Guest 455 Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 CHECK 1,2(edited title) My trooper called me tonight and asked me to start another one of these,so I said..."sure".......feel free to contribute......thanks.have a good one everyone. I'm not sure how to start this I'm stuck in a world of 12prophets it may not be illest shit you ever read but don't attempt to knock it I'm just doing my own thing while cats grab the apparatus and bring static like cling trust me I know When to call it quits if I run out of words to flip but that won't happen not an internet gangster so I don't write in CAPS man for Innosence I'm Seeking believing in myself can't seem to maintain a job so I'm broke,unemployed and have no wealth to my name but at least I have a little fame through writing I remember when Taper said I ws biting J5 nah,bro....455 will keep it live like newborns you were warned without the pre understand I want to work yo,ICEBERG.....it's my bad if I hurt ya through the words I typed earlier today didn't mean to touch a nerve but that kid got what he deserved and it's just my opinion 28 years old in my dominion and I know life ain't easy I got dirt on my personal window and unfortunely it won't come clean with squeegy with water mixed soap included give love to all the heads on here that eluded the cops for years the wastiods such as myself who got twisted drinking beers and whatever else my aim was uplift with a gift minus the tip pen yet make my presence felt I continue to "adverbs" and vowels shout out to Willy,Pistol and the rest of the Nightowls situations get fouled out over the lines I created in this strange game I've been blessed yet still bug out like insects and remain fly can't burn out A Fire Inside I give love to all people into different musical tastes a hip-hop junkie that still listens to AFI and always contribute a reply to the TOP FIVE.. I'm pretty fucked up right now so with that I say "GOODBYE" and goodnight 'owls. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest sneak Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 01 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GI Jew Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 Ayo I know you Sneak but maybe it's under a different name these kids on here lately are getting to be pretty lame I don't know what it is maybe if they're pissed they need to click their files and clear that buddy list This Dallas style which I've got is next to none I still spit better than you toy's with tossin salad smiles so it's still fun, this is the part where I'd knock your mom, that'd be cool, she was a nun until I met here in high school, don't get mad I wasn't tryin to diss, son I'm your dad and sometimes I really miss you though it doesn't make me cry or get pissed and write rhymes I still think about it how your mom was so tight from time to time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ZoSe Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 a yo deihomokthx retire now you runnin on empty tanks your shits gettin old better bail out for you get sold you aint no eminem dont know what you been told your styles shit, tryin to be a tough guy, quit you think you runnin this show maybe its just that yous a little slow you aint nuthin, got nuthin funny guy ha i think not now go ahead take ya shot punk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GI Jew Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 Ayo, you guys know this nigga Zose, I saw him the other day he's runnin with some fat hoes that's funny though cause I thought he said he was gay that means you like gettin served and if you're a dude he'll give you a jerk and you don't gotta pay I didn't want to say that shit but you said I was eminem I think that white dude sucks as bad as you Guy's would get served by lil' kim and man I know that shit's sad but you gotta face the truth don't come steppin to someone that's known to crush the whack rhyme spittin youths. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ZoSe Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 You tryin too hard Ya not even in my yard take a step back collect then attack son you too hot headed you aint known for shit sayin you crush nigga my shits hotta than Devilush now go run for ya mother so she can write ya next rhyme step up again son, better luck next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GI Jew Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 Oh god, this kids tryin to serve me with haikus ya'll see this, he doesn't open your eyes you're too high fool, I ain't stoned these rhymes you write and ponder will only make you look stupid with your Britney genre don't fret there's always next time last post you came off kinda wack next time come back with some doper lines the bets are on me so save your time typin you're loosin rhyme after weak rhyme like you're some tryin kid findin a word to rhyme in you're next verse it'll be worse than the last people'll think you're comin off tight but they got their chains yanked you thought you were e-cool but you can die homo ok thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Rage- Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 *golf clap* ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GI Jew Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 shit, (every other kuss word), hoe, nigga, eminem, mom & mother, ... I'd like to apologize to Jesus for being so cliche. I'd also encourage the readers of this post to apologize to Jesus as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ZoSe Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 you kicked my ass i bow down to your insane skills tell your mother i said hi, and you should thank her for helping you type that up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GI Jew Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 haha, thanks mom!! edit: and good job Zose for puttin up a fight and bein a good sport. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nomadawhat Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 Originally posted by diehomokthx shit, (every other kuss word), hoe, nigga, eminem, mom & mother, ... I'd like to apologize to Jesus for being so cliche. I'd also encourage the readers of this post to apologize to Jesus as well. i'm sorry jesus, for diehomo's clicheness...... i hope he hasn't ruined your upcoming birthday party for you or the rest of us.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GI Jew Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 Thank you brother. Amen to that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kr430n5_666 Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 My queen I only wish my song to please thee I wish to be the minstrel in your gallery I wish to be the minstrel in your gallery Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest uncle-boy Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 yo yo yo check it one two three fi, fy, foe, fum intangible fame, get one stink bum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest socrates Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 I'm drunk...yeahyeahyoyo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WhAt_dA_fUcK Posted December 18, 2002 Share Posted December 18, 2002 and yet you posted exactly on 4:20 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~KRYLON2~ Posted December 19, 2002 Share Posted December 19, 2002 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest 455 Posted December 19, 2002 Share Posted December 19, 2002 alright......I'm really not into"key-styleing" much.....but whatever.... this is some more off