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i like this, but yeah, by graff standards, if you gotta add in MS paint

to show where your letters are, you missed. thats not to dis, i think

you gotta take the strong points of this work and just incorporate

some graff fundamentals to it.

 

the biggest issue, and its already been stated, is the letters. not just

in terms of structure but how you composed them too. they're all crammed

ontop of each other in the middle of the piece and then there's like these

huge wings on either side. it all looks cool, but you should be balancing

out those letters consistently through out the whole composition. make your

letters have more room in between to add those extensions and additions.

 

you dont even need to go back to simples like dudes are sayin, but just

simplify it a little. your 3d is sharp, but choose a vanishing point where you know

you'll be able to do some sick dimensions.

 

stay up, i wanna see more soon.

 

earo kills it. raindog, i was just thinkin of doin arrows as hand gestures

 

Thanks man ;) Really, I've looked at letters form and completely forgot about these 2 things which you said about composition.

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stem is rockin for sure... people just don't like the big head that you have. however it is no big deal with me however I do have to say that other dudes hands are killin compared to yours that you put up. just an opinion, we all have them they are like assholes.

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