Dick Quickwood Posted July 29, 2003 Share Posted July 29, 2003 haha someone should modify the horse so it has tease's face Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KING BLING Posted July 29, 2003 Share Posted July 29, 2003 I worte the below in responce to another thread but it seems to work here as well (1) Crap Poetry Thread (2) Crap Poetry Thread (3) A Novel Idea - Haiku thread Re: Love fucking hurts... Though well intended, creative struggle and originality serves to further your healing and the unique expression of your ideas. Avoid words like: soul, heart, forever, love, dead [ or any derivitive there of], pain, dark, light, alone....... They serve to over simplify and make your attempts seem generic/bland to everyone but you. You could retort that it is only for you but than why post it, and even than if it for you why not push your personal limits. Another point is that you might want to almost entirely eliminate anything that is not an image. Given, poems should know few if any limits. However, poems without imagery that can be used as road markers for the uninvolved reader leaves your ideas bland and often completely out of the readers grasp to become involved. Imagery should be your primary focus, don't tell me you're sad, show me... ...poetry class has served me for the first time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr_president Posted July 29, 2003 Author Share Posted July 29, 2003 Originally posted by NOBODY i feel bad for the guy because everything he sais gets quoted and laughed at.i mean sure he sais some pretty dumb shit and whatnot but im begining to notice 12oz is like a fucking highschool.you got your little popular users and all the little guys are all on the dick and wouldnt dare to go against something they say.like look at this thread.teaser wants to publish a poem hes wrote because he thinks its worthy of being published.as usual everybody points the fucking finger and makes their usual rude ass comments.im not saying thats a terrible thing to do but i mean this time the guy is serious about something he wants to accomplish. then seeking comes around and sticks up for him and all of a sudden almost all of the clowning on tease stops.i find that pretty funny in itself.just an observation. alrite tease im gonna give you my honest opinion on this poem you wrote.its a little too simple and you really need to learn how to write poetry a little better.just take your time with this.seriously get a journal and start writing everyday.look up good poems.and look for a good poetry forum.post your poems there and see what they think.i think thats the best thing you could do to improve. the bashing doesnt affect me to much, unless its people who dont know me and keep talking shit about me thats untrue, it just gets annoying ya know. i mean for fucks sake, how many times are the SAME PEOPLE going to say the same stupid shit about me... about the poem man, i just posted it to show the people who didnt see it, no shame in my game. and i wasnt necessarily meaning i wanted it published, i was asking in general about books and poems etc.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest blame Posted July 29, 2003 Share Posted July 29, 2003 Its easy to judge a book by its cover Its very easy to judge people on the internet, its the most inaccurate description of them though. The thing is people feel that sence of anonyminity and theres no confrontation, its just words on a screen so its almost like all sides of there personality come out at once and expressions, tones, and emmotions are hard to perceive simply using "smileys" and exclamation marks that dont really allow you to feel what they are saying. The other thing is that it bothers me that people think you have to live in a ghetto and be poor etc to have real problems. one of my friends from school had parents who were virtually millionaires and i always count my blessings after a 5 minute conversation with him about whats going on in his life. but naturally when people see his upset they are so quick to assume "ahhh poor little rich kid, daddy bought you a 2002 mercedes benz, instead of a 2003 blah blah blah". there are problems in that come along with all aspects of life being poor, average, and rich all come with different sets of tests and diffcuties. these are what help us grow. its easier said than done but for fucks sake dont judge somone as a person by what you know of their posts and post status. *edit, cause mammero is an anal fuck!:spin: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr_president Posted July 29, 2003 Author Share Posted July 29, 2003 Re: Its easy to judge a book by its cover Originally posted by blame Its very easy to judge people on the internet, its the most inaccurate description of them though. The thing is people feel that sence of anonyminity and theres no confrontation, its just words on a screen so its almost like all sides of there personality come out at once and expressions, tones, and emmotions are hard to perceive simply using "smileys" and exclamation marks that dont really allow you to feel what they are saying. The other thing is that it bothers me that people think you have to live in a ghetto and be poor etc to have real problems. one of my friends from school had parents who were virtually millionaires and i always count my blessings after a 5 minute conversation with him about whats going on in his life. but naturally when people see his upset they are so quick to assume "ahhh poor little rich kid, daddy bought you a 2002 mercedes benz, instead of a 2003 blah blah blah". there are problems in that come along with all aspects of life being poor, average, and rick all come with different sets of tests and diffcuties. these are what help us grow. its easier said than done but for fucks sake dont judge somone as a person by what you know of their posts and post status exactly. im not rich by anymeans, but i have been pretty fortunate until recently. my problems arent really financial type bullshit, until recently... but its other shit like friends and people etc... