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Originally posted by acidica

im diggin the background on the second one cer... it reminds me of my stuff... im not sure about all ur addons but i dont like add ons in general.. its good tho

i always like the classic stripe fill on letters

 

 

no beef but how do we know you talk the walk? Post some work please. Im interested. I mean you said you've been writing for about three years dude.

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Originally posted by Propaganda

no beef but how do we know you talk the walk? Post some work please. Im interested. I mean you said you've been writing for about three years dude.

you mean walk the talk?

http://img9.photobucket.com/albums/v25/amnesiac_/aeioufill.jpg'>my newest style..background not done

http://img9.photobucket.com/albums/v25/amnesiac_/redpageFINISHED.jpg'>two pages from my blackbook.

ive posted those befor..

couple months ago

http://img9.photobucket.com/albums/v25/amnesiac_/thursdayblue.jpg'>

this was about a year and half into the game

http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00300656f00000014.jpg'>

when i first started writing aeiou

http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00300656f00000015.jpg'>

'mikey'

http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00300656f00000009.jpg'>

'daidai'

http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00300656f00000001.jpg'>

4 black books ago...

 

please dont diss on my old stuff.. it was right after that toy period where i thought i was good enough to do lots of add ons and extensions... and than someone slapped me and said to go simple.

 

so does that convince you more of how long ive been writeing... i can post some of my first year stuff if you want...

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in alaska its really hard to paint during the winter.. i paint in the summer tho.. i get up in Cali about once a summer. not too skilled with the paintin yet just mostly bombs...

and by simples do u mean bombs.. or just simple sketches... cuz those ones are pretty simple in that they dont have any add-ons or what

whatever ill try to get some cuz i dont have any on me here

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''Screaming insects hail the Queen

Welcome the killer home

Hold me close to your dead heart

and let the rapist roam

Put your bloody hands on me

And whisper in my ear

Burning bodies keep us warm

And have for many years''

are those acidbath lyrics... i used to listen to them a lot.

 

with those sketches im still not feeling all the arrows/hearts.. i think your letters would be better without them and your color choice needs work

http://img7.photobucket.com/albums/v18/ope...Picture_496.jpg

i think the outline is too light compared to the forcefeild it throws me off mega.

 

the other ones are fine the color is dope, but it blends in a whole lot with the background. thats cool if thats what your going for.

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Originally posted by acidica

you mean walk the talk?

aeioufill.jpgmy newest style..background not done

redpageFINISHED.jpgtwo pages from my blackbook.

ive posted those befor..

couple months ago

thursdayblue.jpg

this was about a year and half into the game

eba00300656f00000014.jpg

when i first started writing aeiou

eba00300656f00000015.jpg

'mikey'

eba00300656f00000009.jpg

'daidai'

eba00300656f00000001.jpg

4 black books ago...

 

please dont diss on my old stuff.. it was right after that toy period where i thought i was good enough to do lots of add ons and extensions... and than someone slapped me and said to go simple.

 

so does that convince you more of how long ive been writeing... i can post some of my first year stuff if you want...

 

 

Interesting, now post some simpler work. Not big fan of wildstyle so I can't jugde but I can tell off the bat I only like the blue piece with unfinshed 3-d drop ends.

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honestly,i could care less...

 

Originally posted by acidica

''Screaming insects hail the Queen

Welcome the killer home

Hold me close to your dead heart

and let the rapist roam

Put your bloody hands on me

And whisper in my ear

Burning bodies keep us warm

And have for many years''

are those acidbath lyrics... i used to listen to them a lot.

 

with those sketches im still not feeling all the arrows/hearts.. i think your letters would be better without them and your color choice needs work

 

the other ones are fine the color is dope, but it blends in a whole lot with the background. thats cool if thats what your going for.

dont talk to me about letters or what i should do with mine...there is a lot wrong with your sketches so maybe you should criticize your own work..and yes those are ACID BATH lyrics...you shouldnt have to ask if you've listened to them a lot...
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Re: honestly,i could care less...

