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Originally posted by MR BOJANGLES

EHH...how long you been painting? that would make a difference to my eyes.

 

im goin out bomin tonight to get my name known.....and i've been writin for like 3 months

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first off...who cares about getting your name up if you have no letter structure?

 

you need to sit down and work on simple letters. You are trying to go too far too fast. Work on simple letters and straight letters for a while. Rreally nice simples are the foundation for any good wild style. If you yank all the arrows, extentions and the such off of alot of wild styles you will just be left with some really hot simples. I can look at your stuff and tell that you haven't yet mastered and completely grasped the concept of letter structure. Keep working I do see potential.

 

 

also this was in no way meant to be a dis.

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Originally posted by Zack Morris

first off...who cares about getting your name up if you have no letter structure?

 

you need to sit down and work on simple letters. You are trying to go too far too fast. Work on simple letters and straight letters for a while. Rreally nice simples are the foundation for any good wild style. If you yank all the arrows, extentions and the such off of alot of wild styles you will just be left with some really hot simples. I can look at your stuff and tell that you haven't yet mastered and completely grasped the concept of letter structure. Keep working I do see potential.

 

 

also this was in no way meant to be a dis.

 

thx for the feedback and advice

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friendly advice:

 

the first one is pretty ill altogether

although u could've made your spray can (the big red one on the left)

a little better; looks almost like a fire hydrant...

 

the graff in the web is tight idea...im feelin dat...

the cracks in the wall are simple yet effective...

work on ur skulls a lil more...they're not bad, but could b better

also, your microphone seems stumpy..make it more round and full

 

...the second one...:o

compared to the first one...its shit

u've done better man

 

ayy well take no offense in what i say man

i c some good potential

im also in my 3rd or 4th month of writing...my shit is whack

ha...urs pretty tight already; i see some pretty good fuckin potential

keep it man!:p

 

ight peace

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Re: friendly advice:

 

Originally posted by oRiGiNaToR

the first one is pretty ill altogether

although u could've made your spray can (the big red one on the left)

a little better; looks almost like a fire hydrant...

 

the graff in the web is tight idea...im feelin dat...

the cracks in the wall are simple yet effective...

work on ur skulls a lil more...they're not bad, but could b better

also, your microphone seems stumpy..make it more round and full

 

...the second one...:o

compared to the first one...its shit

u've done better man

 

ayy well take no offense in what i say man

i c some good potential

im also in my 3rd or 4th month of writing...my shit is whack

ha...urs pretty tight already; i see some pretty good fuckin potential

keep it man!:P

 

ight peace

 

 

 

 

 

 

this from someone who posted this:

 

 

 

 

 

Originally posted by oRiGiNaToR

http://www.freephoto-i.net/users/illmaticrhymez/AMP%20-%20RaGE.jpg'>

 

fixed it with microsoft photo editor...

 

hit me with some good feedback please

 

aight peace

 

 

 

 

..that's fucking hilarious

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Guest tears*uno

Re: Re: friendly advice:

 

Originally posted by benStein.

 

 

 

 

..that's fucking hilarious

 

 

HHAHAHAHAAHH HELL YES TRAY I LOVE YOU........ ORIGINATOR QUIT CRITISIZING PEOPLE YOUR SHIT IS FUCKING WHACK KILL YOURSELF ...please

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