the same. which is a bad thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted October 21, 2004 Share Posted October 21, 2004 get a different style on the letter or maybe a couple of different addons like a few arrows or summat aight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted October 21, 2004 Author Share Posted October 21, 2004 well thanks for the feedback and yes i do agree my styles look very similar im trying to advance to the next step up with a different style but im very confused and stumped on what to do next i need some criticism..thanks heres my throw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TH3MONK Posted October 23, 2004 Share Posted October 23, 2004 not bad not bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angry Kids Posted October 23, 2004 Share Posted October 23, 2004 please never use that gay fraze again^ and you better not turn into the next onesecondple!... haha... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted October 23, 2004 Share Posted October 23, 2004 maybe on some of ur pieces add some extensions that actually lead to places and put a couple of arros on try them out in different places on ur letters till you put them some where that flows just go dnt go too wild but try it u will see what i mean when u start one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted October 24, 2004 Author Share Posted October 24, 2004 alright thanks for the feedback and i will try that extension thing on my next sketch..i hope it works cause im not good with extensions...they confuse me..but heres one i did a few days ago Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gates Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 i like that..except for the for the botttom sticks of the H.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WitE TrAsH Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 Yeah... I like it too. Fix the bottom of the H and you will be straight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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