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A3rk4An3e

beginner sketch

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aight, i wanna talk shit but im gunna be a nice guyand heed some advice...the color is aight...but the letters just look too goth or something...try rokken straight letters first with simple colors...and let style just come naturally...you show creativity but lack skill...not to be harsh but just lettin you know whatsup...keep it in your blackbook till you have something tight and then bomb away...thats the best advice i can give...piece

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just stick to straight letters when u first start out, then once u get those down you can twist em any way u want...i totally neglected straight letters when i first started out and went right to piecing and once i started focusing just on straight letters ive improved all around.

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thats crazy... theres ALOT of space inbetween your too thin lines... just copy a computer font make real simple letters until you understand what makes the letter a letter ....

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TOO FUCKING SKINNY!

Not enough letter structure, either...the way your letters branch off it just looks random...

And chill with the arrows...you don't need to add an arrow to EVERY fucking corner of your letters.

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yeah skinny and random but i admire the attempt at an overall structure with the cross action you have going on. keep working at it!

 

-scienxe

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when you do dis shit, make sure your letters can go together more...like, some parts is too skinny, den some parts is too fat...work on dat...but da color on it's aight...

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alright, since everyone is giving you negative comments...

 

its actually alright, there are some things you need to improve on, but doesnt everyone need to improve on something? The letters are skinny, but if you like it then dont change it...the only thing i would say is to make the two A's skinny also, they are a little bigger than the rest. Maybe just try to let the letters flow into each other more...but its not bad for a beginner...

 

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