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ONE WORD!

 

SIMPLES..

 

 

 

 

WORK ON THOSE FIRST, TRUST ME YOU CANT GET FROM THE LOBBY TO THE 3RD FLOOR WITH OUT USING THE 1ST AND 2ND FLOOR STAIRS!! AND THATS NOT A WILDSTYLE...NO BEEF JUS' VEGGIE!!!

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NO i like the background

keep tryin and make sur u follow thru with ur lines it looks like every time u make a curve u stop and 4get wut ur doin and fukk it ^

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Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please.... PLEASE... work on simples before moving on. Your control and flow is not ready for Wildstyles, which the piece posted above is not. This is not me dissing you. More like me asking you nicely to think of your well being and sanity before posting another attempt at Wildstyles. Please work on the flow and ebb of your letters with simples, first. Get those down to a science. To where you have them so locked down and slick that you don't even have to think about it. So guys like Spek and Mber would look at it and say 'Ghat Damn! That's a perfect simple!'... you see what I'm trying to say?

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Marz,

 

There is good advice in here. If you dont have a firm grasp on your simple letter structure, youre going to lose everything when you try to do any advanced stuff. Try to blow everybody away with some clean, simple letters.

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i hate it when they told me to work on simples i was like fuck u lol.. but sadley there right ... cause ur "M" and "A" look good but the rest ... uhmm wha is goin on lol.... i hate the word simple now though... but i bust simples all day....

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Originally posted by Joker

Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please.... PLEASE... work on simples before moving on. Your control and flow is not ready for Wildstyles, which the piece posted above is not. This is not me dissing you. More like me asking you nicely to think of your well being and sanity before posting another attempt at Wildstyles. Please work on the flow and ebb of your letters with simples, first. Get those down to a science. To where you have them so locked down and slick that you don't even have to think about it. So guys like Spek and Mber would look at it and say 'Ghat Damn! That's a perfect simple!'... you see what I'm trying to say?

 

just do what the man says!..

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The only letter that looks bad is the R.

On the others you are on the right track

you just need to outline a little thicker and

and little more decisively. Your lines should

go in a definite direction...not maybe this way

maybe that way. My guess is you are probably

better than most of the cats on here who are

telling you to stick to simples...I'd say what you

are working on is not beyond your grasp so keep

working it.

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Originally posted by MarzOne

sorry for opwning a new thread but i lost the others.. my boy ruse one has been teaching me the basics of wildstyle.. ive just been runnign with it and here is the end product..

 

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/graffiti/Marz_-_this_ish_cant_be_stoppe.jpg'>

 

this aint a bite so dont even ecuse me.. i learnt my lesson from last time.. and i aint gonna bite ever again... this style is pretty played out but i just wanna no if i am on the right tracks

 

Ok I wont accuse you...But who is this Ruse cat....His style is vaugly familiar to someone I know...hmmmmm:confused:

 

<img src=http://hyperphoto.photoloft.com/view/exportImage.asp?s=cano&i=10215991&w=600&h=458>

 

By the way notice how the pulls off of "your" arrows go to nowhere? To properly execute you must first understand..

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SARIFS....

 

YOU FUCKIN BEAT ME TO IT, JUS DIDNT KNOW WHERE TO FIND IT!!

 

BUT LETS HEAR WHAT HE SAID, SOMETHING ABOUT LEARNING THE FIRST TIME.....OR SOMETHING....

 

this aint a bite so dont even ecuse me.. i learnt my lesson from last time.. and i aint gonna bite ever again... this style is pretty played out but i just wanna no if i am on the right tracks

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Bad form...

 

That M in your piece is 90%, line for line taken from the Z in that Zesto piece. I should just close this thread but in all honesty... you desreve what is coming your way. I'd take your friend Ruse to the cleaners.

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if you people deny you've ever, ever bitten anything you're full of shit. how do you get a sense of style if you don't bite? i mean when you're still a toy. it's all part of the process, you admire writers whose style you like, you copy it, copy copy copy, and eventually you say "okay, that's what they did with that letter, here's what i'm gonna do with it." i mean, this shit doesn't just drop right out of the sky. everyone has to come out of something or other, to have a strong foundation.

 

just pick up a copy of subway art and study it. i've been writing for like 6 years and i still check that book out. anyways, just my 2 cents.

