adroit Posted June 15, 2003 Share Posted June 15, 2003 wuts goin down...just wanted to introduce myself to these forums i just found....this is a coloabo piece me and my homie did--- 'story of two worlds' ---his is the right side...'half-2' mines the left...kind of a new style i tried aside from the popular wild tag style...i'll post up more later this week....late http://osk@phatmethod.com/andres/storyof2worlds.jpg'> other---by yurs truly http://osk@phatmethod.com/andres/wallpeec.jpg'> http://osk@phatmethod.com/andres/adroit.jpg'> IM NEW TO CANS BY THE WAY!! =[ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trickone Posted June 15, 2003 Share Posted June 15, 2003 i like the book the characters are cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grimace Posted June 15, 2003 Share Posted June 15, 2003 What up adroit this is moral.koa also from 303. Peace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mogilny Posted June 15, 2003 Share Posted June 15, 2003 not bad............ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fizm Posted June 15, 2003 Share Posted June 15, 2003 i'm feeling the characters, but not really the letterform... needs to be more cohesive and flowing, give it some motion... i'm going to stop before i start sounding like bruce lee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BiLL baBbage Posted June 15, 2003 Share Posted June 15, 2003 only thing thats somewhat good is the coloring on the book piece in the background.....other then that...wack...... you're trying to hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TerraRyzeR Posted June 15, 2003 Share Posted June 15, 2003 The 1st pic is hott the rest r ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HECZONER Posted June 15, 2003 Share Posted June 15, 2003 DOPE BACKGROUND... LETTERS... AIGHT.. :D BUT WELCOME AND PLEASE KEEP POSTIN!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melty Posted June 15, 2003 Share Posted June 15, 2003 Shit is cool man keep em coming! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Fire Inside Posted June 15, 2003 Share Posted June 15, 2003 stop lying to the kid.. first sketch, background is alright. characters are decent at best and letters are horrible. the rest of what you posted is horrible as well. i am not saying that to be mean, it's the truth. learn basic letters first, then try this....stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destroya Posted June 15, 2003 Share Posted June 15, 2003 you've got a damn good background, decent characters, and i like your style. unique, to say the least. welcome to 12oz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bruno Posted June 15, 2003 Share Posted June 15, 2003 WHOA!! what's up can control? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOUM Posted June 15, 2003 Share Posted June 15, 2003 crazy http://www.touart.com/wooz/PA280535.JPG'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dork Posted June 15, 2003 Share Posted June 15, 2003 Originally posted by destroya welcome to 12oz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adroit Posted June 16, 2003 Author Share Posted June 16, 2003 good feedback...thanx fellow writers...i definately can respect the fact that i need to learn the basic letters a bit more or alot more...so i'll post up some of my more basic styles i just recently did...i grow more each day and this is definately helpin ---ETHIK---have you done any wall pieces around town with the word KOA?? cuz if you did i mighta seen one today...i dunno the wall one is like my first paint...so yea..can control IS horrible ...i'll post hopefully in a few days...thanx ya'll Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adroit Posted June 16, 2003 Author Share Posted June 16, 2003 umm...found another way to scan some stuff,,,sorry for the white line across the first one...sumptins wrong with the scanner ....anyway...the first one is the most recent...trying to be more simplistic ...even though my colors kinda suck...well ..it's the only way to learn so lay em on me.... http://phatmethod.com/andres/brownad.jpg'> older-ish one http://phatmethod.com/andres/coolad.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OsCaR306 Posted June 16, 2003 Share Posted June 16, 2003 your a good colourer. your letters have no structure though. a little suggestion would be to stop colouring your blackbook pieces and just do outline after outline, simple styles, eventually you will become confident enough and make it more elaborate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scrabble Posted June 16, 2003 Share Posted June 16, 2003 On the first one, the background is very impressive. I wish i could say more for the letters, they dont flow. Like Babbage said, it looks like you are trying too hard. the letters on the vomit colored one looks better though, that shows that you know what letters look like . The D on the brown one is really hurting though...Nice colors i cant find a smiley for the face im making now,-->:twitch: ...this ones dope though,its pretty close too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adroit Posted June 16, 2003 Author Share Posted June 16, 2003 ok--here's about as simple as i can get...damn any simpler and i'd be dead... never done this before and it feels kinda good to see it simple n clean because it looks like the best one ive done:eek: ...i guess i shoulda started there eh?... i tried a new word....TRUTH http://osk@phatmethod.com/andres/truthtag.jpg'> TOOK OSCAR AND SCRABBLES ADVICE.... except i HAD to color it...i cant leave something as an outline Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eseLokE1uno Posted June 16, 2003 Share Posted June 16, 2003 SIMPLE try not having the letters overlap and get rid of the extra shit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OsCaR306 Posted June 17, 2003 Share Posted June 17, 2003 yah like get rid of the stuff on the bottom right of the t's and the h. the arrow on the u seems out of place.and ya dont overlap as much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imported_splint2 Posted June 17, 2003 Share Posted June 17, 2003 that doesnt look like a simple to me...straight letters? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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