OsCaR306 Posted July 14, 2002 Share Posted July 14, 2002 hey i have been writing for three months and i think its about time for some constructive criticism. my 3d is a little off i know. heres the address http://www.fotango.com/cgi-bin/public_gall...59&index=0&key= . i just want to put this up im guna try and figure out how u can actually have them in the thread. thanks and peace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OsCaR306 Posted July 14, 2002 Author Share Posted July 14, 2002 hopefully this works. btw the pic quality sucks cuz i dont know how tow work my digital camera. http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400144157_001P.jpg'> http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400144157_002P.jpg'> http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400144157_003P.jpg'> http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400144157_004P.jpg'> http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400144157_005P.jpg'> http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400144157_006P.jpg'> http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400144157_007P.jpg'> http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400144157_008P.jpg'> http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400144157_009P.jpg'> http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400144157_010P.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OsCaR306 Posted July 14, 2002 Author Share Posted July 14, 2002 wtf the first three were just working...just click the link i guess... dont leave me hanging here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoEZ Posted July 14, 2002 Share Posted July 14, 2002 dam stright the 3d is way off...just do all the 3d striaght down until you get it...dont put it any other way...just straight down until you know how to do it........and your letter structure isnt that great...but tis only 3 months like you said...so jsut keep working...and dont get into crazy shit yet..um...uhhhh...bye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tears*uno Posted July 14, 2002 Share Posted July 14, 2002 not good at all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cornelius Posted July 14, 2002 Share Posted July 14, 2002 you should learn how to draw first... you know... draw your hand, or your shoe.. try to draw shit like that..... practice all the time, so you can get your pencil control down... how old are you? 13, 14? i'm just judging from that character you drew.... very weak with the pencil... work on it buddy... hopefully you'll get better... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoeHatesCops Posted July 14, 2002 Share Posted July 14, 2002 i know this kid who went to england saw graff on the trains got amped came home went to school started writing,in a bout a wek he had like sick pencil outlines that could burn some heads, his handstyle came in like the next week(his hella tight ones, from the get go they were normal), he has sick throwies, his cahracters are amazing, i dont have any of his shit scanned, my book is at some dudes house, i have some of his shit, this kid is like 9 months in the game, and rocking prisma color like masterpieces, nothing of his is bittten, im straight amazed how ill he is. he is a fucking machine, eat breathe live graff, hes been writing 9 months and he is sicker than like almost all the heads i know and see, to bad he doesnt have ups, actually i hav eno idea what he writes i havent seen him for liek 3 months so he could be , but whatev Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cornelius Posted July 14, 2002 Share Posted July 14, 2002 awesome.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cazper Posted July 14, 2002 Share Posted July 14, 2002 thos pics suck horribly....all ur shit is wack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FROSTY Posted July 14, 2002 Share Posted July 14, 2002 yah you suck.. but youve been in it for 3 months so thats a given. your going way to crazy. just keep the letters simple! stuff will just slowly evolve trust me. you probably look at the colours and the way you cant read everything and think its cool. whell its not you suck practise and dont try and get ahead of yourself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OsCaR306 Posted July 14, 2002 Author Share Posted July 14, 2002 hey thanks..and whoever said r u 13 or 14 just to let u know i am 13. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
porque Posted July 15, 2002 Share Posted July 15, 2002 ...i was gonna guess 8 or nine...but i guess 13 is a bout right...i have no positive comment to state... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swif1 Posted July 15, 2002 Share Posted July 15, 2002 please use basic letter structures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest eleven17 Posted July 15, 2002 Share Posted July 15, 2002 dude........i hate links......peace Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest spec Posted July 15, 2002 Share Posted July 15, 2002 good god, yeah um... that 3d is a bit demented you gotta work on that shit. Here's something that might help, just something like a pile of blocks or somethign and you should get an idea on making things 3d, not a bad beginner exercise, and life drawing helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
serpent of the light Posted July 15, 2002 Share Posted July 15, 2002 umm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mechanism Posted July 15, 2002 Share Posted July 15, 2002 god those suck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElectricitySucks Posted July 15, 2002 Share Posted July 15, 2002 try doing simpler shit first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ser3adc Posted July 15, 2002 Share Posted July 15, 2002 i think we all know that they suck...that's a given...first off you should definately priactice simple letters...and keep the 3d all goin the same way...and also keep the 3d the same thickness...or just dont do 3d at all till you have letter structure...keep sketchin and you'll be aight. peace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrMajicMarkker Posted July 15, 2002 Share Posted July 15, 2002 FIRST OF ALL....you have work to do. i wouldn't worry about the 3d before you get your normal, blocky letters out of the way. just use cereal boxes and shit, and signs and shit, you will evolve on your own. SECOND....half of the guys that are giving you advice and clowning you on here don't know the first thing about writing. the advice they are giving you is the same shit they need to learn. THIRD....keep trying, my letters looked like that when i started, but you should try to meet some writers in your town and just keep sketching. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SayOne Posted July 15, 2002 Share Posted July 15, 2002 damn:D :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OsCaR306 Posted July 16, 2002 Author Share Posted July 16, 2002 thirddegreeburna thats the shit i like to hear, thanks and peace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KillYurSteel Posted July 20, 2002 Share Posted July 20, 2002 well its not good......work with simples they are a whole lot better to start off with well because theyre simples....and practice practice practice....that is all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest fourzeroone Posted July 20, 2002 Share Posted July 20, 2002 can anyone help me out on how i load picks into my message? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest seno.oner Posted July 20, 2002 Share Posted July 20, 2002 eeewwwwwwww Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~DeNtOnE~ Posted July 20, 2002 Share Posted July 20, 2002 wtf? Originally posted by porque ...i was gonna guess 8 or nine...but i guess 13 is a bout right...i have no positive comment to state... how do you get into graff at 13? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ASER1NE Posted July 20, 2002 Share Posted July 20, 2002 i think its funny the way that all toys in the beginning have almost the exact same wack style ......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~DeNtOnE~ Posted July 21, 2002 Share Posted July 21, 2002 ^^^ ya that is odd how do people think graff is all looking like that when they start,, i dont know.. n/m:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Intangible Posted July 21, 2002 Share Posted July 21, 2002 Originally posted by cornelius you should learn how to draw first... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest CRYrock81 Posted July 21, 2002 Share Posted July 21, 2002 Originally posted by ASER1NE i think its funny the way that all toys in the beginning have almost the exact same wack style ......... hahahahahahaha......isnt it the fucking truth....everybody had the same thing going.....you just hid your letters with a bunch of irrelevent branches and a bunch of arrows and let all the kids try to read it at school...haaha......hmmmmmmm i guess its like making fun of another language by mocking it with nonsense...example....you here someone speaking chinese.....and you mock them with ching chong kowasaki or some dumb shit like that....but if you started learning THAT language....you learn there is more to it than wut you first interpreted.....so all toys mock writers with that hideous mangle of branches and arrows.....until they learn there is more to it than meets the eye.....:confused: oh fuck im rambling.........peace Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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