Mr.Mojo Posted August 22, 2002 Share Posted August 22, 2002 I havent painted anything in a long time and would like some feed back on these new sketches I have been doing http://www.artisdead.org/graff1.jpg'> http://www.artisdead.org/graff3.jpg'> http://www.artisdead.org/lollygirl.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TresOne Posted August 22, 2002 Share Posted August 22, 2002 Shit, i like 'em, but the first one is a wee bit too cluttered for my eyes. ..first..:nut: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest krie Posted August 22, 2002 Share Posted August 22, 2002 i like that girl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EwhORE Posted August 22, 2002 Share Posted August 22, 2002 bleh.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest seno.oner Posted August 22, 2002 Share Posted August 22, 2002 i like em Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CamS Posted August 22, 2002 Share Posted August 22, 2002 i like...style is original or at least i havent seen anything like it...but dope all in its own... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SersOne-NRS Posted August 22, 2002 Share Posted August 22, 2002 k...all i can give ya credit for is the colors and shit....inside the letters looks tight but the letters themself i dont like much really...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest stupid412 Posted August 23, 2002 Share Posted August 23, 2002 i like the gil shes ok..the shadows need some work but i like her.. but the peices are whack...seems like hey have no letter structure or structer at all... JUST MY 2 CENTS ha i cant spell for shit.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Mojo Posted August 23, 2002 Author Share Posted August 23, 2002 Originally posted by stupid412 i but the peices are whack...seems like hey have no letter structure or structer at all... The last one with the girl doesnt actually have any letter structure- I like the idea of messing with peoples heads and them trying to read something that isnt there..... hehehe I guess they dont always work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest --zeSto-- Posted August 23, 2002 Share Posted August 23, 2002 I see what you're trying to do. It takes a lot of skill to pull off that 'classic wildstyle' look. your stuff just doesn't seem polished enough. now where's izzy or zone? now that's so polished it shines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Mojo Posted August 23, 2002 Author Share Posted August 23, 2002 Ok this is all great feedback and as I say I havent done any graff for about 10 years. So what could I do to improve my style? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest stupid412 Posted August 23, 2002 Share Posted August 23, 2002 The last one with the girl doesnt actually have any letter structure- I like the idea of messing with peoples heads and them trying to read something that isnt there..... hehehe i think you sorta missed out on what i said.. first i said every peice had litle or no structure and not just the girl peice.. sure there almost appealing but no structer at a glose look.. and again JUST MY 2 CENTS! draw letters first and then try to add in curves or arrows or whatever... post a black and white flick and youll see it better... you cant hide a goofy style in a good color scheme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Mojo Posted August 23, 2002 Author Share Posted August 23, 2002 OK. maybe I am just getting old but I just cant see where Im going wrong??? http://artisdead.org/bwpiece.jpg'> http://artisdead.org/pencilsketch.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest stupid412 Posted August 23, 2002 Share Posted August 23, 2002 in my opinion letters are the first thing i look at.. im a letter nazi... here are letters.. http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00228910f00000044.jpg'>eyris by prism (that in my opinion is letter quality) you put in 5 min of work look what you can do.. your letter quality isnt really there.. maybe your not looking in the right place or maybe im just a stupid little kid.:confused: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Mojo Posted August 23, 2002 Author Share Posted August 23, 2002 Ha Ha Ha. No, I appreciate your help and when compared to the pic you posted I can see a difference. Can you suggest some other writers in a similar style that I could take a look at? