Posted April 4, 200322 yr http://www.seemesmile.com/photos4/2816802a.jpg'> first time painting, its a good spot. hopefully itll come out good, ill post flix when i do.
April 4, 200322 yr some tips 1. F looks like C 2. Change U? 3. K used to much in too many places 4. B is fine 5. N looks weird. make top more round good luck
April 4, 200322 yr Author if the pic doesnt work go to: http://www.artconspiracy.com/conspiracy_ey...0&id=2144106243
April 4, 200322 yr Pretty good Do Like a 100 of those throws in a row then post the 101st. You will like it. Oh yeah do them as fast as you can. Oh yeah dont listen to me if you dont want to.
April 4, 200322 yr B IS OK.. F.. dont look like an F.. U is ok but is kinda toyish.. leave more space for the N too show i did the k.. work on the hand... and if you paint this dont use more then 2 colors.. like somthing with a white fill perhaps or it will look cheap.. and wal mart paint sucks!!! pitch the extra buck or 2 for good stuff... and use a fat cap if you can...:D
April 4, 200322 yr ok dude, just do it SHIT LOADS ON PAPER untill you see an improvement, then you will know when it's time to go paint it.
April 4, 200322 yr that background made me laugh... yo come up with a 1liner throwie... and try to use the same B and U and K cause there all sick... F and the N can go ssome were else ...
April 4, 200322 yr your all a bunch of bitches excluding the thread starter and Teehee... let the kid paint it and learn..graffiti taste is very subjective and if you fucking pack of half ass critics ram your opinions of stlye down his throat he might never develop the freshest style you ever seen... let the kid do what he wants, paint and learn ya vultures..
April 4, 200322 yr bfunk.. post your improvements.. i wanna see if you took any if at all of our advice?
April 4, 200322 yr itd probably look alot better if... i could actually see it. but this computer is useless. but i agree with joe, development is progression in ones mind and attitude so yeah, theres my shiny two pennies.
April 5, 200322 yr Originally posted by TerraRyzeR That shouldnt not b on the wall none of your stuff should be on paper or a wall
April 5, 200322 yr if you like paint it, who gives a fuck what anyone thinks, if not, make YOUR OWN changes to it...
April 5, 200322 yr why you hatin on bfunk for, give the new kid some slack, at least he wants to get up, how many people on this board dont paint, i say paint it, paint it in more than one place, do it as big as possible,do what you feel is best, but the "f" definetly looks like a "c" and the "n" should be out more, but hey if thats what your feelin, more power to ya, dont let no one bring you down
April 5, 200322 yr Author http://www.seemesmile.com/photos4/2821710a.jpg'> another approach sketch, the other U i use, and different f. the N, just experimenting i guess.
April 5, 200322 yr ouch... That k most def needs a doctor. And why don't you continue the letters down? Finish that up, it's not like you're painting a freight. Or are you? In any case for the sketch you should make it whole
April 5, 200322 yr put some bottom on those letters. and i think i disagree with 90% of the shit in this thread. unlike others i dont like that B at all, reminds me of the mountains on supermario. best advice i can give you is find a throwup you like and bite the shit out of it until you get a better understanding of what makes it work. then like someone else said, do that shit 10 million times on paper, before long you wont beable to see where it origianlly came from and it will be yours.
April 5, 200322 yr Originally posted by Nomaq that background made me laugh... yo come up with a 1liner throwie... and try to use the same B and U and K cause there all sick... F and the N can go ssome were else ... if he's gonna paint he doesn't need to one-line it..it's jus the f thats messed up..looks more like a c
April 6, 200322 yr some tips 1. F looks like C 2. Change U? 3. K used to much in too many places 4. B is fine 5. N looks weird. make top more round scratch that, don't paint, keep practicing in your book not in the forum
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