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarzAbove Posted July 29, 2003 Share Posted July 29, 2003 poerty rap same thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fugazi Posted July 29, 2003 Share Posted July 29, 2003 Originally posted by NOBODY i feel bad for the guy because everything he sais gets quoted and laughed at.i mean sure he sais some pretty dumb shit and whatnot but im begining to notice 12oz is like a fucking highschool.you got your little popular users and all the little guys are all on the dick and wouldnt dare to go against something they say.like look at this thread.teaser wants to publish a poem hes wrote because he thinks its worthy of being published.as usual everybody points the fucking finger and makes their usual rude ass comments.im not saying thats a terrible thing to do but i mean this time the guy is serious about something he wants to accomplish. then seeking comes around and sticks up for him and all of a sudden almost all of the clowning on tease stops.i find that pretty funny in itself.just an observation. He says some REALLY stupid shit. Those that just jump on the bandwagon and try and kick him when he's down are of dubious value, but when he says something dumb I don't see the harm in someone calling him on it... wasn't he the one who thought girls could get pregnant by giving a blow job? :confused: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.yuck Posted July 29, 2003 Share Posted July 29, 2003 hahaha!! that will never stop coming up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dick Quickwood Posted July 29, 2003 Share Posted July 29, 2003 http://www.fatcap.co.uk/host/files/9948.jpg'> hahahahahahahaahaha still funny Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GnomeToys Posted July 29, 2003 Share Posted July 29, 2003 Nobody liked my poem? :confused: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GucciCondom Posted July 29, 2003 Share Posted July 29, 2003 goto vpoet.net and u can be gangsta. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest imported_El Mamerro Posted July 29, 2003 Share Posted July 29, 2003 Re: Its easy to judge a book by its cover Originally posted by blame being poor, average, and rick all come with different sets of tests and diffcuties. Agreed. I'm glad I'm not Rick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
!@#$% Posted July 29, 2003 Share Posted July 29, 2003 it amazes me that people aren't more resourceful, even with the internet right there.. advice on how to get published: http://images.amazon.com/images/P/1582971897.01.LZZZZZZZ.jpg'> work on your writing a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 29, 2003 Share Posted July 29, 2003 Originally posted by mr_president its just something i think would be cool to do. i have a lot of goals like that, id like to write a book one day, not sure about what, get a poem published, and even write a screenplay for a movie someday. ok so you want to do these things because their cool. I understand where you're coming from but it usually takes way more than just a passing interest to really create something worth reading. I knew a 'professional' poet who sold tons of books and lived of her writing, but I wouldn't wish her lifestyle on anyone. Pure fucking hell. Poetry is generally not something you want to do but something you feel that you have to do. You follow? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr_president Posted July 29, 2003 Author Share Posted July 29, 2003 Originally posted by Kilo7- ok so you want to do these things because their cool. I understand where you're coming from but it usually takes way more than just a passing interest to really create something worth reading. I knew a 'professional' poet who sold tons of books and lived of her writing, but I wouldn't wish her lifestyle on anyone. Pure fucking hell. Poetry is generally not something you want to do but something you feel that you have to do. You follow? i realise my persona and past on this board doesnt say much about me thats good anyways, but maybe you dont know me well enough to know whether im good at writing or not? do you follow? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GLIK$ Posted July 29, 2003 Share Posted July 29, 2003 Or maybe he did realize you're a wiggerfaced tool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
villain Posted July 29, 2003 Share Posted July 29, 2003 what's all this about artists and writers must suffer in order to be successful. in my opinion it's the opposite. how many successful writers you think come from the tunnels? or a third world nation? or even the ghetto? not many hello! being successful is about having connections assface. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rodney Trotter Posted July 30, 2003 Share Posted July 30, 2003 Damn Seeking, you've made me feel so bad about myself :rolleyes: If kid was say 15 I might understand your point, but he's damn near on 22 years old! HE MUST BE CLOWNED ON. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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