@Ray40 You are getting better. A lot better. But I still say try just writing normal block and bubble letters. How can we ever understand shape and balance of structures if we can just write our name? Here are my thoughts. The circles are the negative space. The R and A have a bunch while the Y has none. Making it off balance. Also the arrows are where I think you could make the have your letters the same height. The R and Y both sit oddly. With the A in the middle of your name you have a good strong letter . It basicly has four corners. Giving tones of options for shape.