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these dont compare to anythin else in here but im gettin blanked in the toys thread and they are outlines so can somone please give me some feedback on these please......the last one is a throwie by the way

 

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Originally posted by ~-5°²-~

hey hovie, that stuff isnt too bad, i like the top style on the third pic. mess around with 3-d's and just try different stuff, practice is the best teacher.

 

ok thanks man.......i have a lot of trouble with wildstyle and arrows and stuff:(

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I like the bottom one. The top one is good but look at your letters. Some of your letters are "curvy" while the others (just the V and the I) are straight. I think you should make your letters match the V and the I because personally, I like how they look. =)

 

 

 

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That arrow doesn't belong there. I hate that character. Heh. Fuck life? :(

 

 

 

PEACE!

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WAIT A MINUTE!!!!

 

I guess I lied in my previous post. That bottom piece needs the same advice I stated before. Again, all your letters should match. The "O" is definelty out of place because it looks like a "throw up" type of style. It's TOO curvy. And that bottom right leg of the "H" has to go. Ummm... You should make the "V" a little longer. And the "E"... Christ... I didn't even notice it before. Heh. I thought it was an "N". Yeah, change that "E" and take out that extension on it. I think it's a squiggly arrow.

 

 

I think you should stick with the top piece. I like it, it just needs a few minor adjustments.

 

 

 

Keep sketching, I'll do the same.

PEACE!

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Originally posted by DrSeusLives

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WAIT A MINUTE!!!!

 

I guess I lied in my previous post. That bottom piece needs the same advice I stated before. Again, all your letters should match. The "O" is definelty out of place because it looks like a "throw up" type of style. It's TOO curvy. And that bottom right leg of the "H" has to go. Ummm... You should make the "V" a little longer. And the "E"... Christ... I didn't even notice it before. Heh. I thought it was an "N". Yeah, change that "E" and take out that extension on it. I think it's a squiggly arrow.

 

 

I think you should stick with the top piece. I like it, it just needs a few minor adjustments.

 

 

 

Keep sketching, I'll do the same.

PEACE!

 

yer that thing at the end of the E isnt supposed to be there......i was just fuckin around........they are not best my work.....i will get some more cos i dont have a digital camera but when im at my mates i just do a few quick sketches like them and put them on the computer........thanks anyway

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