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Heres a few.. needin' pro opinion.

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Yea so heres a few of my recent sketches (my paint game's a whole nother story, stickin to people and oneline throw ups) and my problem is i got no style. Or i feel like i just dont have my own complete alphabet, or a sense of lines, or just a signature style runnin throughout... ho ho ho, well anyway, feedback from the folks pokin around on this site's always welcome. They're in order from newest to oldest.

 

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good colors, good characters and style potential. work on the letter structure.

 

start with straight letters and simples.

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the green head charecter looks great, aeon flux like.

those are kool charecters man.

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Originally posted by MOE

good colors, good characters and style potential. work on the letter structure.

 

start with straight letters and simples.

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haha, i'd post more, but i was caught llllaaast thurs. and arrested for cerfew. Fuckin dumbass Oakland cop searched my pack and found only my blackbook and an empty can of Marsh... gave me a speach how he hates "my kind" and confiscated my book. Fucker slapped me with a court date and had my parents get up at 1 A.M. and take me home. I wouldnt be so fuckin pissed cept that he kept calling in my phone number WRONG, so instead of going home round 11... DAMN.

 

I'll be taking all your feedback to heart and biting every fuckin word of it. :D

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that whole geting busted shit sucks. you shoulda said not to search you... as far as my knowledge goes, they cant search with probable cause or a warrent, right???

 

were you out painting?

 

i dig the sketches, the green face is awesome, i just cant see your letters in the first one.. ??? maybe make it more eligable if you want people to read it, but i think it still looks sick, i also love the color scheme. keep it up

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Originally posted by shor

that whole geting busted shit sucks. you shoulda said not to search you... as far as my knowledge goes, they cant search with probable cause or a warrent, right???

 

To pigs, breaking curfew or even jaywalking is probable cause.

 

the nazi bastards!

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Originally posted by greensleeves

you suck, switch to crayon

 

Hey man thanks for the tip. I actually started to in that big one and the fill turned out great.

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nice sketches man..ignore the people telling you to "do simples" and "straight letters"...you got a nice style..people always try to give advice but,just need to keep their mouths shut.....:rolleyes:

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Likin' them...post more,oh yeah,green sleeves is right,switch to crayon,that will PHUK everyones day up....j/p:lol: but yes,it is frehs,i see alot of potential,and i need to stop typing,peace.

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