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-sudz-

hey i'm new here....

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work on the letters, work on 3d's and definately work on them colors. It looking nasty like that, colors make a big difference even if your letters are still simple/

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Guest ..oX..

work on some a simpler style, then go back and try that same style... it has potential, its just not executed very well.

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um..well i guess welcome to the forum....ur shits not that great..all i cam say is that its a start..i'd hate to see how u dress in real life cause for one u can't match good colors.......um well werk on ur shit.....ur structure..its aight..but still werk on ur shit...peace:crazy:

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Guest imported_El Mamerro

I really, REALLY like that "E". Your 3D is good too, except with what happens with that loopy thing on your "S", and maybe the belly of the "a". You have a lot of room for improvement, but you suck far less than a lot of things I've seen around these parts. Beer,

 

El Mamerro

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Guest WIDOWMAKER

Personally I enjoy tighter crisper lines. Try to write it instead of draw it. Meaning when you write you don't go over the same line a couple times.

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Its not a bad start, better than my shit when i first dropped, extend the ends of that W a lil bit, kinda looks like an N.

 

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Guest 455

jskjgfwUEFkfKFA ;K.............that's what it needs.

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Guest drunken phil
Originally posted by 455

jskjgfwUEFkfKFA ;K.............that's what it needs.

he's got it...kinda

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Guest THEdude

I've seen people post really worst shit, the letters are kinda there, just work on them more, now color, I don't know about color but yeah its kinda dark, work on the force field

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Rouned ends on letters usually (almost always) doen't work.

Try working with corners and right angles...worry about color later.

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