Fate2*88 Posted November 15, 2003 Author Share Posted November 15, 2003 It appears you have letter structure in mind. You just need to work on the letters, they are kind of bubbly, and alot of them need work. Work on the M, E, and whatever is at the end past the M definitely. I hope some other heads give you some advice, I'm not that good a critique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayFo Posted November 15, 2003 Share Posted November 15, 2003 riak, ya new style is ill... especially when ya letters are closer together, it's hot. Not feelin the throw very much tho... but maybe that's just me. You improved a damn lot, its crazy. Makes me wanna start practin piecin more but im lazy haha... oh well, keep it up, peace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted November 15, 2003 Author Share Posted November 15, 2003 Thanks Jyse, I'm working on it. Right now I'm thinking about my hand. Opinions: 1, 2, 3, 4 or none? http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000228.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KiSe Posted November 15, 2003 Share Posted November 15, 2003 to be honest none of them are very good, 3 and 1 look good as a whole but the letters just dont flow but i suck with handstyles so thats really the only advise i can give you but keep the new shit comin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HOVIE Posted November 15, 2003 Share Posted November 15, 2003 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted November 15, 2003 Author Share Posted November 15, 2003 Thanks Kise, I'll have some new shit up by tonight. I got a bunch of fucking work to do. Peace Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
netster Posted November 16, 2003 Share Posted November 16, 2003 yo man, those hands aren't that bad, but they could definitely use some work. Keep in mind that hands are way more important than piecing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KiSe Posted November 16, 2003 Share Posted November 16, 2003 Originally posted by netster yo man, those hands aren't that bad, but they could definitely use some work. Keep in mind that hands are way more important than piecing. uh what do you base that on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayFo Posted November 16, 2003 Share Posted November 16, 2003 riak, with ya hands... let em flow better and just go fast. Since you have a lot seperate lines and jagged edge,s i feel if you try to make handstyles one liners and nice rounded fast letters that all flow nicely togethe rit looks better... but thats jsut me maybe. also to the guy sayin piece arent as important... i guess hes just basin that on fame and gettin ups since hands are more important in that sense Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melty Posted November 16, 2003 Share Posted November 16, 2003 Youve got to let it all go RIAK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted November 16, 2003 Author Share Posted November 16, 2003 Thanks for the advice Jyse, and uh, are you trying to say something Melty? You seem mad by putting up an angry face. I'll post some new stuff in a little while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerry atrick Posted November 16, 2003 Share Posted November 16, 2003 Originally posted by RubbeRBand Geriatric, You are ready, go bomb your city, all in that style like some old dillapidated man. Krest is creepy, ya those other ones are creepy too. :confused: creepy? what do you mean. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted November 16, 2003 Author Share Posted November 16, 2003 http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000229.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted November 16, 2003 Author Share Posted November 16, 2003 http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000230.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted November 17, 2003 Share Posted November 17, 2003 im starting to like your stuff riak, keep that mess up, homie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rize415 Posted November 17, 2003 Share Posted November 17, 2003 http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00366163f00000229.jpg'> dope...just work out that hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted November 17, 2003 Share Posted November 17, 2003 Yea RIAK's letter structures are ill. Im no hand xpert but i think they should b worked on more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
netster Posted November 17, 2003 Share Posted November 17, 2003 Originally posted by KiSe uh what do you base that on? I just think that having a tight hand is more important than anything else. If you can piece it's cool, personally I'm not that good at it. But if you have tight hands and you can piece, then that's awesome. Basically I'm saying I respect dudes with tight hands more than other heads. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAID<LSA>216 Posted November 17, 2003 Share Posted November 17, 2003 my opinion..... Hands styles (tags) are important because it's the easiest thing to do on the street. As opposed to bombing or peicing which raises your risk and difficulties considerably on main streets. I know dudes with wak hands but they get mad ups. Handstyles that look dope on paper mean nothing untill they are seen by the public. I guess what I'm trying to say is: "Graffiti is not graffiti unless it's illegal and forced to be seen by the public. Good or wak hands apply." A good example is 'neckface' or 'ufo'. Ups outweigh style as far as I'm concerned. And style plus ups is truely where it's at. But I can also understand a writer who wants to develope a style before he raks his ups. Do your thing but getting up is graff.............. above all else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted November 17, 2003 Share Posted November 17, 2003 shit i have the worst hand, i guess my throw isnt terrible, but my bomb also sucks balls, im just workin on pieces, so whatever, im not writing epitaths or literature at my pieces or ntohing so i dont really care Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geezpot Posted November 18, 2003 Share Posted November 18, 2003 Well here's some new stuff and some old stuff revised. Caution some are straight sketches so don't be too brutal on me....... http://hundredproof.com/assets/geezpot/420.jpg'> http://hundredproof.com/assets/geezpot/anona.jpg'> http://hundredproof.com/assets/geezpot/blackbook4.jpg'> http://hundredproof.com/assets/geezpot/whereisit.jpg'> http://hundredproof.com/assets/geezpot/weedfairy2.jpg'> http://hundredproof.com/assets/geezpot/blackbook5.jpg'> http://hundredproof.com/assets/geezpot/da-vinci.jpg'> http://hundredproof.com/assets/geezpot/geez-flipping-the-bird.jpg'> http://hundredproof.com/assets/geezpot/old-westside.jpg'> GEEZ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overtime Posted November 18, 2003 Share Posted November 18, 2003 shits ill geez Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melty Posted November 18, 2003 Share Posted November 18, 2003 Originally posted by onesecondple shits ill geez Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted November 18, 2003 Share Posted November 18, 2003 Woo those are all ill:eek: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAID<LSA>216 Posted November 18, 2003 Share Posted November 18, 2003 Great stuff! Slick ass characters too! The can stack and dragon fly peice is the shizzle!! And that rattler! Great concepts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
klue Posted November 18, 2003 Share Posted November 18, 2003 hell yes.. very. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RubbeRBand Posted November 19, 2003 Share Posted November 19, 2003 mmm baby, conceptualL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate2*88 Posted November 22, 2003 Author Share Posted November 22, 2003 Ohno People I am going to delete this thread in order to start off a new one. It will contain my work along with whoever the fuck wants to post in order to improve their shit. It's been a little while, and alot of bullshit threads have gone up with bullshit sketches. :( :mad: Dope sketches as always Geezspot, can you repost in the new thread? I will start this new thread and delete this one sometime in the week after Thanksgiving week. I am waiting to scan new stlyes and sketches, and I will be going to Atlanta for Thanksgiving. This is just a heads up. Peace everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KiSe Posted November 22, 2003 Share Posted November 22, 2003 why you gunna delete this thread man? dont do it, look at all the work youve done throughout this thread, and how much you have improved. It's like a time capsule be proud of this thread man keep it goin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HOVIE Posted November 22, 2003 Share Posted November 22, 2003 dont delete it........its good to see the improvment.....its a good thread......stick to this one man......do it for the fans:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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