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HE'S BITTEN BEFORE!!! IF HE'D ADMIT IT THEN I GUESS IT BE COOL BUT HE DONT...

 

AND HE MAKES AN OPENING STATEMENT LIKE THE ONE I QUOTED EARLIER!! C'MON......WHEN I FIRST STARTED THE WRITER THAT TOLD ME WHAT GRAFF WAS ABOUT THE FIRST THING HE SAID RULE#1 YOU NEVER TAKE SOMEONE ELSE'S LETTER.

http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00235772f00000087.jpg'>

 

http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00235772f00000088.jpg'>

HERE, I WAS TRYING TO DEVELOP LETTERS BEFORE I EVEN HAD A NAME! MY LETTERS. NO ONE ELSE'S!!

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^your right^

 

You have a strong point there but when you come on here claiming to not ever bite again.. blah blah blah, then get caught red handed again, then you get what's comming to you. If that sketch was posted without the running of the mouth, I would of let it go, but with the false claims goin on I felt the "card pulling" was necessary in this case... when I was a young kid I use to bite the fuck out of whatever graf was available at the time, but I didnt go around posting it on the internet, or I wouldnt have if it existed at the time... haha There aint no shame in learning just keep it on the DL, no need to come on here makin up stories and stuff.

 

War,

 

Sarifs&Clips

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MARZONE?

 

Just drop the name at least...MARS ONE wrecks shit! And, yeah even if you do bite, dont steal it from the internet then post it on the internet. Ya dug your own ditch kid.

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Re: ^your right^

 

Originally posted by sarifs&clips

You have a strong point there but when you come on here claiming to not ever bite again.. blah blah blah, then get caught red handed again, then you get what's comming to you. If that sketch was posted without the running of the mouth, I would of let it go, but with the false claims goin on I felt the "card pulling" was necessary in this case... when I was a young kid I use to bite the fuck out of whatever graf was available at the time, but I didnt go around posting it on the internet, or I wouldnt have if it existed at the time... haha There aint no shame in learning just keep it on the DL, no need to come on here makin up stories and stuff.

 

War,

 

Sarifs&Clips

 

 

ight im sorry.. i realise... im still just a rookie in this game.. the only times ive biten ever are the pieces i posted on here... im still tryin to find a style.. that i like.. and im really feeling ures... so i took the bits i liked and tried to add my won twist..but i failed..

 

sorry to u and mennace

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Biting tutorial

 

I will probably catch some hell for this but Im not too worried about it.

 

Marz,

 

If you have to look at other peoples stuff to get inspiration or whatever it needs to be defined as, do this:

 

Turn the piece(s) upside down and try to look for ways to make your letters out of them. That will still be biting but it wont be an exact replica of somebody else's letters, and at the same time it will force you to start to really understand what it takes to make an 'M' or an 'A'. You'll find letter structures that you like, shapes and flow that you like to use. Then after a while you'll come up with your own and wont need to look at other people's stuff all the time.

 

But dont let anybody say they dont bite. There are people in here who are as original as can be, but I know that I still see stuff now and then that just blows me away and inspires me to re-think letter structure, but I try to look at the concept behind it, not the actual letter or piece itself.

 

So use that like so, instead of biting a piece, look at it and try to think of a way to do it better. If you cant, then work up to it until you can.

 

If nobody likes my post, battle me. Just kiddin I'll lose.

 

Keep workin Marz

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NOW I KNOW WHY I DON'T COME TO 12OZ. ANYMORE!!!

 

GOOD ADVICE CiSTE, BUT MARZ IS JUST A BITER...

 

AND WHATS WITH THE (ONE)??? SINCE YOU BITE, YOU SHOULD ATLEAST BE A (TWO).

 

I'M NOT GOING TO WASTE MY TIME ON YOU CUZ THE ONLY HELP YOU NEED IS QUITING!!!

 

OTHER THAN THAT, GO EAT AN APPLE...

 

BITER*

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that was sad. nothing was original. nothing at all. not even the name or that stupid red background. why do people like him even try to write? i dont want to be a dick but that was just beyond stupid.

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and 2 answer ur ? maeker ppl like hi tag b cuz they want ppl 2 think they have a skill

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