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two sketches i did a while ago. they suck, but im workin at it

 

what do you think? what sucks, what needs to be worked on?

please dont comment just to say its crap

 

thanks

 

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:nope:

 

your getting ahead of yourself, try to keep it simple for a while

i know it sounds dumb and ever starter i know always says that he wants to do his own thing and do wild style,but trust me, stick to the basics until u get those down, try and post some too...

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Alright.

 

First thing: Stop where you're at, stop all together. You can't read a thing, or tell what letter is what. Don't jump in the deep end if you can't swim. Dump your style. Start all over.

 

Second thing: Work on Simple letters, Bar letters, or letters off your handstyle. But, if you feel your handstyle sucks, don't. The description to bar letters are on the Third Rail I think. For simple letters, just print out some Times New Roman font and work to mastery. Master the structure of the letters. I compliment you on working on something easy to begin with. Stick to the word BLUE for a while working with bars and Times.

 

Third Thing: Don't even think about adding extensions such as arrows or anything until you've mastered your simple letters.

 

Fourth thing: You don't need to worry about coloring where you're at right now.

 

Remember, you can't get up if you can't read what you're writing. I hope this helped you out any.

 

Peace,

-Solar Oner

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thanks alot SC, Solar, and Got! i'll work on that stuff (and completely start over :D )

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I thought that was like japanese at first.. yeah do what DC. Got and Solar say. they know what they are doing.

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Hah!

 

Originally posted by mr.VIRS

got one you should be "the all toy mentor" i m serious

 

Only when I got the time bro. Mostly when I'm buzzed and waiting on 'this or 'that.

I actually enjoy giving pointers and tips as opposed to clownin' new rookies.

 

We were all toy at first. Never forget where you come from.:idea:

peace!

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word on that got tell me one thing do you have time to hit my book with even somthing simple or just send me that virs sketch taht you did to israel in an anvelope?

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Originally posted by DopeConn

:nope:

 

your getting ahead of yourself, try to keep it simple for a while

 

^^^

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Originally posted by Vent2

thanks alot SC, Solar, and Got! i'll work on that stuff ( and completely start over :D )

 

Good. do like 10 outlines a day. You'll improve fast.

Thanks for not being an ignorant toy :)

Work up and post up.

Peace.

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Originally posted by Solar ONE

Good. do like 10 outlines a day. You'll improve fast.

Thanks for not being an ignorant toy :)

Work up and post up.

Peace.

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