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Edoggg: I like the abstract feel to it, it's different and thats what makes it your graffiti. Although what is the first letter?

 

Jesso66: Loving that t-shirt, only thing i dont like is your arrows, and some of the colouring is too dark in some places.

 

Viper265: That freestyle goes hard! Nothing else to say other than a few of your bars may be a twitch off.

 

Noek831: Diggin that simple style, looks fresh.Loving that pink 3d.

 

freak: That looks dope as fuck although the k could use a connection to balance the whole thing seeing as the f has one.

 

Give me some crits, Didn't get any in the toy thread when i posted.

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Phenom exchange-Pen freestyle(couldn't find a pencil)

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I got kind of tired towards the end so I took the easy way out the "O" lulz

 

aw man that burns anything i can do!!!!im still working on yours,its going 2 be so hard 2 follow up on that!

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Thanks guys,

 

Eido-Yeah, that 3d up top is crooked. I was getting tired but I kept sketching, whoops! You have a good style there. The Einstein piece looks a little too structured. It looks unbalanced because it needs detail under the piece but thats me being picky. Great fill and shadows.

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ight hammer pm me sounds good cant wait to get it on.....also some tight work above viper and indica .....i can critic but my only critic to everyone is the more you do the better u get..and never be a biter meaning never look at someones piece and try to do the same arrows or same exact letters. thats shit is corny has always been and always will be !!....and agreed years penwork always shows someones techinques with that said no more flapping strictly posting..

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dope as fuck man cheers I havent finished yours yet but here is how it looks now, not sure thou the ser is kinda cramped, want to redo and make it all a bit more cramped from the beginning, sorry not got it finished yet, ended up having to work

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my dog jumped on me whn doing the O so had to make the best of a bad situation, actually i will probably scratch this sketch and do another lol

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Here's my scorecard:

 

 

Outline: Jamak, smoother flow and better balance

 

Colours: Jamak, brighter and don't overpower the visibility of the letters themselves. Don't like the arrows, though.

 

Fill: Pesk, neither piece has the kind of fill that I really go for but that orangey-fire with lightening on Pesk's piece is wicked

 

3D: Pesk, really fucking tight but also really let down with the lack of contrasting colours on the letters

 

Background/Bubbles: Jamak, by a mile. Those bubbles/clouds are fucking sweet

 

Overall: Jamak, just has better flow, colours and balance.

 

Jamak has it in my eyes.

 

 

 

Just my opinion, both pieces blow away anything I could do

I find it funny how you don't have the letters as part of the scoreboard...

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