newjersey Posted May 13, 2002 Share Posted May 13, 2002 suggestions... http://www.freephoto-i.net/users/sisold01/skin5.jpg'> post feedback..... please... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SerOneADC Posted May 13, 2002 Share Posted May 13, 2002 hmm...that looks strangely farmiliar...nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
binaryheresy Posted May 13, 2002 Share Posted May 13, 2002 same advice as anyone else will give you... start simple and work your way up. addons should come later after you have the basics of letter styling down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrMajicMarkker Posted May 13, 2002 Share Posted May 13, 2002 correct me if im mistaken, but do i see 4dc on there?don't tell me you are reppin 4dc.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newjersey Posted May 13, 2002 Author Share Posted May 13, 2002 nope adc.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zack Morris Posted May 13, 2002 Share Posted May 13, 2002 i agree witht he simple kick advice. Look at most wildstyles and you will see that the foundation for them is just really trong simple letters. Without a good structure your letters look weak as shit. Keep it simple for a while and you will get the hang of things better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yabityabo Posted May 13, 2002 Share Posted May 13, 2002 why waste our time if you already know its whack? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i'mlost Posted May 13, 2002 Share Posted May 13, 2002 at least you know it's whack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Wilt Posted May 13, 2002 Share Posted May 13, 2002 Originally posted by JumpOffStuff at least you know it's whack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newjersey Posted May 13, 2002 Author Share Posted May 13, 2002 I dont think its that whack. i just said that cause whenever i used to type in how long ive been doing it for.... people are like yo it doesnt matter how long you have been in the game that dont mean antihng.... also im always getten hated on.. i personally like the piece...... and im not sayen its wild style... its just my style.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DEFCON2.0 Posted May 13, 2002 Share Posted May 13, 2002 Jus remember kid ya gotta crawl before ya can walk work on letter style first keep it simple sooner or later you'll see ya self gettin the style element out of it then add effex (arrows,3ds,etc...) keep it up dont take creative criticism as hate take it as new learning from old.....:king: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest --zeSto-- Posted May 13, 2002 Share Posted May 13, 2002 you put a layer of purple all along the bottom, and it makes the white on top feel empty. I order you do use nothing but 1 sharpie (black) 1 sharpie (red) 1 Fine tip Black pen 1 HB pencil real style needs to stand on it's own. Colour is just a bonus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Mang Posted May 13, 2002 Share Posted May 13, 2002 he's not bad. just give him some time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Smok Posted May 13, 2002 Share Posted May 13, 2002 Originally posted by --zeSto-- you put a layer of purple all along the bottom, and it makes the white on top feel empty. I order you do use nothing but 1 sharpie (black) 1 sharpie (red) 1 Fine tip Black pen 1 HB pencil real style needs to stand on it's own. Colour is just a bonus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delta-9 Posted May 13, 2002 Share Posted May 13, 2002 Ya make sure you got some solid letters b4 addin the color...decent but kinda sloppy:huh?: :huh?: :huh?: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rym'N Simon Posted May 13, 2002 Share Posted May 13, 2002 i dont know what the fuck that shit is.....start off basic:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Stoney Blaze Posted May 14, 2002 Share Posted May 14, 2002 not bad. it should look nicer if it was cleaner. add-ons and extentions look better when the letter can be clearly defined. you're gettin' there...keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest -MOE LESTER- Posted May 14, 2002 Share Posted May 14, 2002 i have no idea what the hell that is....just start simple buddy.....that looks like something off of bboys.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newjersey Posted May 14, 2002 Author Share Posted May 14, 2002 i write skin..... and the piece was a double pager..... i fucked up the top portion of it..... so i cut the top of bolth pages off.... so its just like a hanging piece in my book...lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fire crotch Posted May 14, 2002 Share Posted May 14, 2002 imnot trying to hate, but why do people start a thread with a "wack sketch". just doesnt seem logical. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swif1 Posted May 14, 2002 Share Posted May 14, 2002 "whack sketches" are welcome in the "toys post here" thread http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb/icons/icon12.gif'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest CRone Posted May 14, 2002 Share Posted May 14, 2002 Originally posted by fire crotch imnot trying to hate, but why do people start a thread with a "wack sketch". just doesnt seem logical. Why should it even matter? If you are gonna criticize something, criticize the sketch, not the name of the topic. I think the piece is pretty dope if you changed around the colors a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fire crotch Posted May 14, 2002 Share Posted May 14, 2002 u just said the sketch is wack. the title of the sketch says wack sketch. pointers- new color scheme still wouldnt make this sketch dope. at least its an original though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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