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Guest THEdude

It's all about letter structure cheps.

 

for real work on simples. once you get the letter structure, you can start messing with pieces.

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Guest JoeHatesCops

work on your handstyle cause tis wack

your S looks like an E the style doesnt work, practice practice practice

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go back to more simple styles

 

your letters are out of proportion and your 3D is wrong, all the lines must go in the same direction, unless youre doing the curved look, which you arent

Make it more fluent, stop and look at various points while drawing and concentrate on keeping the letters very roughly the same size

 

Try and make your handstyle flow rather than doing each letter separately

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whooza!!! horrible ill say what everyone else is saying to you work on simples...give it time dont bediscouraged every one has to start somewhere...but not on pieces

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Guest tears*uno
Originally posted by ThirdDegreeBurna

just know that you are not that good, i see you giving advice in other threads...work on your hand, its just fucking gross

 

exactly..

 

that sucks horribly man...keep it way way way wayway way way simple, because that shit is ugly... and dont start a new fuckin thread everytime you doodle something on a paper; put it in your old one or something

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Guest BdMiK

as everyone else already said, work on more simple styles. And your 3D is way off. Peace

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Well, some of you were tellin me to do a more complex one, so I did and threw it down, I know it isnt great.

 

-A

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there you go again....

 

same as last time.....you are wrapping the bottom of the "s" around the "p" just to cover up that empty spot. it swings backward too much....also...try not to go for a wildstyle technique(arrows and blocks going everywhere) and focus on keeping it readable....kinda hard to tell whats what when there are letters of diff. sizes and things running everywhich way from the letters.

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i dont remember anyone saying anything about you going complex....what i remmeber is them saying to keep doing simples and when you get it down move onto more complex shit......your gonna need to do simples for a long time i can kinda tell.....it might sound boring but would you rather get ebtter faster by starting simple....or trying to go all complex and never learning the basics...i made that mistake and then i tryed simples and it worked for me ......your 3d is way off......i dont know how 3d is hard....its the easiest thing in a piece..well i think.....just do straight down 3d until you get......every line...straight down........

 

and i figured a way to get somewhat of a letter form is......think about how many bars there are in each letter....now just draw those bars in the letter for a while.....dont add anything axtra until you can do em straight as hell ok......or just ignore what i said and do what you want.....im out...bye

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true! tis better

 

yo it is better but you still need to work? how long you been in the game? let me guess 6 months or so,, just keep working..

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Guest meone

definitely do wut everyone else is saying and do research look for shit on the internet to see wut is going down all over. the more you look at and alter other peoples styles on your own the better you will get. that helps me a lot. email me and i'll give enough sites to keep you looking for months.

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i remember those days man...just practice alot...look at other writers work also, (dont bite it) just take notice of their letter structure and style. try other styles out and soon enough you will fall into a style that you will be able to call your own...just be patient with it...peace

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Guest ..oX..

a big problem with the letter structure is the angles are going all over the place, they're not consistent, so the lines are just random, all over the map... so yeah work on that... and the 3d... all the lines of the 3d should be going the same direction...

 

keep working on it, you're improving a little.

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"he gets outa the car and takes out his gun, he pointed it at my head my legs started to jiggle so i decided to run"

 

 

like your sketch

 

dont go for gusto when you have nothing

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Thanks for all the feedback people for real. Yea, back to basics I go. I got a writer helpin me out with it, so hopefully things will pick up soon.

 

-A

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