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how long you been writing? im not one to give advice because i dont really do pieces but i think some of the lines arent proportioned right inside the 3d and in your letter structure..but im new and dont know much im sure others can point out what needs to be worked on..

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aight, this is what i see. You seem to be very inconsistent with your stuff. On some pieces, that letters overlap in the 3d, but on other parts, they dont. dont do that. eithe overlap them all, which is hard to pull off anyway, or dont overlap the 3d and the letters so crazy......go sipmler also

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well u hav a lot 2 work on handstyle is 1st then ur letter stucture. Evryone has there own style but i dont think you should overlap your letters.

Oh n be prepared for the comments ur new on 12oz :lol:

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Well..my road dogs already

said everything I was going to

say so what left to say but keep

doing your thing bro..eventually

you'll get it..

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simplify. You are obviously new to graff and in order to learn the proper way things progress you must learn the basics of how a letter is built. You can put a bazillion arrows and extensions on a badly structured letter and it will still be just that, a badly structured letter. Start off taking letters off of logo's and different fonts and pay close attention to the "bars" that make up your letters. After you can start getting your simple letters good and smooth hings will justs tart to flow off of them. This isn't something that will happen over night though. Its a slow process and it takes alot of work. No form of art is ever mastered in a year. Just keep at is and don't listen to the negetive tings that people say and just try to learn from anyone that is willing to drop a little knowledge.

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