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ok, so no more room on my desk that doesnt already have something, or something ugly, on it... so i started going at my monitor, hopefully my dad wont get mad at that, not that its HIS monitor anyways.. jkhasjkhdsakjfhdsf jibberish, here is the flick!

 

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/shor/images/computer.jpg'>

 

the one on the left doesnt say anything, just a bunch of shit but it was fun.. on the right is just like a background i guess.. and the top is hardcore bombers, not that im a hardcore bomber... but it felt like something fun to write..

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happy=fruity...eh kinda..

 

they remind me of candy..

 

..that reminds me of ninja turtles ice cream...

 

...the ice cream man wouldnt stop for me, i was running after him, but he wouldnt stop. he said im too damn old to be chasing after the truck. Now im sad. DAMN YOU SHOR, your damn monitor made me sad!

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cool shit... i like the thing on the left side of the moniter.

 

also that last one, its aright but fuck the eye, it dont fit really, if anythin make the eyebloodshot or somethin if you gonna have the rest be red. But it'd look lots better with a normal O. Also the S I thought was the hottest shit there, cept I think you should let that top overlap the H not the H overlap the S cuz it looks cut off. I guess you could make ya letters fater, but skinny letters are cool too.

 

Whatever, dunno if its the best criticize, but keep at it... peace man...

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thanks a lot jayfo, i apreciate it.. and yeah i agree with the overlapping the H with the S thing... but yeah, the eye doesnt seem to match but i dont know.

 

i like using other shit isntead of just an O.. anyone have suggestions?

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yeah i agree i think they are getting progressively better

color adds alot to a piece

letter style is the most important i think, but sometimes if you have a piece thats isnt that dope and you color it, it can come out really good

but yeah keep practicing and posting youll get better and in my opinion if your going to replace a letter with like a character or an eye in your case you have to have a really dope character or it looks wack i usually tend to stay away from doing that but hey thats just my opinion

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alright, here is some shit ive done the past day or two.. my markers are rapidly running low..

 

these are stickers im sending out..

 

just some ballpoint shit i was doing..

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/shor/images/eye.jpg'>

 

 

i TOTALLY fucked up the R on this one.. omg i feel like wiping my ass with it :o

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/shor/images/shor_arrow.jpg'>

 

 

ehh, not my best but here this is..

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/shor/images/shor_broke_it.jpg'>

 

i kinda like this one... nice and clean.. cant see the details (i added dark green on the inside by the outline, and darker red on the O for a bevel look) http://www.angelfire.com/art2/shor/images/shor_star.jpg'>

 

 

this one was impossible to flick... it goes from red to maroon-ish and then purple line thingers in the maroon... doesnt look to bad, to me.

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/shor/images/shor_top_to_bottom.jpg'>

 

 

thats it for now, im not sure when im getting new markers but im sure i can get away with a few more sketches, maybe ill start posing some outlines..

 

CRITIQUE AWAY!!!

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