Guest Plaid Fill-ins Posted July 26, 2010 Share Posted July 26, 2010 Yeah star from scratch bro, and focus on the word 'neat' its really the best throws that look nice and clean. Also, anyone have any words for the last throw i posted? Im still workin at it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
semorbutts Posted July 26, 2010 Share Posted July 26, 2010 dont waste your time with this orlando 'thugwannabe' - hes a waste of time and a waste of paint TSK is the worst crew in Florida Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Plaid Fill-ins Posted July 26, 2010 Share Posted July 26, 2010 can someone tell me if you think my throw is whack or not? I dont really know if I wanna keep tweaking it to somethin better... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted July 27, 2010 Share Posted July 27, 2010 ^i dig it man, it needs ti be balanced some, but for the size of the board its on, etc, its pretty clean. i dig those simpler, clean styles... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted July 27, 2010 Share Posted July 27, 2010 i like it, maybe make the bottom of the i a little bigger Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Plaid Fill-ins Posted July 28, 2010 Share Posted July 28, 2010 yeah thanks, the boards too small to really get loose on. Here's on a jewel case in front of the comp. screen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IdoNOTcommitCRIMES Posted July 28, 2010 Share Posted July 28, 2010 Okay, I went back to the drawing board, made my letters match up in style, size, and spacing. I find it visually appealing. Crits/suggestions on what I should Use to fill my letters with? I have a fill symbol on every letter, and 2 on B. I dont want dots, Wont use assholes (stars) and the line just gets bland looking. I don't want crits on style, I like my letters and style, they flow on the top minus the D, but I really like the character of the D, but what about bottoms? Is it super important my bottoms match? should I match up the D and B's bottoms? Edit: when I paint this I fade out the bottoms so its usually not an issue. The fade goes with the word, it just makes it look like its fading off or peeling off the wall. Edit2: I could switch up the D to match, I could make it very close to symmetrical with the B, is it really necessary? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted July 28, 2010 Share Posted July 28, 2010 thats not starting from scratch, man, thats the same throw with different tops.... your throw is pretty much a recycled style, which can look ok or whatever, but you havent really been writing/drawing long enough to pull it off.. the pointy top on the d is wtf, and the b kinda looks like an o, theres not enough definition in it. your r is ok i guess but common, and the extention on the a is wtf, as well as how you are doin the top curve... ...also, who cares what you fill the dead space with (although id avoid the rain drop thing in the d)... ..pretty much id start from scratch like people said the 1st time...(move sketches to toy thread) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IdoNOTcommitCRIMES Posted July 28, 2010 Share Posted July 28, 2010 Well I really like the style, I admit it is recycled, but I did not (deliberately at least) steal my letters. To address your issues: I could make the D more bulgy with less of a pointy top and more like the other letters What can I change about the B to be less like an O? Make the curves pointier? The extension on the A I just like to play with. I usually write it straight with the top of the letter. What is wrong with the top curve? Yeah the rain drop doesn't do the D justice. I don't mind the other letters' fills. What do you recommend for the D I would appreciate if you (ANYONE WITH CRITS) would open up the top picture in MSPAINT and fill in the blanks as suggestions. I have filled in my own blanks, edit my pictures to show me how I could improve please. Is this D better? Is it really more visually pleasing if all the letters look nearly exactly the same? I drew it with those stupid loops and hated it after I finished. Ignore those. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted July 28, 2010 Share Posted July 28, 2010 move to toy thread with this, i will post a paint thing or whatever, but this is just taking unnecessary space in this thread with talk, not throwups, ..ill post the the paint thing in there, and any crits or whatever... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungryest Hippo Posted July 29, 2010 Share Posted July 29, 2010 y didnt u just add that loop to the back of the D?? thats wat this dudes tryin to tell u wit makin it flow and consistent... my opinion Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mistah914 Posted July 29, 2010 Share Posted July 29, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
setokeno Posted July 29, 2010 Share Posted July 29, 2010 that down A 3d looks too long but dope shit!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mistah914 Posted July 29, 2010 Share Posted July 29, 2010 yea agreed thanks man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thanks for nothing Posted July 30, 2010 Share Posted July 30, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted July 30, 2010 Share Posted July 30, 2010 your throwies pretty offical vims. Dont be so self conscious. Its dope. Feelin that sare joint at tha top too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzed...uk Posted July 30, 2010 Share Posted July 30, 2010 drag Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThaOnlyG Posted July 30, 2010 Share Posted July 30, 2010 some huff ass shit in here Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SNOe.One Posted July 30, 2010 Share Posted July 30, 2010 Some Quick Shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzed...uk Posted July 30, 2010 Share Posted July 30, 2010 nice throwies snoe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Plaid Fill-ins Posted July 31, 2010 Share Posted July 31, 2010 your throwies pretty offical vims. Dont be so self conscious. Its dope. Feelin that sare joint at tha top too. Thanks man. I do like it after a lot of other variations and shit I tried out, I think I just need to get the proportions on the letters right and I'll start to get up with it.. I appreciate the feed back. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted August 1, 2010 Share Posted August 1, 2010 no problem. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted August 5, 2010 Share Posted August 5, 2010 this threads slowly ending. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venus67 Posted August 6, 2010 Share Posted August 6, 2010 prea the space cadet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Plaid Fill-ins Posted August 7, 2010 Share Posted August 7, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted August 7, 2010 Share Posted August 7, 2010 prea your on to sumpthin you just need 2 tweak tha formation a little more n make it cleaner, n bump tha vims^^. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thanks for nothing Posted August 7, 2010 Share Posted August 7, 2010 Bumb Vims Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted August 8, 2010 Share Posted August 8, 2010 knock em out rick... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eyesick Posted August 8, 2010 Share Posted August 8, 2010 Someone do a RINSE! those letters are funn! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMoney718x Posted August 8, 2010 Share Posted August 8, 2010 alright i already posted this in the toy thread but no one gave me any crits so.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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