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Guest stupid412

that s is hideous...

not enuf structure for how complex it is...

just my 1.5 cents....

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Guest Ser3adc

yea...third one is the best...i'm feelin the colors...not so sure about the letters:o

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Guest tears*uno

i like them but those letter forms arent the best they could be

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Guest seno.oner

ya theyd look better if you tweaked the letter form a litle bit more....keep at it

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3rd ones alright. keep workin on your letters and connections.

 

 

 

the 4th one though.....pink, yellow, and green????!?!?! YUCK!!!

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NO YOU FUCKING ASSHOLE! IF YOU KEEP GOING THAT GAY DIRECTION YOUR SHIT WILL LOOK LIKE MAKROS. DONT FUCKING MAKE A LETTER WITH A BUNCH OF STRAIGHT LINES, TWO YEAR OLDS CAN DO THAT SHIT. WHERES THE FUCKING FLAVOR I ASK YOU, WHERE IS THE FUCKING F-L-A-V-A.

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Numero tres is ok. The rest. Blah. This is how bored I am???? Commenting on paper...ahhhhh!!!!

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Guest krie

those are ill.

keep it up man

lovin the colors u put in to it as well

 

wuts the word u done on some, cese ?

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Originally posted by FUBU YAMAKA

NO YOU FUCKING ASSHOLE! IF YOU KEEP GOING THAT GAY DIRECTION YOUR SHIT WILL LOOK LIKE MAKROS. DONT FUCKING MAKE A LETTER WITH A BUNCH OF STRAIGHT LINES, TWO YEAR OLDS CAN DO THAT SHIT. WHERES THE FUCKING FLAVOR I ASK YOU, WHERE IS THE FUCKING F-L-A-V-A.

 

oh please u got fubu in ur name and ur talking about flava...

 

 

my best advice to u is work out ur proportions within the letter forms and keep it more simple also incorporate some curves in ur style u seem to have ur demensions down just keep at it.....

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the second one is the only one with an alright letter structure... but the color scheme in the third one is nice... try to blend those two together...

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