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MOSHE

 

ITS COOL MAN, I LIKE THE STUFF YOU DO... BUT YOU POST THE SAME SKETCH OVER AND OVER THE ONE WITH THE WUTANG COMICS, STARTING A NEW THREAD EACH TIME... GO TO SEARCH FIND THE THREAD YOU STARTED LAST AND BOOM! THERE YAH GO.! PEAS;)

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When the picture was loading and the only thing that you can see was the letters and half of the ninja, I thought this shit was going to be dope. I just hate that cartoon theme. I dont know... just isn't working for me. But the actual piece [the letters] in that first one is ok but not great. Better than some people on the boards. You just need to work on the 'O', it had that little extension on it so STUPID peole might think it's a 'Q'. That 'H' is hurting the whole thing. 'E' can be better. Keep sketching, nice colors on that piece.

 

Oh, that one with the bigheads made me laugh. Ha!

 

 

 

good stuff... keep posting

AMEK

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Guest PHYNE
Originally posted by mr.VIRS

yo moshe not feeling this new ones i think you should work on letter structure

 

 

:rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: you got room to talk son.........

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you have no room to talk man...your letters you 'draw' are from other people so enough with the shit talkingman.......go paint.......

 

 

 

 

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the top one is bitten hard. all youve done is add an H if you can even call it that. funny how the M's all look like N's eh...

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Re: Re: graffffffffffffffffiti

 

Originally posted by Dr. Dazzle

This could quite possibly be the worst H I have ever seen.....

 

which one is the damn h?

 

and virs, i talked to you about this, just because people give you advice, dosent mean everybody has the same exact problem. So you dont have to give them advice like everyone follows the exact same path as they start

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i dont see why everyone is badmouthing yur shit man....ive definatly seen a lot worse but like what they said work on the "h" homie ;)

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its good that ur tryin, but u should try flipin ur own shit. its cool if other people influence you, but u shouldnt copy the letters to the tee...i dont kno if people are just trying to be nice, or dont even notice, but when you have somewhat of a flow, such as the 'MOS' and which the M looks like a familiar looking lowercase 'N'.. and then you come to the 'H', which i hope is a lower case H, the structure of the letters break down and the H becomes a wobbly weak line with no posture, and a limp penis coming out of it to make the loop of the 'h'... and the 'E' is foogly and has too many extensions comin out for no reason and makes it looked cramped up.. charcters are good, but u should try throwing more shades with a colored pencil ontop of the marker, they will look better.

 

^ take that as advice, not as hatred. everybody's been through this.

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I'm in a damn fine mood...

 

Hey, I think they're pretty good.

MUCH better than another Israeli "writer" we all know who is now "Mr. Criticize".

Keep it up you could be top shelf.

Of course the letters could be worked on, but you have some skills, no doubt.

peace

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i see someone found my thread

 

thanks for all youer response

 

i want to clarify something those sketch are very old

i did them a long time ago and since then i have larned a thing or 2.

about the "h" i think that all the latters are bad not jast the h

but it was one of my old sketchs. lets face the facts i had to

start somewhere :D

 

im sorry that i dont have anything new to show

becouse im very busy with my hip hop music albom

but im always come in here to see and learn

 

thanks again

 

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