Guest Propaganda Posted September 29, 2004 Share Posted September 29, 2004 Originally posted by ceptone i'm sorry but this just looks like you took a totem piece right out his book...lol:lol: :king: nice try...next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hokus Posted September 29, 2004 Share Posted September 29, 2004 http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00463845f00000033.jpg'> gimmie feed back Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted September 30, 2004 Author Share Posted September 30, 2004 Originally posted by ceptone i'm sorry but this just looks like you took a totem piece right out his book...lol:lol: :king: you are a fuckin retard... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gates Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 cept one, i'm sorry but just shut the fuck up.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/Sep29652.jpg'> critics? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ving Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 Originally posted by Angry Kids haha, well i'd rather see no 3d, than the way ving completely discgraced what i would assume is 3d on his drawings....haha...sorry to be harsh, but you need to work on that hard before you put it on the net...feedback.. sa'll good, i'm getting better. i guess its kinda raggy, but you gotta take into consideration that, that those were done with not even a week of experience in writing under my belt. cause ussually i'd do a sticker character. but i'm taking awhile off to do graf. its funny, the sticker guys are much nicer then your graf heads. oh well, sa'll good. thanx for the comment though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ving Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 some more for ya'll to look at. some constructive critisism would be nice. i did this one todai in school. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v13/asiansolja327/slaypink.jpg'> this on was done last weekend.. was just messign around. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v13/asiansolja327/slayguy.jpg'> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 yo ving, those wild ass letters arent gonna work...try to go simple...simple stands out and then you can do your wild shit....copy like normal letters SLAY and then add your own touch to it eventually and work from there...add 3d..keep the coloring simple for simples, and you should be fine...when you do your simples post back and im almost 99% sure you will get somewhat good feedback...like my boy told me once...keep it simple, stupid. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted September 30, 2004 Author Share Posted September 30, 2004 Originally posted by why write? yo ving, those wild ass letters arent gonna work...try to go simple...simple stands out and then you can do your wild shit....copy like normal letters SLAY and then add your own touch to it eventually and work from there...add 3d..keep the coloring simple for simples, and you should be fine...when you do your simples post back and im almost 99% sure you will get somewhat good feedback...like my boy told me once...keep it simple, stupid. basically do this. You have to start basic, gotta walk before you can run, Once you have basic letter form down you can expand from there. If you know basic form and get good at it in the begining, then you can deveolop. I wish people were there to tell me that when i started, cuz of course I started wild, and it takes a long time to learn when you think you are great already. Im just now developing, finally, but serious, get letters down first.....and over 7000 posts, that helps..haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
casensitive4 Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 Originally posted by why write? http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/Sep29652.jpg'> critics? letter spacing is funky... sei H???you added your little 3D indicators in spots they dont need to be, like the vertical bar on your H.. or N whatever it is.. that brings up capitol E lowercase i/h(or n).. they should all be capitol or lowercase.. add some color.. and some funk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ving Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 man, i hate regular letters... plus i've already done them for like 2 days in a row.... http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v13/asiansolja327/gayslay.jpg'> http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v13/asiansolja327/blackbookslay.jpg'> plus i don't think i'm that amazing, i'm still learning, but i think simple letters are a waste of time. i'm aiming for confusion, all that ish is wild letters.................................................................................. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 Originally posted by Ving man, i hate regular letters... plus i've already done them for like 2 days in a row.... plus i don't think i'm that amazing, i'm still learning, but i think simple letters are a waste of time. i'm aiming for confusion, all that ish is wild letters.................................................................................. This is the most toyish "graff" remark yet seriously! But I do like your character which makes you a good drawer but graff is about skills and you NEED to start simple! you'll learn the hardway when other people give you much worse remarks Did you start walking before crawling? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ving Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 yo, i learned to fly before i could walk. lol. j/k. i gotcha. my bad for the stupid remarks. i'm just very impatiant. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 Man believe me it takes time, but my advice along with many others will kust tell you start SIMPLE I know it might suck to you, but you'll get it keep doing your thing & thanks for not taking imy comments the wrong way! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted September 30, 2004 Author Share Posted September 30, 2004 http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v383/hiddenshovel/My%20Portfolio/45a7ea15.jpg'> yes, worst color scheme ever, sorry, but something new Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
casekonly Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 onesecondple: nice stuff. you're improvements are really showing. keep it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
intercept Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 Originally posted by Propaganda nice try...next i'm sorry but 4-5 years ago on this site that would have been called out..i could really care less but to much of the same shit is boring. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAID:one Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 Originally posted by casekonly onesecondple: nice stuff... Starting to lay down the funk, thicker and thicker. Keep it up.http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb/icons/icon26.gif'> That SLAY character is definitely in there and that green simple has potential! The advice you're getting in this thread is on point thus far from what I can see.http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb/icons/icon26.gif'> SEIH, Try drawing each letter with one line strokes instead of sketch hacks. Get loose with it. I see improvement with each sketch.http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb/icons/icon26.gif'> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 thanks for the advice paid...very inspiring ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAID:one Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 it's worth about 2 cents. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted October 1, 2004 Author Share Posted October 1, 2004 Originally posted by PAID:one it's worth about 2 cents. i will fight you.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CEOCAT Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 JUST A LITTLE SOMETHIN Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAID:one Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 Originally posted by onesecondple i will fight you.... choose your weapon.:cool: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted October 1, 2004 Author Share Posted October 1, 2004 Originally posted by PAID:one choose your weapon.:cool: glove slap, baby glove slap, i dont take crap, get at me on aim hiddenshovel Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0RB1T0N3R Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 ving you are a good artist. the letters are coming out pretty nice as well but why do you have all those little lines everywhere? im willing to trade some graff stickers for yer ving superman stickers, and some of yer graff stickers as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
She7x11 Posted October 2, 2004 Share Posted October 2, 2004 not new but not TOO old http://img4.imgspot.com/u/04/189/02/she04.JPG'> http://img4.imgspot.com/u/04/189/02/yellowshe.JPG'> http://img29.exs.cx/img29/1742/WASTEbattle.jpg'> http://img74.exs.cx/img74/2583/AREbattle.jpg'> http://img8.imgspot.com/u/04/244/00/fullpage.JPG'> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zealot Posted October 2, 2004 Share Posted October 2, 2004 defecting to 12oz from bs eh she? that last one is so hot:cool: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evoke_Me Posted October 2, 2004 Share Posted October 2, 2004 She7x11, hit i love ur stuff. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
She7x11 Posted October 2, 2004 Share Posted October 2, 2004 yeah, bombingscience is gay Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted October 2, 2004 Author Share Posted October 2, 2004 Originally posted by She7x11 yeah, bombingscience is gay for some odd reason i laughed at this obscure comment Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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