excess Posted July 30, 2002 Share Posted July 30, 2002 here you peeps go. http://geocities.com/excessoneroks/bazikstylekaraktor.jpg'> http://geocities.com/excessoneroks/karactorpiece.jpg'> http://geocities.com/excessoneroks/karaktorone.jpg'> that should work but if it dont the hit up this sitehttp://geocities.com/excessoneroks/index.html if this dont work then i fucking give up. one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legal Speed Posted July 30, 2002 Share Posted July 30, 2002 first.. xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swif1 Posted July 30, 2002 Share Posted July 30, 2002 first picture: exas? <--doesn't look too bad. character's ear looks deformed. crushed can looks ...ugh. second pic: can't see worth poop. character need to be whited out. third picture: ...i would like to see your handstyle since it was cutoff. work on your letters, m8. word, man, word. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eseLokE1uno Posted July 30, 2002 Share Posted July 30, 2002 your almost there on characters you just have to work on the areas of where you shrink and blow up parts(perspective?). like the 2nd dudes arms look 2 small, the can looks like a tube of toothpaste. your letters are alright they just need to be polished (do them over in pencil)/ and that third dudes stomach is sticking out 2 much. But it's not bad you got skill you just need more practice/ peace- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
excess Posted July 30, 2002 Author Share Posted July 30, 2002 that first pic says excess the can is supposed to be some srt of s. ill put up some hand styles and other shit when i get them scanned. one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cazper Posted July 30, 2002 Share Posted July 30, 2002 was feelin ur 3rd character's face to death and his body features were overdone in most parts, ur letters suck.......ur characters faces are fresh....so just work on ur characters and forget letter graffiti cuz ur skills is obviously in characters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arson.85.ATG Posted July 30, 2002 Share Posted July 30, 2002 um..its aight...ur characters is ok i guess cause mines suck...but ur skills is ok......i think i like ur writing style considering its similar to mines...peace Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yoink Posted July 30, 2002 Share Posted July 30, 2002 --in my opinion-- i actually like the third char's exaggerated body, it looks comicy, more cartoony manga than anything....but then the face just dont fit...it looks like a simple like -boom- char face with a dif body on, that doesnt mesh (cause all the muscles and veins and segmented pieces) the others are ehh..keep working;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest melt Posted July 30, 2002 Share Posted July 30, 2002 i cant see them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
excess Posted July 30, 2002 Author Share Posted July 30, 2002 yeah im feeling the critism i know the graff in that first one was kinda wak its a new style i was working on, the second piece is actually better ill clean it up and repost it anyways heres a piece i had lying around shortiez krib(she the one with the scanner)it got some handstyles and the graff is better,lemme know what youse think.http://www.geocities.com/excessoneroks/exkaraktor.jpg'> thanks again for the critism. one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cazper Posted July 30, 2002 Share Posted July 30, 2002 that last 1 u posted is mad dope.....the S on the left isnt that great but everything else is bangin, very nice shading and everything on the character Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
excess Posted July 30, 2002 Author Share Posted July 30, 2002 umm... thats actually supposed to be an e i just put some design under it....damn...i really wanna give you heads some of my better graff shit but i dont have none with me right now..ill post some shit tomorrow but in the meantime keep the criticism coming im loving that shit,id be happy if i come back tomorrow and see 20 replies telling me i suck ass-that shit pushes me and since i aint got noone to battle around my work schedule thats all i got. peace. and im out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheps Posted July 30, 2002 Share Posted July 30, 2002 Thats a pretty tite character in the first one. -A Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest stupid412 Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 yo peeps heres tha flixxx.. uh those are bad... looks like a bad bite off an anime charecter... but why do you talk like your some goofy ass thug, its so lame Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
excess Posted July 31, 2002 Author Share Posted July 31, 2002 Re: yo peeps heres tha flixxx.. Originally posted by stupid412 uh those are bad... looks like a bad bite off an anime charecter... but why do you talk like your some goofy ass thug, its so lame ah man did i actually sound like im some some goofy ass thug ..damn.fuck it. yo lemme ask you something stupid412 how come i looked through this forum and i only see you talking shit shit and uploading other peoples shit?im not saying nothing but hey, i just wanna know. anyways for the other heads in here i said id post some graff shit but i didnt bring none with me i just got this i did for this clothing company at work today today(its called king of new york if you cant guess) and seeing as to how i havent submitted it i thought id put it here instead. lemme know what youse think. http://www.geocities.com/excessoneroks/kingofnewyork.jpg'> im out one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest stupid412 Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 heres why heres why... its not that im a hater..i only say stuff to people who are bad i dont feel like complementing them..i complement them in my head sure, and make note that yes they are good....but only do i post somthing when i feel somthing honestley has no/little quality.... if youd like to see my stuff ask... or ask for advise sure.... but other then that im just to lazy to tell people there good unless i really feel it...other wise i only post when i feel somthing isnt worth a thread to themselves.... the philosophy of my 2 cents peas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
excess Posted July 31, 2002 Author Share Posted July 31, 2002 go ahead and drop something then.. im really curious as to how nice you really are after your last post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest stupid412 Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 hola folks... sry this is busted i was doin an excess peice but spelled it wrong... http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00228910f00000022.jpg'> 10 min of muck... just some busted quick excuse for a thing... ya:o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheps Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 ^^I wish I could do sumthin that good in an hour. :lol: -A Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
excess Posted July 31, 2002 Author Share Posted July 31, 2002 gee, im impressed for a sec there i thought you didnt write and was all talk. but hey you proved me wrong and since you drooped my tag i thoght id drop yours in another ten or so mins(i wrote stupid 142 since i dont know what you really write) its a bit sloppy but i was in a rush na mean. here ya go. http://www.geocities.com/excessoneroks/stupid142.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
excess Posted July 31, 2002 Author Share Posted July 31, 2002 damn i was hoping someone would post a reply before i went to sleep but i guess its not happening. and whatever happened to the critiques yo?i was loving that shit. one. im out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swif1 Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 Originally posted by stupid412 http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00228910f00000022.jpg'> no bad. is that supposed to be a K or an X? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
•nakone• Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 gettin better.. i like that last character by the way.. you know who has the 12oz journal? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avils Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 Originally posted by stupid412 hola folks... http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00228910f00000022.jpg'> Originally posted by swif1 no bad. is that supposed to be a K or an X? are you kidding me ? my four yr old nephew could burn that with his crayolas... fuck me. :spent: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest stupid412 Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 ya isnt that sketch greeeaaat... ya its very beat... its not my style not even y leyters just was trying somthing new... and as for your 4yr old sister kid...you post somthin that says ekses excess acksess whatever... oh and excess that last pic you posted was an x.. im drawing another ekses thing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest stupid412 Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00228910f00000023.jpg'> hey cheps... i was gunna bite one of those "spray cans" that are on your thread but... nahhhhh...maybe its just not my style... wish i could draw one of them in ten min.. peace.. ya that one might have been worse...kinda uneven its 8 somthin am im ging back to bed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest stupid412 Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00228910f00000024.jpg'> busted... ill get back to yous Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eseLokE1uno Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 that breaker is pretty tight, but why is he naked? couldn't you gice him a wife beater and some shorts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swif1 Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 Originally posted by •nakone• by the way.. you know who has the 12oz journal? if you're talking about the one i started, sneak sent it out to zesto. we just have to wait until zesto gets the book so he, and canadiano, can lay a sketch in it...then one of them can upload it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest stupid412 Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 its just to show the form.... not some sicko thing... haha peace Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.