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adroit

the name's adroit

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wuts goin down...just wanted to introduce myself to these forums i just

found....this is a coloabo piece me and my homie did---

'story of two worlds' ---his is the right side...'half-2'

mines the left...kind of a new style i tried aside from the popular

wild tag style...i'll post up more later this week....late

http://osk@phatmethod.com/andres/storyof2worlds.jpg'>

 

 

other---by yurs truly

http://osk@phatmethod.com/andres/wallpeec.jpg'>

 

http://osk@phatmethod.com/andres/adroit.jpg'>

 

IM NEW TO CANS BY THE WAY!! =[

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i'm feeling the characters, but not really the letterform... needs to be more cohesive and flowing, give it some motion... i'm going to stop before i start sounding like bruce lee

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stop lying to the kid..

first sketch, background is alright. characters are decent at best and letters are horrible.

the rest of what you posted is horrible as well.

 

i am not saying that to be mean, it's the truth.

learn basic letters first, then try this....stuff.

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you've got a damn good background, decent characters, and i like your style. unique, to say the least.

 

welcome to 12oz.

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good feedback...thanx fellow writers...i definately can

respect the fact that i need to learn the basic letters a bit more

or alot more...so i'll post up some of my more basic styles

i just recently did...i grow more each day and this is definately helpin

---ETHIK---have you done any wall pieces around town with the

word KOA?? cuz if you did i mighta seen one today...i dunno

 

the wall one is like my first paint...so yea..can control IS horrible

...i'll post hopefully in a few days...thanx ya'll

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umm...found another way to scan some stuff,,,sorry for the white line across the first one...sumptins wrong with the scanner

....anyway...the first one is the most recent...trying to be more simplistic

...even though my colors kinda suck...well ..it's the only way to learn so

lay em on me....

http://phatmethod.com/andres/brownad.jpg'>

older-ish one

http://phatmethod.com/andres/coolad.jpg'>

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your a good colourer. your letters have no structure though. a little suggestion would be to stop colouring your blackbook pieces and just do outline after outline, simple styles, eventually you will become confident enough and make it more elaborate.

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On the first one, the background is very impressive. I wish i could say more for the letters, they dont flow. Like Babbage said, it looks like you are trying too hard.

 

the letters on the vomit colored one looks better though, that shows that you know what letters look like . The D on the brown one is really hurting though...Nice colors

i cant find a smiley for the face im making now,-->:twitch: ...this ones dope though,its pretty close too

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ok--here's about as simple as i can get...damn any simpler and i'd be dead...

never done this before and it feels kinda good to see it simple n clean

because it looks like the best one ive done:eek: ...i guess

i shoulda started there eh?...

i tried a new word....TRUTH

http://osk@phatmethod.com/andres/truthtag.jpg'>

 

TOOK OSCAR AND SCRABBLES ADVICE....

except i HAD to color it...i cant leave something as an outline

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yah like get rid of the stuff on the bottom right of the t's and the h. the arrow on the u seems out of place.and ya dont overlap as much.

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