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^^^ just read the thread. bars, proportion, structure, flow..
romero- fire. nice defined letters. i see what your doing with the parallel lines, i would overlap the letters slightly
ruck- ehh.. digging the hunter theme but the letters are looking like they fell into routine.
sheen- the bottom one above the 2nd post. i like it. keep sketching man.
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found this gem
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ill just leave this here
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ive been doing this trying to refine my letters individually. so now im on decent terms with my K but i hate the A. any thoughts?
(once again, rough sketch. just trying to get ready for paint)
@galore. looking better, now, i can see where you could add an extention to the tail of the g, maybe bring it up towards the head of it. if you execute it right it could
look natural, i think.
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HAWAE. your name sounds like birthdaysurprisedownsyndromeguy.jpg
sorry. ill start being productive..
kline, keep pacing yourself. looking better
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alts wouldve got mine
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or what if you could hope off that ego, with your mediocre graffiti
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big- are you saying like the one on the left opposed to the one on the right? V V V
(obviously this is a rough sketch, i would clean it up)
thats great advice dude. its so simple but it makes a hell of a difference
propped
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that sketch is dope. nice even bars. our styles have alot of simalrities because of the R and K
i think the R on the painted strait is a little low. looks pretty good though
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real shitty markers at the moment
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i think the A S P is dope. just doesnt flow with the EK well. but yea that k is very solid.
it looks like you so happy with the first letters, you over correct the rest. im speaking from experience. just try to not give a fuck more. you can always start over
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^ seperate the letters on that first one. the rest is terrible dude..
this is dope. that P..
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^^dope but wrong thread
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i would make the spine on the k connected to the right leg, but curve it parallel to the j. and give it a shadow.
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suggestions on the k?
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this piece here is so good, one of the best ive seen here recently for sure.
also, im biting the middle bar of this A ok? haha, dont mean no disrespect dude just trying to see what i can do with it. keep up the good work mate
thanks man. go for it.
and your right about the other piece. i ended up tossing that one
and ears, ill try that. Ks are a fucking nightmare for me. i would change my name if it wasnt so dope haha. got it from raekwon the chef. and the only other raek i herd of are from like the uk or germany or some shit.
@mutant rancor
that embarrasing man, even though it is the internet. aim for bettering yourself.
"I don't know the key to success, but the key to failure is trying to please everybody."
Bill Cosby
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this k is killing me. help me out
i know the R is too skinny
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Lastly it looks like your letters have all sorts of different styles to them. try to give all something a lot more in common. bars bars bars.
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yea just fuckin around really. giving different letters characteristics to "describe" them so to speak. it eventually turned into "lets see how many different styles i can do"
@spawn
RAST?
3ds on point. i would say its structure thats lacking. maybe take a step back, a little more simple. also if your going for symmetry, commit to it. otherwise it just looks.. off.
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your right bigears. Qs and Os are hard to mold
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outta room
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thanks man.
that k is killing me
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constructive criticism will be well appreciated
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i guess its not necessarily bad. i try to avoid that however. to each their own.
i thought the same about the R.
veds im feeling that throw, the left side of the V could be more wide though, and i think the 3d on the strait would look better if the center point was between the E and the D