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damn you why cant u shut the fuck up i posted this just to get some help oh and never compare me to a writer that is writing for 15 years or whatever i aint virus and i m not biting him so fuck you

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hmmm, cant really leave any specific advice, you just need to practice, practice, practice. However, maybe u should try simpliar lettering structure for now, cos I think that is your downfall.

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there is'nt any that is what i m trying to start

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im not gonna criticize you about your name.... im tired of that crap. but the sketch has its share of flaws. you need to make sure everything is in porportion with everything else. some of your letters are fatter than others....some things are too elaborate....and some things are just crooked. marvin's head is a circle shape....your sketch of him looks like an oval to me. youre not gonna get props by using the name virus, but just practice more and maybe you'll come up with something nobody has seen before. maybe sumthin like that will get you more respect. keep posting nonetheless. laters.

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I FIALY FOUND A NAME NO ONE HAS IT IS "ZARKA" BUT I STICK TO VIRUS IT IS MY CAPOEIRA NICK AND MY FRINDES CALL ME THAT CUZ I M ANOYING LIKE A VIRUS

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what's up whit u all u dont want to tell me opinions cuz of the nick?!

well i m wating for coments

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Guest TresOne

-Straighten the letters out, to start off with.. it'll give it a little unity that way.

-Lose the arrows and and plateaus on the 'v' and the 'r'

-stick with simple letters, and practice like mad.

-leave the characters out until the letter structure is better. Having characters doesn't necessarily make a peice.. it adds, but isn't be be-all and end-all of graffiti.. the letters and style are.

-be original

-practice

-practice

-practice

-practice

-etc...

-keep posting

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these r sketches i got in my computer i got beter ones and simpler but my scanner is dameged so i need to fix it and ill post some more

i like to poast but it sucks the second i put somthing here evreybody becomes aginst me cuz of the name.... i dont want to change it

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Everyone is going to be a little apprehensive about your chosen name, just as they would if i chose to write Zephyr or Dondi, etc..

Keep the name if you want, but practice and work on your style.. if you come up with an original style, and a good one at that, then who knows, maybe the name won't matter as much...

 

 

*edit*

I'd bust up my own ass if i tried to write Zeph or Dondi.. :beat:

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Hey dude im a beginner to i get lots of shit. Dude all i say is work at it. Im just learnign also so if u want to e-mail me we could talk and shit. But what i can say is what mostly everyone said... go back to the basics. Basic lettering like bomb style shit. Thats alll im doing now is just basic shit. So if u want to mail me go for it.

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yo aint gonna bitch at u bout ur sketch, but if uz new to the scene u gotta start developin your letters and style. it looks like ur tryin just a lil too hard, some of the shadowin and proportions of the letters are off....

ive only been writin for like 3 or so month but i write hardcore (like everyday for hours and hours... haha especially in skool). but yo u seem to have some talent in u. keep up some practice and bout ur name.....

i can see y u wanna rep virus, but yo think about it. if ur gonna paint that somewhere, u dont wanna get caught. Since its ur alias and if u paint wit. If every1 calls u virus AND virus is already taken and nowhere near original, then u might want to switch it up.... "zarka" ? i mean if u wanna write that word, then go ahead i aint gonna say nothin witout seein it, and i mean i dont really like to write the same letter more than once in a work (zArkA), and it might not be the best to start wit, try to maybe make someother name wit the k and the r and a and z or something if u want, just keep at it. Keep it real and one day itll all pay off. dont let this shit get to ur head.... BUT YO IM ME @ tribal2323 on Aol Instant Messager dude. Show me some of your work, i wont be a dick bout it and trash your shit, ill just be real wit u and tell u wat i honestly think.

Damn, i just wrote a lot and i really gotta bounce

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let me be a dick for a second whats herdcore?

about aol i cant talk to with it dosent work on my comp. if u want ill send it to u by e mail just give me ur address

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i guess its funny to you....well im sure youre your own best audience...keep the name, be the fucking clown, just stay the fuck in no mans israel and bomb the desert just dont bring your fucking bitten name and ugly shit to any other parts....and do yourself a favor, pull your head outta your ass.....dumb fuck, go back to simples and stop disparaging loony tunes with your shit renditions.......

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Guest --zeSto--

all I'm going to say...

 

you should have filled in the 3D. Even pencil is fine, but you really should have done it.

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