 

Originally posted by ACIDBATHONER

dont talk to me about letters or what i should do with mine...there is a lot wrong with your sketches so maybe you should criticize your own work..and yes those are ACID BATH lyrics...you shouldnt have to ask if you've listened to them a lot...

 

'criticize' my own work? how could i do that.. i post to get criticism from others thats how i can improve... by other peoples opinions of my work.

i also can talk about your letters all i want.. YOU are the one posting them so i assume you want our opinion...

explaining myself is a lot easier than just saying 'i dont like them'

 

if there are wrong with my letters could you help me out? or just diss... mabey if i added hearts on every single letter it would look better?

i didnt think so.

 

''Interesting, now post some simpler work. Not big fan of wildstyle so I can't jugde but I can tell off the bat I only like the blue piece with unfinshed 3-d drop ends.''

 

that actually is pretty simple for me... like any letter extensions or add ones... just streched letters.. i wouldnt call it wildstyle. but can u tell me why you only like the DAIDAI piece? like the fill is nice and its kinda semitric but the letters are pretty bad. is it the 3d you like?

 

here is another blackbook page i am almost done with and will finish later today... it was the first page in my blackbook it was originally gonna be sent out to circle around but than i realized it wouldnt come back :(

http://img9.photobucket.com/albums/v25/amnesiac_/BLACKBOOKPAGE.jpg'>

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It is hard to really see your work. Your drawings in your blackbook are very cluttered together. Nice colors but I can't really see any letters. It throws it all off. You have any simpler contrustive pieces? Your pieces seem very wildstyled type. You deguise your letters a whole lot with just color and collages it seems. I dunno. Any black and white sketches? But for sure, that first green piece you drew up looks akward. I can only read a A. It tends to seems that you extend too much a letter overlapping a another letter. It destroys balance.

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Originally posted by Propaganda

It is hard to really see your work. Your drawings in your blackbook are very cluttered together. Nice colors but I can't really see any letters. It throws it all off. You have any simpler contrustive pieces? Your pieces seem very wildstyled type. You deguise your letters a whole lot with just color and collages it seems. I dunno. Any black and white sketches?

cluttered and colorful is what i am going for... i am really into collages. i just dont like wasteing space expecially with graffiti.. like the whole one piece in the middle of the paper floating is kinda silly to me. i like backgrounds and interaction.

black and white? i usually dont work with black and white like i will start off a sketch with a colored pencil so i dont erase much..

most of the black and white pieces i do have i color afterwords..

ill see what i can work up tho...

a black and white simple?

ill try :spent:

 

EDIT:

yes the white throw on the bottom

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Originally posted by acidica

cluttered and colorful is what i am going for... i am really into collages. i just dont like wasteing space expecially with graffiti.. like the whole one piece in the middle of the paper floating is kinda silly to me. i like backgrounds and interaction.

black and white? i usually dont work with black and white like i will start off a sketch with a colored pencil so i dont erase much..

most of the black and white pieces i do have i color afterwords..

ill see what i can work up tho...

a black and white simple?

ill try :spent:

 

Collages are mad dope. I love color as well. If you seen some of my previous work, you can tell im into colors as well. I don't like blank pages ethier. They do tend to ruin alot for me. But most my pieces really flow like freight style of the bottom. I will try to post a bunch of new sketches tommorow if get the chance.

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''Collages are mad dope. I love color as well. If you seen some of my previous work, you can tell im into colors as well. I don't like blank pages ethier. They do tend to ruin alot for me. But most my pieces really flow like freight style of the bottom. I will try to post a bunch of new sketches tommorow if get the chance.''

 

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'' Any black and white sketches? But for sure, that first green piece you drew up looks akward. I can only read a A. It tends to seems that you extend too much a letter overlapping a another letter. It destroys balance.''

 

i think i gotcha... ill see what i can do

and here are some non colored non background sketches

http://img9.photobucket.com/albums/v25/amnesiac_/aeiou-blue.jpg'>

http://img9.photobucket.com/albums/v25/amnesiac_/RI.jpg'>

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