not_like_you Posted March 5, 2004 Share Posted March 5, 2004 cool,im glad you guys like it..im working on cutting my lines right now..i still need a lot of improvement though..thanks again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Propaganda Posted March 5, 2004 Share Posted March 5, 2004 Re: 5th piece(kind of) Originally posted by not_like_you http://img17.photobucket.com/albums/v50/jerome2/ko3.jpg'> :lol: for the 5th time i dont think its bad,but it still sucks. That looks old school. That is mad fresh to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THE OMEN Posted April 18, 2004 Share Posted April 18, 2004 the 2 names i'm workin' with-i posted these in the new sketch thread but didn't get alot of advice so here goes nothin'.... http://www.trenzhost.com/files/THE OMEN/OMEN OUTLINE1.gif'> http://www.trenzhost.com/files/THE OMEN/OMEN1.gif'> http://www.trenzhost.com/files/THE OMEN/OMEN2.gif'> http://www.trenzhost.com/files/THE OMEN/OMEN3.gif'> http://www.trenzhost.com/files/THE OMEN/OMEN4.gif'> http://www.trenzhost.com/files/THE OMEN/OMEN5.gif'> http://www.trenzhost.com/files/THE OMEN/OMEN6.gif'> http://www.trenzhost.com/files/THE OMEN/OMEN7.gif'> http://www.trenzhost.com/files/THE OMEN/ENTOM1.gif'> http://www.trenzhost.com/files/THE OMEN/ENTOM2.gif'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Talon Posted April 18, 2004 Share Posted April 18, 2004 Omen, that walrus is great, and I like the third picture you posted, too. I'm looking for a little feedback as well: http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00401408f00000010.jpg'> I don't think this T flows very well, but I like the rest. http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00401408f00000011.jpg'> http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00401408f00000012.jpg'> http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00401408f00000013.jpg'> http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00401408f00000014.jpg'> http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00401408f00000015.jpg'> I haven't outlined or colored this one, but I think I got the letters about right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THE OMEN Posted April 19, 2004 Share Posted April 19, 2004 talon, your stuff is tight-especially the one with the characters on it-even though i am in no position to give advice, it's good to see that someone is is experimenting with different stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eseLokE1uno Posted April 19, 2004 Share Posted April 19, 2004 Talon- I would say to work with block letters because you dont seem to understand the anatomy of letters enough to deform them the way you do. the coloring and 3d is good though so work on developing those letters now. Omen- The first two sketches are nice esp the 3d on the top of the second page your characters are pretty dope it's apparent your a good artist but your wildstyles need a lot of work, also your sketches where the letters blend together also dont work. I think you got an idea of basic letters but you need to focus on them individually not as a whole hope this helps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THE OMEN Posted April 19, 2004 Share Posted April 19, 2004 thnx alot man, i'm glad we got some people willin' to help out.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Talon Posted April 19, 2004 Share Posted April 19, 2004 not what I wanted to hear at all, but I guess I'll take your advice... thanks after thinking about what you said for about 5 minutes, I'm beginning to see what you meant. thanks for the advice, and I'll act on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted April 19, 2004 Author Share Posted April 19, 2004 talon, personally i like what you got there, maybe its just me though, but i think it looks good.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Talon Posted April 19, 2004 Share Posted April 19, 2004 Thanks, Onesecond. I don't think it's too bad either, but I still get what he was saying. I see spots in some of my letters that get kinda weird and I need to work on them. I don't really think that it necessitates going back to block letters, but I definately need to look at what I'm doing a little closer and make some adjustments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VandeLust Posted April 19, 2004 Share Posted April 19, 2004 The Second One Is Nice Talon But The Rest Can Use Some Work. But Still You Know How To Work Your Colors Keep up The Good Work And You'll Get Better In No Time. :king:-Lust-:king: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ethreadzny2 Posted April 20, 2004 Share Posted April 20, 2004 please, give me some pointers.. http://im1.shutterfly.com/procserv/47b4da38b3127ccebd79fd04e1850000001610'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yellow Feets Posted April 20, 2004 Share Posted April 20, 2004 Ethreadz, is that some of your older shit? