Poer...Yac Posted June 14, 2001 Share Posted June 14, 2001 "gecko's" http://www.poeryac.homestead.com/files/geckos.jpg'> some bombs http://www.poeryac.homestead.com/files/hugethrows.jpg'> http://www.poeryac.homestead.com/files/throws.jpg'> "renz" bomb http://www.poeryac.homestead.com/files/renzo.jpg'> "yac" by poer http://www.poeryac.homestead.com/files/newershit.jpg'> yeah i know my shit aint great....but if you could give me some criticism besides sayin im a toy it would be much appreciated...thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dead people rule Posted June 14, 2001 Share Posted June 14, 2001 it's really too bad cuz all I can think to say is.....you're toy! go straight letter, work with bars, do drugs and have sex. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest mopius Posted June 14, 2001 Share Posted June 14, 2001 i sure hope that one bomb doesn't say FOE....go simple please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teister Posted June 14, 2001 Share Posted June 14, 2001 just keep working. Do simples and figure out letter construction and formation. then try some crazier stuff and work into it. Work with the simples and figure out some dope fills. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazy Gringo Posted June 14, 2001 Share Posted June 14, 2001 eat poo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
komes Posted June 14, 2001 Share Posted June 14, 2001 just keep practicing, it's all about dedication. and don't step on any ones toes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest --zeSto-- Posted June 14, 2001 Share Posted June 14, 2001 I'm not gonna touch the sketch... but on the last one you need to have some background. The 3D on the last letter isn't even. Mostly.. just practice, and cover the background!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FRAME-TOWN Posted June 14, 2001 Share Posted June 14, 2001 dont even bother you suk.......... {haha jeter bringing the negetivity} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
epic787 Posted June 14, 2001 Share Posted June 14, 2001 yo take your graff a little simpler. once people start saying your stuff is hott, take it to the walls!!!!! ------------------ la familia del graffiti Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TeckFiftyOne Posted June 14, 2001 Share Posted June 14, 2001 I think that I can draw better with my left when I am wacking it with my right.Just kidding!!!!... Oh......wait, you know what is with that sketch. Any ways keep it simple untill it's so dope you can't stand it and you have to get jiggy with it. ------------------ "Is it better to be known as a Toy, or not at all." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
satellite Posted June 14, 2001 Share Posted June 14, 2001 on the last one [yac http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb//tongue.gif'>oer] the y isn't very well defined, and the c looks like it could be a 'z'. and yes, the r in the renz bomb looks like an f. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theFUME Posted June 14, 2001 Share Posted June 14, 2001 i thought that "y" was An S ------------------ "So analyze me surprise me but cant magmatize me" -nas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theFUME Posted June 14, 2001 Share Posted June 14, 2001 i thought that "y" was An S ------------------ "So analyze me surprise me but cant magmatize me" -nas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poer...Yac Posted June 15, 2001 Author Share Posted June 15, 2001 thanks for the response keep them coming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oddity Posted June 15, 2001 Share Posted June 15, 2001 yeah, in the last one the y looks like an s and the c looks like a g. sag.. haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Mac Posted June 15, 2001 Share Posted June 15, 2001 eeeerrrr What? Peace Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poer...Yac Posted June 17, 2001 Author Share Posted June 17, 2001 keep the responses coming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Munk Posted June 17, 2001 Share Posted June 17, 2001 I'm just looking at the last one - where the top of the Y (swear it's an 's') drops over the bottom, you need some sort of shade/definition - you lost your depth there. Same with the top of the 'a'. It's nice, it's simple - I like it. But, hey- what do I know? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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