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest stupid412 Posted August 23, 2002 Share Posted August 23, 2002 ecce i comend you on your stencles.. i like them alot maybe you can help me out with them... just start out with a real basic style...then gradually add on.... this is a good site ive learned alot from... www.mikrone37.com its in the process of a big update so check back ( a good example and writer i look up to for stuff like that is cres, check him out) if you have aim i have some cool examples stupididiot865 ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Mojo Posted August 23, 2002 Author Share Posted August 23, 2002 Thanx. I will check them out. I have been doing stencils and stuff for aout 2 years but have been taking it serious the whole time and really trying to push it. Im only just starting to layer the colours. What would you like to know about them? There is a good stencil tips page at - http://www.happyfeettravels.org/Stencils/HowToFAQ.html This is good to get you started There are also some good tips in the 'stencilling 101' thread in the yard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrMajicMarkker Posted August 23, 2002 Share Posted August 23, 2002 does anyone else notice how nice everyone in this thread is?im sorry, but i just have to throw in "YOU ARE A TOY!" "YOU SUCK, GO PAINT FAG!"......but i think old dude has potential. keep at it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~DeNtOnE~ Posted August 23, 2002 Share Posted August 23, 2002 im with you ditto, he has alot going for him he just got a aussie type style not realy true to the letters... look at old school new york shit.. you will see how every letter has same fetures (sp):D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Intangible Posted August 23, 2002 Share Posted August 23, 2002 Originally posted by stupid412 in my opinion letters are the first thing i look at.. im a letter nazi... here are letters.. http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00228910f00000044.jpg'>eyris by prism (that in my opinion is letter quality) you put in 5 min of work look what you can do.. your letter quality isnt really there.. Im going to agree with this, because I have seen those letters drawn, and Ive seen people try and paint those...and from what ive seen they come out looking wack as fuck....unless you have can control, and have paint experience of course... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Mojo Posted August 23, 2002 Author Share Posted August 23, 2002 OK so I took some advice but went a little crazy on the arrows. Apart from the arrows - is this getting better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest drunken phil Posted August 23, 2002 Share Posted August 23, 2002 Originally posted by krie i like that girl her hand is broken, get a doctor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Mojo Posted August 27, 2002 Author Share Posted August 27, 2002 I think I will stick to stencilling:o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
el nervo Posted August 27, 2002 Share Posted August 27, 2002 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beaucou Posted August 27, 2002 Share Posted August 27, 2002 cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Stapler Posted August 27, 2002 Share Posted August 27, 2002 Re: im with you Originally posted by ~DeNtOnE~ ditto, he has alot going for him he just got a aussie type style not realy true to the letters... look at old school new york shit.. you will see how every letter has same fetures (sp):D What are you talking about you obviously have never seen true Australian old school. People from Australia were busting up new style and letters for years..............I cant be fucked but if you find a page look for Puzzle, Merda, Peril, Tame, New and alot of other writers. Dont hate on a scene unless you understand it.................... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Stapler Posted August 27, 2002 Share Posted August 27, 2002 Do a tag on paper with a 8mm Posca and then proceed to get another bit of tracing paper and trace it. Then add stuff ie: points and arows etc. That way you should be able to keep a good letter structure and get a bit of style into it. I like the charectors by the way..................How long did you graf for in Sydney???? I am from Melbourne Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morphius Posted August 27, 2002 Share Posted August 27, 2002 Re: im with you Originally posted by ~DeNtOnE~ ditto, he has alot going for him he just got a aussie type style not realy true to the letters... look at old school new york shit.. you will see how every letter has same fetures (sp):D Aussie style, yeh good one mate HAHAHA have look at this peice it says puzler, notice each horizontal line is really thin, vertical lines are fat, and diagonal lines are even fatter again...look on each letter, the kicks are all the same style as well. http://www.graffiti.org/escapism/images/106-21.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Mojo Posted August 27, 2002 Author Share Posted August 27, 2002 started writting way back in 87. Havent done any pieces since 92 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Stapler Posted August 27, 2002 Share Posted August 27, 2002 Have you got any old flicks lying around????? If so scan them and post them up I would like to see some old Sydney stuff. And if you were better when you first started writing then you should look at your old stuff and practice it a bit again. And thanks Morphius for posting that pick it shoves the truth up that ignorant fuckers asshole.............. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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