the top head rap I release Rage without his "golf clap" bring it back to the essense check the lessons I manifest my tribe is on a quest to catch wreck when needed aye yo,I don't smoke the izm so in other words I don't get weeded but still I proceeeded to give props to last night 12oz crew I thought you knew I drink alot and hook up my homie with old school hip-hop cd's to rock in his bar you get played like strings on a guitar with the "keystyle" melody so what the fuck you tellin' me I'm not worried about skills sooner or later I'll stack Bills like Bellamy yo,this mc will never sell out and if said I would then you don't know what you're talking about I got mad clout around the city I dwell rocking the bells just like LL Cool J I give pr's to 2 man TJ with the Terminology dropping science on the alliance wide open like a frog in biology class think fast before you crash like a computer with a slow modem 455 flowin' on some type the words through keys shit drunk as hell but not trying to come with weak shit K I roll Solo on a "sneak tip" so peep it...... one love to ALL the 12Prophets on here and checked out this thread...even those who didn't reply.....what's up to you anyway......see ya.....NIGHTOWLS....bent like a fender..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GI Jew Posted December 19, 2002 Share Posted December 19, 2002 !Word! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest 455 Posted December 19, 2002 Share Posted December 19, 2002 Originally posted by diehomokthx !Word! thanks.....I liked what you and Zose wrote earlier.....later bro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devilush Posted December 27, 2002 Share Posted December 27, 2002 Originally posted by ZoSe You tryin too hard Ya not even in my yard take a step back collect then attack son you too hot headed you aint known for shit sayin you crush nigga my shits hotta than Devilush now go run for ya mother so she can write ya next rhyme step up again son, better luck next time. hahah whoa. i'm hotter anyways. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
villain Posted December 27, 2002 Share Posted December 27, 2002 all this ill rhymin it's time for a rewindin to the beginin origins the abyss of sin where light came to distrupt the chaotic flows from my lips these sneak tips shooting from the hip best not slip on this long strange trip on the wild side you know your in for a ride but when you hope done died your life you said you had you lied why you even want to try caught up in this madness whilein out w/ a badness you can only be fiilled with sadness for your doom in near your destiny is clear when i come from the rear you wont have time to shed a tear for your sorry ass you just passed go surely you know by now it's not who what when where why how but it you the sacrificial spit for the sow try trippin my holy cow sacriledge and desecration the destruction of holy sacred sanctitude the rudeness your dude ran off in search of bliss your alone now with me you try to see but it's none to clearly to percieve is to overstand but you have left matters in my own hands Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest angry xbox Posted December 27, 2002 Share Posted December 27, 2002 freestylekingpromaster ciphering nigga!! aight get down is alright you try to act tight the liqour got you loose you bangin fat nasties in the caboose welcome to reality feeling free flow pour out of me not scientifical rather intellegent eat shit and suck dissedence i dont want your lame repentance im serving you as the entree your time expired yesterday so quit whining and find a job get off my couch you lazy slob no more popping off from your mouthpiece cause im choking with old navy fleece Im watching you suffocate then profusley i masturbate while taking a shit the size of missouri now expect a large snow flurry my vision is blurry i need my midol oh nevermind al yankovic is my idol clone a damn human?!?! STOP playing god our lives are worth less than flaud shit fuck poop I had no beat to do it to PASSING THE MIC!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest mikro137 Posted December 27, 2002 Share Posted December 27, 2002 mikro is busted like fat of the land im here being gay tring to understand why yall think youre thug poets i straight only drink moet im mad ill funky now its time to show it get off my balls i cant breathe like cher's music video do you believe that ive sunk down soooo far and soon ill be hammered at the bar im tired , because i dont ever sleep trying to hear harrisons guitar weep representitive of the area known as 412 still underground not pop like dj clue best get it right dont tangle it because when the arn siddy is in the house you know we gonna mangle it. im done , im now officially a homo-tard. :king: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest L.A. Posted December 27, 2002 Share Posted December 27, 2002 http://www.multied.com/20th/images/1st-place-trophy.gif'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest angry xbox Posted December 27, 2002 Share Posted December 27, 2002 attention captain... what be happening I think we are gonna need a new thread Cause all yalls style is dead You tried to break bread but instead got my fist of word fury upside ya head dont try to bust back with a battle retort i wrote this down and i wear the crown call me the original cyber King My comp box is like bling bling neon kitted out no doubt im creepin through we woods like a boy scout fishing for trout better yet i meant pussy epimping off of face the jury I got mad hoes half my age bitch get on your knees and be my sex slave much like you other lame 12oz emcees so please quit trying to ride these Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiKe7 Posted December 27, 2002 Share Posted December 27, 2002 im sorry grasshoppa you must practice and learn..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
villain Posted December 27, 2002 Share Posted December 27, 2002 this fool trying to claim the first but he done crossed the worst cause when i bust the verse he'll go back across the turf and he cant have no static that's why he's here alone busting off nerfs word to the earth i stake my flag in contest of you cause you tried to claim what is not rightfully yours just because you walked through the open doors don't mean you were invited the fury you incited must be revised and rewrited cause it's to ill for tv as you can plainly see i'm burstin at the seems waiting to smoke niggas pipe dreams cause you on a lean comesideways through a maze of highways and byways thought you caught me off guard but i'll boot your ass 100 yards for that field goal and blow a hole clear through your soul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
villain Posted December 27, 2002 Share Posted December 27, 2002 what's this xbox you trying to dis me indiscriminantly your worse than the man see get smoked like trees and the plans you had for world domination only bring iration and hatred for the entire nation we suffer in your name while your the one to blame giving it all up for the fortune and the fame but beneath it all your just another fucking lame it's really a damn shame but i got something that will tame that flaming homo ass o passion you got ration you out condoms with holes cause your about to blow like a bomb collapsing a rhombus of pure math the wrath is everlasting as man exists but once it's over once and for all who's left for you to get pissed.... yourself you just dissed and you wont be missed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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