Guest HAZER Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 Hey, Ive been taggin for a while now but Ive just started doing sketches and what not. Ima post some of shit on here and I'd like it if I got some critisism. maybe some pointers? anyways: http://www.freephoto-i.net/users/HAZER/HZ.jpg'> ^that'd be my one liner.. it says haze. http://www.freephoto-i.net/users/HAZER/Sob.jpg'> ^SOB, by me. http://www.freephoto-i.net/users/HAZER/blokH.JPG'> ^AZE. Well, thanks for your time looking at my toyish shit ;) Later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CIPHER_one Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 do simples Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T.T Boy Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 haze is taken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fox Mulder Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 you might want to stay in school because i saw a lot of misspellings. and i'm not talking about skool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fox Mulder Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 like hypothosis and bordum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trew Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 haze yes, haze is taken, I just started a thread on here with some of his stuff, its on page 2 right now I think, look it up. Maybe try coming up with a more original name, a lot of writers go through a few names before they settle on one. As for critisizm - as always, do simple letters first. The first sketch isn't so bad. Work on your handstyle, make it flow a little better, try working on a one liner a little later on. And there is just way to much jiberish that doesn't need to be there in the third sketch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Rage- Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 Originally posted by T.T Boy haze is taken. and again and again and again. :rolleyes: Kinda like my name...heh. :o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sekin Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 trying to do a style that isn't yours doesn't really work out. What I got from that was that you need to explore how you do letters. And do the simple stuff first like everyone says. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmeup Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 oneliner..... teeeeeeee hee heeeeeeeeeeeee teaser :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract Rationality Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 My first pointer would be changing ur name...its taken, and very well taken...It's really no big deal since you're just beginning, so exploring with diff names/letters is actually good. To get a name that hasn't been taken is mad hard nowadays, so ur gonna have to go a different route than a common four letter word...and my main advice would be to be patien and climb up the ladder...what i mean is, dont shoot for the cleanest wildstyle at first...try letters, simple ones, paint them, keep sketching and stay patient...it takes even years to develop the right skills to get u out there....originality pays as well..so once uve done immitating a lot of styles, u can add your own contribution...we all bite shit at first, but in the end its what we put into it that makes it our individual style and what not....most of all, dont listen too much at negative shit, only constructive critisism and shit that makes you better..you got two ears so let some shit go out the other one a lot of times...people talk too much shit..period...be safe...gluck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
d-town_bomber Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 change the name youngin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DIO Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 http://members.aol.com/diocrew/dio-1.jpg'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest MR BOJANGLES Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 wheres my "HAZE" t-shirt? you guys are harsh...fuck em. im drunk. westside or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destroyall Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 twist wants his character back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merdle Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 he tagged the lid of someones personal garbage can in a residentail sububrban ally hahaha sweet!!;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eyeBddub Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 You really shouldn't be so specific with your location there 'hazer' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest NATO Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 Originally posted by knowlej You really shouldn't be so specific with your location there 'hazer' ive always like the name saskatoon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elmo_Hope Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 you should stay focused on the academics because all this graffiti bullshit isnt gonna get you too far in life. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeYnO9 Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 yo kid graffiti dont pay no bills, its an form of expression stick with school but fuck the adminstration! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sect one Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 check out the haze thread to see the real haze buddy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest 5th wheel Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 im tired of 8th graders comin on here trying to get sympathy.....im sorry but that stuff is soooo bad....and i dont wanna count how many toys write haze.....keep tryin kid...you gotta loooooong way....and keep your stuff in your black book and don't flaunt around on here about your dope "oneliners?" on your trash can outside your house....i feel embarrased for you....and take peoples advice..and dont think for one second your a "graffer" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sect one Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 you spelled february wrong in your sketch 'febuary' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest L.RonHubbard Posted March 2, 2002 Share Posted March 2, 2002 My first pointer would be only use your computer for homework and porn, but not graffiti. Put the NET down son. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaMeArT Posted March 27, 2002 Share Posted March 27, 2002 no offense dude, but i dont like it. I cant really make out the first haze, and that was kinda...wak. And one last thing, the backwards letters in skool or whatever made me laugh, and so did that fuzzy lookin sketch. i wanted to pat it, coz it looked like a furry kitten.:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Melburnian Posted March 27, 2002 Share Posted March 27, 2002 It's another b-toys dot com King who tried to make in the 12oz world. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest drip one Posted March 27, 2002 Share Posted March 27, 2002 ohee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koala Posted March 27, 2002 Share Posted March 27, 2002 i LiKe TheM dope handstyle 2:p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DankLordz Posted March 27, 2002 Share Posted March 27, 2002 youve got the idea with the 3d in your one sketch.. dont start looping your letters and all that shit around.. seriously though. rock some simple letters. find some simpler fonts, then make them like 24pt. and look at the structure of the letters.. even if you have to copy them at first.. then just throw a 3d on it and do some simple fills. peace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jewish Task Force Posted March 27, 2002 Share Posted March 27, 2002 All good writers start somewhere. At least he doesnt think he is the shit yet. Look at that RaiD guy. Shit I would never post my first piece. I selectivly blocked the memory of what it looked like out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest jeff123456 Posted April 2, 2002 Share Posted April 2, 2002 who cares if haze is taken it doesnt matter... every word u possible can think of is taken... as long as no one in ur city or around ur city has the same word its fine.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.