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OptimusPrime

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I'm liking the letters in the third one...particularily the e. The flow is tight. As for the last one, I'm not feeling it much. I dont like the structure of the letters as much as the third one.

 

PEACE!

-CASE

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I like the first pieced SERIA. I like how the letters flow together. But there are a few mistakes in that one. THE "R" and the "A". Check out your other letters. The isn't much space in the "S" or "E". But in the "R" and "A", there is space. Space meaning that whole in the letters. Ahhh... I hope you understand what I am trying to say.

 

Ehhh.. I don't really like that last one that much. I like some of the lettters in it though. It's probably that spiral shit. OH YEAH, dude, you should work on your thorwups as well. Your throwups look like mine. Heh.

 

 

That's a pretty funny character. Post more. I like it. I still think that first "piece" is the best out of all. I really like it. Minor mistakes but I don't care. Good stuff...

 

 

peace!

AMEK

 

 

ps- I said first piece because I don't see that "simple" as a "simple". I mean, it's easy to read but there is some shit y'know?

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Dope. Now that's a simple. Although there are the little arrows(?) on the S and the A. Good stuff. I like your S's and E's.

 

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I think you should work on your coloring. You color like me. Which isn't very good. Heh.

 

I'm going to contibute to this thread somehow. unitl then...

 

 

peace!

AMEK

 

EDIT*

I don't really mean coloring. More like the designs and shit in the letters y'know..

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Cool shit.....like suess said, the color schemes could use some work, besides that...good flow in almost most of em...post some more...i dig:king:

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