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i like em. my first piece is such shit compared to this. i especially like the first one. good job. keep up the writting. peace.

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Originally posted by wyze

i like em. my first piece is such shit compared to this. i especially like the first one. good job. keep up the writting. peace.

 

your just saying that cuz were talkin on aim and you want to be nice:)

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The 3d is in the first one is wacky. The Y is too big for the whole piece. The only thing I like is the coloring.

 

The second piece, get rid of that crown and those blue whatever they are. The fill is the only nice thing I see on the second sketches.

 

But if these are you first pieces, then seriously keep going youre gonna get alot better, then you can come back and post and be like, "BOOM what now toy-ass mu'fuckas, an shit."

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Originally posted by Glik0

The 3d is in the first one is wacky. The Y is too big for the whole piece. The only thing I like is the coloring.

 

The second piece, get rid of that crown and those blue whatever they are. The fill is the only nice thing I see on the second sketches.

 

But if these are you first pieces, then seriously keep going youre gonna get alot better, then you can come back and post and be like, "BOOM what now toy-ass mu'fuckas, an shit."

 

well the coloring is better then the pieces cuz ive been coloring since i was strong enough to pick up a pencil and ive been graffitiing since 2 days ago:)

thank you for the constructive critisizim though:)

 

i tried like a million times to make the y more proportional but i kept screwing it up so i just figured i'd keep it big...and because of that the second a is too big

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im not sayin that to be nice! hehe. next time you are on aim, ill send you some sketches i just scanned. your first pieces are better than shit im doing now, much less my first trash-ass pieces.

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Originally posted by sweetcherry

ive never done any graffiti before and these two are my first pieces...they kinda suck....alot....but thats ok

 

 

 

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Those are not your first two peices ever cry baby.

 

 

 

 

so.....................what are you wearing?

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try to keep your letters the same size. The As on the second one have bad structure. Not exactly sure what you were trying to do with the As on the first one...

 

I like the M on the first one, loose that little thing on the top on the left. Good coloring

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none of you kids are getting in her pants so quit the phony friendly remarks.....ain't no way the first one is the first piece you've ever done, unless you bit the letters....

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Your right about non of "those kids" getting in her pants,but those are her first pieces.

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Cherry,Cherry,Cherry...

 

Originally posted by toad_AAA

WELL AT LEAST I KEPT IT NOUM FREE.................... :lol:

Noum free huh?....Hmm..

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