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted April 20, 2004 Share Posted April 20, 2004 thats pretty good i'd just make the A and the D bigger. the bars on the T look wierd but i cant do T's myself so i dunno:lol: Overall its very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ethreadzny2 Posted April 20, 2004 Share Posted April 20, 2004 Originally posted by Yellow Feets Ethreadz, is that some of your older shit? actually it is some what newer, but I get reallypreoccupied when I draw. I rush way to much. starzabove, your absolutely right, the a and d really dont fit with the rest of the piece. and yep t's are a bitch and a half.. my t kind of looks awkward, maybe like a 13 year old boy at a school dance.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THE OMEN Posted April 21, 2004 Share Posted April 21, 2004 http://www.trenzhost.com/files/THE OMEN/OMEN8.gif'> http://www.trenzhost.com/files/THE OMEN/OMEN9.gif'> http://www.trenzhost.com/files/THE OMEN/OMEN10.gif'> http://www.trenzhost.com/files/THE OMEN/OMENSCION.gif'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted April 21, 2004 Author Share Posted April 21, 2004 omen, i think your shit is ill, i have thought about writing it before,b ut never really wanted to change from enterllllllllllllll Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Then Away Posted April 21, 2004 Share Posted April 21, 2004 http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00401408f00000009.jpg'> the only problem that i see actually is the t, it looks like it has tumors on it, if that makes sense. Just make it all nice and smooth on the top Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joker Posted April 21, 2004 Share Posted April 21, 2004 I wish I had seen this thread before today... I've only looked at this last page. Talon... yea, shit is tough to hear sometimes but working with the simple anatomy of your letters is going to help you in the long run. Have you ever seen an Mber freight? If so, you know what I'm talking about when I say stick with going simple till it comes out naturally... when you don't have to even think about it. At that point, mix it up a little. Omen... you're much like me when I first started. I couldn't stick to one style, I wanted to try everything. Did it pay off? I don't know... sorta? I love the piece where the E rolls off the right leg of the M. Real nice. And from looking at your pieces and your jibbly-bits around the pages... it's obvious you have talent. I'd roll with the semi-simple stuff for a while. Work at it till it burns... pun intended. Then start adding your arrows, bar extensions and so on. Right now you're all over the place, like a kid with ADD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Talon Posted April 21, 2004 Share Posted April 21, 2004 Then Away: That was from November. My newer stuff is down the page a lil bit :lol: Joker: Yeah, hard to hear, but I'm over it now. I look back on the last 4 months and I see very little progression because I failed to work with really simple stuff. Omen: That scion thing's pretty neat. Did you go to that Scion panel thing they had here a few weekends back? I forget what it was called and what gallery, but they had a bunch of writers paint the scions and they were showing them at an exhibit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THE OMEN Posted April 22, 2004 Share Posted April 22, 2004 no i didn't go there (although i wish i had i_i). however, i did go to hense's exhibit-that's kinda where i got the idea for the scion-cuz they were handin' out scion cd's. thnx for the compliments tho'. joker, i understand what you're sayin' n' i'll try to stick to the simple stuff so it's second nature Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CamS Posted April 23, 2004 Share Posted April 23, 2004 i can always use more advice..critiqing appreciated.. - .kom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Propaganda Posted April 23, 2004 Share Posted April 23, 2004 ^Too much flare glares?:confused: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ase Posted June 9, 2006 Share Posted June 9, 2006 What style should i do after i think i got my block letters down, anytime when i wanna do somethin i cant think of any style but the same one over and over again. (mostly block) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AOTPrep Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 post a photo of it if u want real advise, cause then ppl can see what u need to work on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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