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Guest HAZER

Hey, Ive been taggin for a while now but Ive just started doing sketches and what not. Ima post some of shit on here and I'd like it if I got some critisism. maybe some pointers?

anyways:

 

http://www.freephoto-i.net/users/HAZER/HZ.jpg'>

 

^that'd be my one liner.. it says haze.

 

http://www.freephoto-i.net/users/HAZER/Sob.jpg'>

 

^SOB, by me.

 

http://www.freephoto-i.net/users/HAZER/blokH.JPG'>

 

^AZE.

 

Well, thanks for your time looking at my toyish shit ;)

Later.

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haze

 

yes, haze is taken, I just started a thread on here with some of his stuff, its on page 2 right now I think, look it up. Maybe try coming up with a more original name, a lot of writers go through a few names before they settle on one.

 

As for critisizm - as always, do simple letters first. The first sketch isn't so bad. Work on your handstyle, make it flow a little better, try working on a one liner a little later on. And there is just way to much jiberish that doesn't need to be there in the third sketch.

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My first pointer would be changing ur name...its taken, and very well taken...It's really no big deal since you're just beginning, so exploring with diff names/letters is actually good. To get a name that hasn't been taken is mad hard nowadays, so ur gonna have to go a different route than a common four letter word...and my main advice would be to be patien and climb up the ladder...what i mean is, dont shoot for the cleanest wildstyle at first...try letters, simple ones, paint them, keep sketching and stay patient...it takes even years to develop the right skills to get u out there....originality pays as well..so once uve done immitating a lot of styles, u can add your own contribution...we all bite shit at first, but in the end its what we put into it that makes it our individual style and what not....most of all, dont listen too much at negative shit, only constructive critisism and shit that makes you better..you got two ears so let some shit go out the other one a lot of times...people talk too much shit..period...be safe...gluck.

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Originally posted by knowlej

You really shouldn't be so specific with your location there 'hazer'

 

ive always like the name saskatoon.

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Guest 5th wheel

im tired of 8th graders comin on here trying to get sympathy.....im sorry but that stuff is soooo bad....and i dont wanna count how many toys write haze.....keep tryin kid...you gotta loooooong way....and keep your stuff in your black book and don't flaunt around on here about your dope "oneliners?" on your trash can outside your house....i feel embarrased for you....and take peoples advice..and dont think for one second your a "graffer"

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Guest L.RonHubbard

My first pointer would be only use your computer for homework and porn, but not graffiti. Put the NET down son.

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  • 4 weeks later...

no offense dude, but i dont like it. I cant really make out the first haze, and that was kinda...wak. And one last thing, the backwards letters in skool or whatever made me laugh, and so did that fuzzy lookin sketch. i wanted to pat it, coz it looked like a furry kitten.:)

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youve got the idea with the 3d in your one sketch.. dont start looping your letters and all that shit around.. seriously though.

rock some simple letters. find some simpler fonts, then make them like 24pt. and look at the structure of the letters.. even if you have to copy them at first.. then just throw a 3d on it and do some simple fills.

 

peace.

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Guest jeff123456

who cares if haze is taken it doesnt matter... every word u possible can think of is taken... as long as no one in ur city or around ur city has the same word its fine..

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